CHENNAI EXPRESS...(KR &SS FF)chap 5 updatd - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

finally swayan and sharon have feeling for each other which they express
on their faces and kriyaansh also like each other but are caught in front of their family...

it get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me

yes they are...

thank u..will contnue and defo pm u ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanchi..

As usual superb update
Luvd it
Dat song sequence was fab
Amazingly written
Sharon kisses swayam dat part was soo cute
Nd kria in rey's arm
Hope swayam nd her dad dont misunderstand her

Thnx 4 de pm

thank u ...

no thanks about the pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Awesome update loved it
The song and the update r mindblwing kriyansh falling in love ahhh that so nyc

But precup trouble coming to the way dekhate hai kya hota hai update fast

thank u ...

will update ASAP...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved it

n Song was beautifully described

UPDATE SOON :)

thank u...

Originally posted by: sumimita

amazing...

tnks for the pm..
update it soon

thank u and yup wil update soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Suni1986

It was lovely update
Sharon peck on Swayam cheeks run away nd after seeing Rey's matureness Kriya going full on lattu on him.
Song seq btw Swaron nd Kriyaansh was fabluous nd both couple madly in love with each other.

Kriyaansh definately can create misunderstanding.

thank u ...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyansh.Pooja

amazing story yar...

loved the way u hv written it...

plz update soon n do pm me...

btw awesome banner...


thank u ..

will update soon and pm u ..

yes its is ..it is done by ishu( -spongy-)...all credits for the beauty of the banner goes to here...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjori_ArSha

such a beautiful update ... !!!!

loved all the scenes of both KriYansh n SwaRon
sooo cute <3 <3
Awesome update
i hope mu zyaada badi na ho ...
thanxx for the PM and update soon
and yaa .. u beautifully described the song di ^_^

thank u ..

don't worry dear it will not be a big MU...

no thanks about the pm and yup wil update soon...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

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unres


nic update...

lovely song sequence...
ncly pended down...

nd rey in big trouble

thank u...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
CH5:SHADI FIX

kriyansh were still in the same position ,swaron and kriyam dad came in and saw them .seeing them kriya straighten herslf and both looked down ,kriyam's dad give them a angry look and left the place without talking anything. swaron went near kriyansh and asked thing about what happend.and kriyansh narated them everthing..

Later kriyam's dady call this four ..the scene was like four of them were standing infornt of kriyam's dad..(reyam one side and krisha other side )and then kriyam's dad had broken the silence. and he said looking at kriya "nan unkal tirumanattai niccayittu(i have fix ur marriage)","yeni ? kalyanama?yenaka?but appa naan oru thappum seyya villai.. neenga thappa ninachuteenga..adi (what?marriage for me?but wrong did i do ?..dad it was just a misunderstanding )"before kriya could complete her father showed her his hand signing her to stop. "eni matter ma discuss panama ennaku virupam illai..and what i said is final..(i am not inserted to discuss on this matter )"saying so kriyam father let the place...krishayam face were filll with sad ness but rey was totally confused about what had happend..as he don't under stand the language.

Few hours later Four of them were sitting in the garden the trio(swaron and kriya )were in dip thought as what to do...but rey has no clue about what happend ...whats happing or what is gng to happen ...he sat there with a confused express..seeing his confused look swayam said.."appa ney kriya ka shadi fix karadi","aur eski shadi us kamina vasantha ke sath hoga ..who is a big goonda here.."sharon completed.rey give them a W*F look and they nodded there head yes indicating that its true "and this is all because of you "kriya said and ran from there..rey felt really sry about this issue and thought that he will not let this marriage happen..he went to kriya who was in her room .she was crying he wen tnear her and .he sat on his knees and held her hands and said"agar meney hi esey bigada hey tho mehi esey tek karunga i promise me ye shadi nah i honey dunga" "sachi ?"said kriya,"muchi"repld rey

soon days passed and marriage preparations started.one day our fantastic four got to know that to see the marriage preparation vasantha's little bro was coming there ." vasantha ka chota bhai yeha aaraha hey aur usey bhi kriya bohat pasand hey .."said swayam.."oh ach tho hum esko use karkey hi shadi ko bigadengey ." said rey "but how?"kriya asked him."sab log pas avo batatha hu.."and rey explain a plain for them

out side the house some one was talking to kriya's pic"what wrong did i do my dear ..why are u marrying my brother..why can't u marry me? u knw i love u so much ...i will never let this marriage happen..i will surely break it and make u mine..ur are only mine..." he said lower the pic revealing a guy a 24 -25 year he was none other than vasantha's brother sumanth . he went in to the house everyone welcomed him ..rey went near him and start taking his special care..but sumanth was an really irritating person .he was always trying to get closer to kriya by one or the other source and rey was stopping him always from that ..he soon became very irritating to our krishreyam so rey made a plain of hitting him hard without getting blamed .and explain it to the trio .and they agreed..
soon it was night and kriyam dad went out of town for the marriage preparations..and our krishareyam went to sumanthto excuit there plan "arey sumanth meney suna hey ki tu bohat acha acting karthey hey ?"said rey ."ah karatha hu u know meney apani ghav me kithaney sarey drama's kiya hey"said sumanth being proud of himself."ach tho ab hum sab ko bhi dhekavo na tumarey acting skills.."said kriya.."ah for sure kriya ..tumeney puch tho how will i reject?tho bahovo tumey kosa drama dhekana?"said sumanth.."hm konasabhi chalega ur wish "kriya said with a wide smile.."okay tho aj hum "AHALAYA BECHARI HEY" wala drama karengey "said sumantha"tho acha eskeliye humey do ladkiya chahi yena ? ek min meabi jakar kise ko dunda key latha hu"said swayam,"arey swayam ahalaya aur bechari dono ek hi hey aur wo bangi humari kriya"said sumanth looking at kriya with big smile."ah okay "kriya said with fake smile on her face.."ye kahani me ahalaya aur gutam rushi dono husand aur wife hey ..aur ahalaya ko god Indra ney pyaar kirathey hey aur ek din unki husand ki tara uskey pas athey hey ...ye hey scene..tho shuru karey?"said sumanth looking at kriya "ek min ab gutam rushi kon banega?"said swayam."rey baneyga "said kriya looking at rey ."ah tek hey"said rey ..
AND THE PLAY STRATS...
REY as GUTAM MAHARUSHI
KRIYA as AHALAYA
SUMANTH as LORD INDR
stay tuned to know more about the drama...there lots of fun coming up...
PRECAP:
AHALAYA BECHARI HEY DRAMA...
aur der sara masti...

i know guys am really very later am really sry about that ..and pls avoid commenting in one wrd or one lines like nice, awsum,thanks for the pm and update soon. such stuff.pls do wrte what u really feel abt this chap..criticisms and suggestions are always welcome ...slnt redear to if possble do comment.pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce typo's...and for pm's add me...
With lots of love,
Renu


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Posted: 11 years ago
Love update
poor kria fas gai

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