Mayur FF-Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage#2 Pt-47/143

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Friends I am creating another thread of Mayur FF...

Wow..
it feels so great for coming to the second thread...
It has completed the twenty (20) parts and more are there..

Keep loving me...like this...
so that I could give you more and more updates


Thanks a lot...


Banner Credit goes to :Meee

Credit of the story goes to -MohanKiMeera-(person behind the main concept of this story)
who is my inspiration to this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 21

phir bhi taqdir ne hath kabhi choda nahi
sapane piche chod diye humari kahani ki
phir bhi muqambal ki dastha suni hi nahi
itna bhi humara pyaar kamjor nahi tha
socho vo taqdir kaisi thi jisne humhe milavaya tha

-By Deepa



Life took so many turns she thought.A day ago she was hating Mayank for keeping her in dark , for hurting her , for breaking her unweaved dreams and infact was on the verge of cancelling the marriage and had almost cancelled it ,Mayank and Her's confrontation to Mayank's past and she agreed to marriage just for the sake of her mother having no hope with him and now...

Now they are walking hand in hand , he is giving support to her,giving comfort to her and most importantly he proved to be her savior who had saved her from getting devastated...the one who pulled her back into his arms before her innocence to be snatched from her ...one who had protected her from a wolf wearing human skin...one saves her getting from raped.

She felt herself to be in debt of his kindness...her hundred thank you's will be less to say him...wow what a round turn of life...

They were walking silently...he made her sit in his car and drove towards her home...the journey was still silent..Nupur wants to thank him but she couldn't form words to speak...he stopped the car a liitle before her home to arrive and called her out.

"Nupur.."

She came out of her trance and said,"Huh...Hmm..".

He asked her with atmost care in his tone,"Tum thik to ho na...".His voice was describing how much he was scared to see her like this,he too feared with the thought which she was thinking...she just nodded her head all she could do at that time was this only.He broke his silence.

Mayank: Aisi bhi kya baat thi jo tum itni raat ko usse milne gayi...

She didn't replied to him just lowered her eyes,how can she tell him and that..when she was need of his help he was being in someone's other' arm and now he is asking her reason to be there.

Mayank understood her silence that she is still angry from him regarding the incident happened that day that's why isn't telling him,he has hurt her he knows but now he really want to know the actual situation which led her to went to him

Mayank:Mein jaanta hoon mene galti ki hain...lekin please mujhe batao...

Nupur :Kyu..

Her voice still having the effects of pain.when she need him , want to share her problem with him than he ignored her and felt weak infront of his ditched love and now he is asking her the reasons

Mayank guess was right , she is still hurt ...but now he had to made her understand , had to made her believe that he is with her

Kyunki...kyunki...ab zindagi hume saath saath nibhaani hain... isiliye mein chahta hoon ki tum apni problems apni happiness share karo mere saath...Please.

She thought for a moment and than asked him,"Tum rahoge sunne ke liye"

Without any furthur hesitation he replied to her,"Always..."

Nupur took a long breath and said him,"Mujhe 5 lac ki zarurat hain..."

Mayank:Kya hua..kuch problem..

Nupur:Maa ne humari shaadi ke liye Papa se loan liya aur ab vo Maa ko pareshaan ker rahe hain loan wapis kerne ke liye...

And before she could proceed furthur he completed her sentence,"aur isiliye tum loan lene ke liye Uske ke pass gayi thi.."

She simply nodded her head.Mayank said with a emotion of an expectation."Ek baar mere pass aa jaati.."

Nupur:Yaad karo Mayank...kya mein tumhare paas nahi aayi thi...

Her eyes were full of tears...now he understood why that day she came to him seeking for an important talk, he closed his fist if he would have listened to her that day than today she needn't have to have this.He was about to say something when she said...he made a fist and cursed himself for his deed..and said,"Yaad hain mujhe,mene hi tumhari nahi suni...aur...galti hui mujhse bahut badi galti...ab sudhaarna chahta hoon...Mauka dogi...mein help ker sakta hoon ab..!!!"he completed the sentence with a plead.

Nupur replied to him turning her face away from him," Nahi...Lekin ab nahi...mujhe nahi chahiye koi madad ..Mujhe koi humdardi nahi chahiye...

Mayank: Humdardi nahi de raha hoon..loan ki tarah le lo...

She faced him seeing how he put the idea infront of her:Aur mein wapis kese karungi...ab to mein vo job bhi nahi karungi...

Mayank thought a bit and said,"Mmm..meri company mein ..tum job ker lo..tumhari qualifications ke hisab se tumhe job mil jaayegi..wahan kaam ker ke..loan chuka dena what say..."

Nupur thought a bit and than agreed as this could sound to be safe and sound,"Okay...Lekin...tum mujhe..lo..loan...".

Mayank:Tum mujhe apni bank details mail ker dena mein tumhe tranfer ker dunga...apna phone do..

She gave him her phone and he added his email id in it and continued,"Mene apna email id save ker diya hain ghar jaa ker ker dena.."

She just nodded her head...feeling that the environment between them is getting to normal he said,"Chalo..ab tumhe chod deta hoon mein..".

He moved a little bit near her room window stopped his car there and said,"Lo aagyi tumhare room ki window..".

She said,"Mayank.."

Mayank:Hmm..

Nupur...while lowering her head : Thank you...agar aaj tum sahi time per nahi aate...

Before she could complete Mayank said,"Aisa ab kabhi nahi hoga Nupur...tumhe jab bhi meri zarurat hogi mein vohi aa jauna..tum bulao ya nahi...

Nupur:Kese...tumhe pata kese chalega..

Mayank said while lightening her mood,"Ab to tum do din meri patni ban jaaogi, aur mein itna bhi bewkoof nahi hoon jo apni patni ki choti si choti khabar bhi na rakhoo"

Saying he giggled and she too joined him.After a second he forwarded his hand to her geasturing,"Friends...".Nupur gave a question look to him to which he said,"Ab ab ek anjaane rishte mein judne jaa rahe hain..strangers se acha yahi rahega ki we would be friends , dosto ko samjhna zaayeda asaan hota hain...".

She smiled to him and joined her hands to him which always gives her a sense of belonging but she always denies to it..and said,"Okay...friends...".

Saying she went and climbed up to her window walked inside while he drove back to his home thinking about today...

She reached her room and went to bathroom to clean herself and change so that no one could able to guess, not even Gunjan...she didn't wished to tell all this to her also making her panic...she was seeing her reflection in the mirror..her red eyes...since the redness has been decreased but still has some effects..open hairs and dissheveled suit...

Her eyes fall on the black colured coat she is wearing...her mind took her to the scene where he tok his coat and out it around her shoulder before enclosing her in his arms.She still could felt his warmth inside this court, unknowingly to her a pink tinge appear on her cheeks where her lips form a slight curve...

She came back from her thoughts when she heard a voice outside the bathroom as someone was calling her.It was gunjan..

Gunjan:Nupise...Bathroom mein tu hain..

Nupur:Haan Gunjan.!!

Gunjan:Acha thik hain...

Nupur washed her face...changes into her tee and pj and came outside the bathroom depicting no sign of the incident which took place in the evening...


lakh koshishe hui aapse dur rah ne ki
Kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
Milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
Dil keh raha hai use musalsal kar bhi aao
Wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai


Hope you Like it

I am continuing as still didn't get reply from Mods
Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bohot achcha hai at least now they are friends aur ye tu har baar kaun se reply ki baat karti hai😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

Bohot achcha hai at least now they are friends aur ye tu har baar kaun se reply ki baat karti hai😕


You won't understand...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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that is soo awesome update and wow now your in thread 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update. now atleast they are firiends
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww so sweet update
now nupur gonna join mayanks company to repay loan
yeee thats great
ab 24 hours mayur ek saath rehegi
wah wah wah in dono ki dosti bhi hogayi
pher dosti se pyaar bhi ho jayegi
good going shaffy
loved it so much
keep it up

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautifullly written...njoyed it thoroughly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now mayur are friend
i really loved mayank today

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