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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

but i liked it wen sharon came and slapped him! 😉

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

himani i didnt knew that my words can amaze anybody...but thank you that you liked my comment...and it was my pleasure dear to comment on your work...i am also glad to have wonderfull and multi talented friend like you...you are rocking himani...

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tumdeep

@tumdeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

love it dammed ousmmm 👏keep it up👍🏼 and thanks for pm😃

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tashu20

@tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow...awesome os...loved it...!!!!

plz do write more😊

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

WOW Amazing OS 👏

Loved It 😊

Sorry But Like Button Is Not Working

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

dat was awesm
i luv it

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesome!!!awesome!!awesome!! Himu this os was just brilliant!!totally loved it!

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesome os himu...loved it to the core 😊

Swayam n sharon's pain has been brilliantly portrayed...exceptionally beautiful 😊

Thanks for d pm 😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

m speechless...AWESOME himani...i just loved every bit of it ..the way u played with emotions ...it was intense ...romantic ...romantically intense ...

my fav lines :

what your presense means in my life...why i feel happiest one when i see your smile...why your hurt eyes hurts me more...why i feel your heartbeat here in my heart... Why i feel that i am the pretiest girl when you compliment me...why your touch makes me feel that i belongs to you..why..why...you know...coz ..i love you...yes i love you swayum..

i love ur style of writing ...plz keep writing ...😊

Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

That was an amazing OS Himani...lot of intense SwaRon emotions...but all's well that ends well and that is the best thingabt it...both Sharon and Swayam realistically portrayed and their feelings, esp Sharon's finally got the impetus to cum out in the open ...thatz what the fear of losing a dear one does to u - opens all gates of suppressed fears, apprehensions and luv ...in the case of Sharon here 😊

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