Mayur FF-Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage#2 Pt-47/143 - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing,beautiful update.
Lovely one.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update ...very sweet n lovely
Mera mayur kitna acha sa understand karta h ek dosra ko..n sav sa achi bt bohat comfortable h har bt aram sa acha sa karta h...jis k wajha sa koi misunderstanding nhi hti..aisa he relation hna chahiya...itni space dni chahiya ka dosra aram sa har bt share kar ska jo oska dil me ho...
Samrat na kasam ..hayyee mera mayur masom lal lal ho gya..but bohat lovely scene tha..first fall in husband arms
N last nupur n shilpa relation...I soo missed it...thanks for showing us...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Amazing update ...very sweet n lovely
Mera mayur kitna acha sa understand karta h ek dosra ko..n sav sa achi bt bohat comfortable h har bt aram sa acha sa karta h...jis k wajha sa koi misunderstanding nhi hti..aisa he relation hna chahiya...itni space dni chahiya ka dosra aram sa har bt share kar ska jo oska dil me ho...
Samrat na kasam ..hayyee mera mayur masom lal lal ho gya..but bohat lovely scene tha..first fall in husband arms
N last nupur n shilpa relation...I soo missed it...thanks for showing us...
Continue soon


Thank you so much...
Wait and watch
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Posted: 11 years ago


Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage

Part 30

After a time they broke their eye lock..Mayank's hands' were resting on her waist partly touching her skin..which is being partly covered with her Saari..

His heart cursed that Saari again..as always it comes in between and makes his hand's to tremble involuntry..well his heart didn't let this known to his consious...

He made her stand on her heels removing his hands from her's so she does and asked in concern filled voice,"Are you fine..". She just nodded her head and loowered downwards as still the eye-lock they shared was revolving in her mind...so much deep were his eyes...while Mayank too look here and there...wondering about the choloclate brown dove shaped eyes where he had seen a certain depthness..like these eyes want to convey so much to him and he still not getting the passage to enter those eyes and understand what actually they want to say...trying to break this awkward silence between them he said to her,"Nupur ye dekho..yahan per Dad ne humare ye swing bhi lagwaya tha.."

Showing the swing behind them...she smiled to it..and than said to him,"Bahut achi hain...!!"

Mayank:Hmm...chalo ander chalte hain..!!! Ander ka ghar bhi tumhe ghuma deta hoon...!!!

She just nodded her head and he took her inside where Samrat and Suhaani were waiting for them..giggling to them..seeing them coming they straighthen themselves and asked,"Dikha diya Bhabhi ko garden.."

Mayank said coldly:Haan..!!!

Samrat:Mayank tu bhi na...acha ab aisa ker meri aur Bhabhi ki photographs le..I am sure tujhse to ache hi pose doonga mein..

Saying he handed the camera to Mayank and himself took Nupur to the other side of the hall showing her a vase which was placed at the corener and painting behind it.

Samrat:Bhabhi ye pata hain painting kisne banayi hain..!!

Nupur:Kisne...

Smarat:Aapke pyaare patidev ne...

Nupur:Inhone...

Smarat:Haan aapke inhone..aapko pata hain bachpan mein patidev ko paintings of sketching ka bahut shauk tha...bahut banaya hian usne..but ab chod diya hain..

Nupur:Kyu...

Mayank:Mein batata hoon..
Saying Mayank approached to them..

Samrat:Haan haan sun lo..

Mayank:Kyunki...fir mein apni studies mein zaayeda concentrate kerne lag gaya..aur fir jab se company start ki hain khud ke liye hi time nahi milta hain..

Samrat:Vohi to..ab Bhabhi isske khoye hoye takent ko to aapko bahar nikaalna hoga..

Nupur said smiling to him,"Mein koshish to poori karungi...aap madat krenge...

Samrat:Arey Bhabhi kya baat ker di aapke liye to jaan haazir hain...

Nupur:Samrat Bhaiya..bahut zaayeda nahi ho gaya...

Samrat:Oh..Really..!! acha..thik hain..Mayank yaar devar-bhabhi ki photo nahi lega yaar...

Mayank:Haan..mene kab mana kiya hain pehle khud ki to chit chats khatam karo...

Saying he moved infrot of them keeping a little distance and clicked their photo...indeed they made good posses where Samrat was cracking jokes and Mayank captured her laughing photographs.Soon Suhaani joined them...and trio make Mayank to click their photographs..isolating him and they showed her the whole hall and the dining room where they all will seared together to have their breakfast lunch and dinner...After wards..Suhaani excused herself saying she need to do some college assignment,"Acha mein assignment khatam kerke aati hoon fir mein bhabhi ke saath khoob saraa time spend ker sakungi.."

Samrat and Mayank was taking her to the room downstairs which was a guest room when Smarat had a phone call and with tha he had to leave,"Acha guya meujhe janaa hoga...

Nupur:Samrat Bhaiya poora ghar to dikha dete..

Samrat:Aap uski tension an lijiye bhabhi uss mamle mein aapka husband bahut perfect hain vo aapko ache se dikha dega...to Mayank tu camera rakh apni aur Bhabhi ki photos click ker lena..mein baad mein le lunga..

Mayank:Tujhe zarurat nahi hain..

Smarat:Nahi...

Mayank:Le jaa mein apne camera se click ler lunga..

Smarat:Nahi..kyu mera camera tere se acha hain and usme meri bhabhi bahut sunder aayegi...

Mayank:Acha mere baap jesa aap kahen..

Smarat:Good.!! Okay Bhabhi..shaam ko milte hain...

Mayank:Sun chachaji aur chachiji ko bhi lete anaa..

Smarat:Okaz...

After he left Mayank showed her the guest room...

Mayank:Ye humara guest room hain...

Nupur:Acha hain...it gives the guest of being familiar to their own home..

Mayank:Hmm...chalo let me show you Mom's room..unka room niche hain...

Saying they move towards Shilpa Ji's bedroom where they found her reading a novel much engross in herself..
*No we get to know why Mayank loose himself in books and become a total bookworm..*

They moved inside and Mayank called his Mum,"Maa...".

Shilpa Ji raised her head from her book glancing her son and daughter-in-law came to visit her...

Mayank:Maa mein Nupur ko tumhara room dikhaane layaa tha...

Shilpa Ji:To isme poochne waali baat konsi hain aao Nupur...

Nupur entered her room..it was colourfull yet sober ..a couch and a rocking chair...a huge paining of a sober scenery was hanging on her wall...

Nupur:Wow..ye paining to bahut hi sunder hain...

Shilpa Ji:Vo to hogi hi..aakhir isse tumhare patidev ne banaya hain..Mayank tumne bataya nahi Nupur ko..

Mayank:Maa..bata chuka hoon..

Nupur:Haan Maa... sach mein Mayank bahut hi sunder hain...

Mayank:Thanks...

Her gaze fall on the side stool of her bed there was a photoframe of a man in his late 30's she instantly guessed that he may be Mayank's father...she moved towards it and picked it up

Nupur:Maa...kya ye papaji...

Shilpa Ji nodded her head..and went to her took the photoframe from her hand and talks to the picture saying,"Dekhiye ye hain aapki bahu..hain na laakho mein ek...ab to aapka manna hi hoga ki meri choice best hain...

Saying she carressed her hair..while Nupur hugged her..Mayank sensed a little seriousness there and said to lighten the mood,"Chalo ladies ab thosi saas bahu ki photo shoto ho jaayen...

Shilpa JI:Saas bahu waale posture mein...

Mayank:Haan...v best rahega...

Nupur:Nahi..Maa-beti waale posture mein...

Shilpa:Dekha kuch seekho ..tum to chahte hi ho ki mere aur meri bahu ke beech mein phoot pade...she completed her sentence in her usual nautanki ..

Mayank:Acha meri mataji beti-aur maa waale pose mein hi kheechwa lo...

Shilpa ji:That's better...

Than he clicked their pics with Number of poses

Shilpa Ji:Acha ab yahin per dinbhar photos kheechte rahoge yaa fir...poora ghar bhi dikhaaoge..

Mayank:Haan...

Than they move upstairs where Mayank lead her to Suhaani's room..while going upstairsa he recalled something and said,"Arey tumhe Mandir to dikha deta kahan hain..

Nupur:Mujhe pata hain...

Mayank:Kese..

Nupur:Kal gharprevesh hua tha na...to Maa hume mandir le gayi this..fir hall aur wahan se bedroom to itna to rasta mujhe pata hi chal gaya tha ki mandir kahan hain..

Mayank looked her in ashtonishment and said,"Waah..!! Meri biwi to kaafi intelligent nikli..."

Nupur:Tumhe koi shaq tha.."

Mayank:Nahi..lekin ab to poora ka poora yakin ho gaya..

Nupur:Good for you than...

Mayank:Hmm...

They went to Suhaani's room where Suhaani showed her bhabhi her room..her room was full of colours completely showing that her life is completely..taking some pictures he make their way to his beroom and showing it he says,"Aur ye hain humara bedroom..!!"

Nupur:Hmm.pata hain kal mein yahin aayi thi...

Mayank:Haan lekin ache se introduction thodi na hua hain tumhara iske saath...

Nupur:Hmm...to aisa karo pehle mujhe almiraah dikha to jahan per mein apna samaan rakhungi..

Mayank:Hmm..so as promise mene tumhre liye 2 drawers and rack khaali ki hain...

Nupur:Haan mera matlab vohi tha...

He took her to their that area and opened his almirah infront of her showing the collection of his clothes..she actually admired it they were niether too loud nor too gloomy yet sober but still she prefer so jhintak colours of tees or shirt but no they were whether of white of some light blue or grey colour shade and rest than carries black shade...he pulled his clothes along a one side..clearing out one a quet spacious section and said,"Hmm you can now put your clothes and accessories here.." he also showed her quiet spacious drawers to her for keeping her things in..

Nupur:Tumne to kaha tha ki one rack hain..

Mayank:Haan to ye almiraah ki ek raack hain...

Nupur was very surprised and smiled to him saying,"Thanks..giving me equal space..."

Mayank:Your welcome..

She smiled and glanced to the room...it was having shades of white and having light green roof..giving a sort of satisfaction in one's eyes..she was glancing when her eyes fall on the painting ..it was the same painitng she had gifted to him on his birthday...

Nupur:Ye painting...

Mayank:Hmm..tumne gift ki thi na...

Nupur:Aur tumne laga li..

Mayank:Haan..ab itni khoobsoorat painting ko kese mein nahi lagata...

She smiled to him seeing his sweet gesture and before she could state any thought about him her heart already stated,"How Sweet.."


Hope you like it.
Still didn't get reply from MODs so I am continuing
Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Even my heart says the same word..."How Sweet"... a very beautiful update...very original lag raha thaaa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaj k baad main tera ek bhi update nehi parungi teri vajah se mujhe diabetes ho rahi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
*in nupur style* "how sweet" 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update...

Ye Sharma family kitni cute haina...

Loved MayUr moments...

Aree Wah!! Mayu's paintings ki to Nupur fan ban gayi..

To almirah mein sirf ek hi rack and Mayu usse equally share kar raha hain.. That's really sweet of him...

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet update...loved it...continue soon
Edited by dua22 - 11 years ago

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