Aarya OS - An Undying Love - Page 4

Originally posted by: janedoe2013

oh! so lonely good of a story😭👏

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Jeetu why did you do this yaar.You have written such a nice OS whic was just outstanding but ended it with such sad note...Arti died leaving Yash alone...and the pain is just piercing my heart dear.I will give you all the credit coz your writing was so perfect that it made me feel like this...👏

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

res😊...

Originally posted by: RA17

OMG dear aarya journey from aarya mouth a blissful moment of love yet feeling crying to see how they met n now end up fro this birth his love his aartiji waiting for him to join her where nothing but just thier love will remain to eternitu

beautiful dear loved it

thanks for penning down

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

Jeetu, this is such a painful story😭😭😭...👏👏👏...but still loved it❤️...

just loved the way they went through the memory lane😳..n cleared ..especially that rose shower ...😳😳😃...

yup, aarya's love is UNDYING❤️...n it'll forever remain UNDYING in our heart too😃😃...

thank u so much 😃😃😃..

Originally posted by: Sdaren

Thanks Chitra.

Here is the translation to the poem thanks to a member in this forum.

Chand se chamakti leheron ko chukar
After touching the waves that sparkle with moonlight,
Jo hawa ka jhonka aaya hai
The breeze that has come,
Kitna sheetal hain.
How cool it is.

Naram pankdhudion ko chedti hui
Teasing the gentle petals [on their way],
Jo boondh tapki hain
Those drops that have trickled down,
Kitni nirmal hain.
How pure they are

Tumhare mann se, tumhari khushboo se mehekta
From your heart, fragrant with your scent,
Jo khayal aaya hain
The notion that has come
Kitna madhosh hain.
How intoxicated it is.

Aur mujhe chookar
And touching me,
Tum tak jo sawal pahuncha hain
The question that reaches you,
Vo kitna pyaasa hain.
How thirsty it is.

Kya yahi pyar hain?
Is this love?
Ya ab bhi kisi paribhasha ki avashakta hain?
Or is there still need of a definition?