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It was wonderful full of emotion . 👏 I loved it reyam friendship rockz

👏AWESUME OSREALY LOVED IT . . . .

That was a really good OS...I loved the fact that we got to see the love Sharon has for Swayam and also how much Rey cares for Swayam too !!

himani this os is just splendidly written...i have told on you birthday thread also...you have written it actually so well that i have made to believe that you are one hell of writer...bow down to you for expressing all the emotions in the pitch perfect way...you have lots of hidden personalities i must say...

Now comming back to the os...i am briefing about all the characters firstly...
starting of with rey. you wont believe me when i say but i liked rey most in this os because the way you have written his character just leaves unforgetable effect on this story...one of my favouraite moments in this os is when rey reacts to that phonecall from police about dead body...i mean anybody would have felt like crying at that moment...rey was just brilliantly put on...

now the next one is sharon...she is imaculate in this story...i agree in the beginning sharon was not more but as the story progressed sharon started to grow as a character...and specially two acts were just out of the world first when she responded to first when she heard swayam is missing and instantly she was like nothing can happen to him he will be fine...and the second one ofcourse the confrontation part it was just magical outstanding...

and swayam he was not there in os for most of the parts but still he was able to drive this os...swayam was sololy driving the begining and i was just feeling the pain in him all the way...everything from the way you told his sitting to hitting that tree perfectly explained the hurt...you were just amazing and prolific in the end with swayam's surprised expression when sharon kissed him...everything was perfect...

now the plot and concept were also very good...outstandingly thought dialogues and sequences each everything was brillient...loved the whole os...

i have become an official himani fan after this os...thanks for pm...and i really hope you dont find this comment long and boring...

regards

pratik...

beautifully written the pain and all awesome yar.lovely and thnx for the pm.

Awesome work girl
Loved it too d core
Loved sharon's confession
It was soo touching n extremly perfect

Wow lovely os...i was wondering when r u gng to update it sincei read it last night...amazing ending

Originally posted by: pratik54000

himani this os is just splendidly written...i have told on you birthday thread also...you have written it actually so well that i have made to believe that you are one hell of writer...bow down to you for expressing all the emotions in the pitch perfect way...you have lots of hidden personalities i must say...

Now comming back to the os...i am briefing about all the characters firstly...
starting of with rey. you wont believe me when i say but i liked rey most in this os because the way you have written his character just leaves unforgetable effect on this story...one of my favouraite moments in this os is when rey reacts to that phonecall from police about dead body...i mean anybody would have felt like crying at that moment...rey was just brilliantly put on...

now the next one is sharon...she is imaculate in this story...i agree in the beginning sharon was not more but as the story progressed sharon started to grow as a character...and specially two acts were just out of the world first when she responded to first when she heard swayam is missing and instantly she was like nothing can happen to him he will be fine...and the second one ofcourse the confrontation part it was just magical outstanding...

and swayam he was not there in os for most of the parts but still he was able to drive this os...swayam was sololy driving the begining and i was just feeling the pain in him all the way...everything from the way you told his sitting to hitting that tree perfectly explained the hurt...you were just amazing and prolific in the end with swayam's surprised expression when sharon kissed him...everything was perfect...

now the plot and concept were also very good...outstandingly thought dialogues and sequences each everything was brillient...loved the whole os...

i have become an official himani fan after this os...thanks for pm...and i really hope you dont find this comment long and boring...

regards

pratik...

pratik thanks a lot...am amezd..seriously i didnt expect this...
all i can say is thank you...nd really glad that i hv a wonderful fren like you...:)