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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was just thinking about swaron and a few lines struck me out of nowhere I dcided to post them here.They are lame but still bear with me

Khoobsurat sa jahaan
Veeran ho gaya
Chahakta sa samaa
Sunsaan ho gaya

Tanhaai ka ye aalam
tumhaare yaad dilaata hai
pal pal tumse judaai
mere dil ko dukhata hai

kya kya socha tha maine
ki hamaara sapno ka jahaan aisa hoga
maloom na tha mujhe ki
aabad nahi bas ek banjar aashyaan hoga

tumhaari yaadein bhi ab to
maut si lagne lagi hai
tumhaari wo chuppi aur nafrat bhari nigaahein
dil ko chubhne lagi hai

sochta hu ki kya tumhe meri aankhon me
apne liye beshumaar pyaar nazar nahi aata
lekin phir achaanak se yeh samajh aata hai
kahi mai bhi to uska pyaar dekh nahi paata

vishwaas nahi hota ki
hamaari chaahat ki umar itni kam hai
socha tha bas pyar hai
aur hum hai to phir kya gam hai

apni taqdeer par rone ka jee karta hai
par apna bharosa na tootne doonga
itni mehnat se banaaye apne aashiyaane
ko yu bewajah na lutne dunga

kash ye faasle khatam ho jaye hamesha ke liye
aur fir se wo khushnuma waqt hame samet le
bas tum ho aur mai hu aur
ham ek dusre ko pyaar ki chaadar me lapet le



I know this was lame

andaaz and rotten eggs are most welcome

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-Vishaka- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its super amazing one harshu 👏
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
it was awesome harshu di 🤗
btw u also write poems 😲
😆 i loved it a lot 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awsum harshu aapi
I luved it alooot
Very nyc
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Harshuu this is not at all Lame.😲
It is super duper awesome.👏
Loved it.❤️
Kya baat hai, super impressed with your writing skills.⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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harshita
tui cha gaye..
i mean so good man !!!
loved it so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khubsoorat !!
Wow..the words were so so so deep..
AMAZING...!

We'll surely make a poem in collaboration ! Pakka,,cz I wish to make it with u..u r just Out of the world...! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really so khubsurat poem 😊 loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kiddo tu poet bhi ban gayi 😲
Oh god dis was just amazing. .
U call dis lame. .
Freak yeh superb tha. .
Great work. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wao harshita tis poem was charming n lovely
it definitely struck a chord
awesum job !!!! 👏
do write more n dont forget 2 pm me 🤗

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