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Posted: 11 years ago

haan ker rahi hoon
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Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

Hey Shafy

I am new here...
U are such beautiful writer followed all ur ff...👏👏
Even this update beautiful...😊😊
Gauri


Thanks...
I will pm you.. rest other updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for delay got stuck in work
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Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 28

"Youth is still where you left it, and that's where it should stay. Anything that was worth taking on life's journey, you'll already have taken with you."
? Sophie Kinsella, Wedding Night

Mayank entered the room...and slowly and slowly moved towards her..she felt a shift on the bed making her realize that her husband is sitting infront of her...she shivered a bit,she was completely not used to it and was also not ready for it..how she would say to him ...all these questions were roaming in her mind...when she felt that her veil is being raised up...she instantly lowered her gaze down..not letting him see her uneasiness...

He touched her enterwin hands which were placed on her knees..and slowly slowly traced his hand towards her shoulder...she was bit shocked and looked upwards to see what is upto..she tries to say something,"M..Ma..Maya..." but she was shushed by him when put his finger on her lips saying no more words...and slowly slowly moved near to her..ignoring the lines of worry on her face..she wanted to protest but he wasn't giving her any chance..she placed her hand on his torso to stop him..but he kissed her fingers and placed them at his back like she is hugging him..and moved forward...he pushed her down..making her lay on the bed an himself cover her..she tries to struggle a bit but he didn't let her so..she had never thought that he will claim her..even without asking her consent that whether she is even ready for this or not have he forgot what sort of relation they had get into...has he forgot that still before this they need to understand each other...he was about to claim his lips on her...when...

Suddenly her dream broke ..as she heard giggling sound outside...she looked at herself and to the room through her veil and realized that she was just dreaming..letting out a sigh of relief..she sat but again gets alarmed on thinking what if Mayank really want to do so...her mind drifted towards the laughter coming out from the room

Suhaani:Bhai Room mein entry tabhi milegi jab mujhe kuch milega..

Mayank:Soni..tujhe aisa nahi lag raha ki baat baat per aaj kuch zaayeda hi maang rahi hain..

Suhaani:Ye to rasam hain Bhai...

Samrat:Haa..aur isme Soni ke saath mujhe bhi milega...

Mayank:Acha bahana mila hain dono ko mujhe lootne ka...

Samrat:Ab ye mauka hum kese jaane de sakte hain..agar biwi ke pass jana hain to humari jeb mein kuch daalna padega..he completed the sentence with a michievous smile on his face..but Mayank failed to understand...

Suhaani:Chalo..chalo bhai jaldi karo..Bhabhi must bi waiting for you..

Mayank:As you say..saying he ended two more envelopes to them and went inside the room locking the door..making Nupur more alarmed..about her thinking...she tightly enterwin her hands which were on her knees and enclosed her self more...she actually get a nervous a bit..Mayank enters the room so that as now he could rest peacefully..he was so tired..as soon as he turned he was stunned to see his room..it was beautifully decorated with rose petals on the bed and a beautifull bride sitting at the middle of the bed...his mind corrected him saying that bride is his..she is none-other than Nupur..he wish to see her face..want to see..how she felt coming to this house..but her face has been covered with veil he went upto her and sat infront of her...

Feeling a ashift on bed she gained her composer as it shows that Mayank has sat on the bed..slowly..she felt her veil being pulled up...nervously she clutche her leghenga..and closed her eyes...Mayank took her veil off pulling it on her head to see the angelic face of his bride..
He called her up,"Nupur.." softly...

She was bit starlted at his voice but gain her composer and raised her head..slightly opening her eyes...making Mayank to held his breath he said,"Tumhe pata hain..aaj tum kitni sunder lag rahi..Seriously you are looking very beautifull..

Nupur said hesitantly,"T..Th..Thank..."

Mayank:So finally we are married...he gave a huge sigh..and touched her hands which were resting on her knees making her to shiver..she immediately lowered her face down..in nervousness...

He took her hand and placed it between his both arms and said to her,"Nupur I know all this is completely new for you..tumhe adjustment mein kafi problem hogi but ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna I will always there for you.." She raised her hand seeing the sincerity not in his voice but in his eyes..she smiled to saying him that she trust him...

Mayank:Chalo so jaate hain..saying he moved forward i norder to grab a pillow ( I suppose) when he saw that Nupur had closed her eyes tightly...

When he move forward she thought he wanted to do and in fear she closed her eyes...Mayank was confuse on her this behaviour..and touched her shoulder..making her to shiver with his touch he asked in concern tone,"Nupur kya hua.."

Nupur just mumbled the words,"Mayank Please..!!!"

Mayank:Kya hua..

Nupur:Mayank..I...I am m..not ready..

Mayank:Ready for what..

Still keeping her eyes closed she said,"Mayank..I need time..I can't..please...I know you want but..please.."

He couldn't able to get of what she is referring and of what she is not ready..he didn't do anything..of which she has to get ready..!!!

Mayank:What I am not able to understand single thing what are you saying...

Nupur:M..Maa..ya..nk...I am not ready for this night..I need some time to understand this relation..to step to next level..Please...!!! Saying she tightly close her eyes..

Getting of what she was saying he step back..from his position..taking his hand off from her shoulder..an awkward...air filled between them...Nupur's eyes were closed where Mayank was seeing here and there...he realizes what Samrat meant outside the door..and he also didn't discuss this matter so obiviously..she must be uncomfortable but now he has to make her comfortable...

He took her hands again..and called her,"Nupur...Nupur look into my eyes..!!!"

She looked at him..and found a sense of trust on his face he said closing her hand s with his,"Mein jaanta hoon you are quiet uncomfortable with this...even I am also not ready for this...abhi to humara rishta shuru hua hain aur mein aur tum ye baat ache se jaante hain ki humara rishta kitna kitna naazuk hain...isse mein itni ..jaldi.tutne nahi de sakta..isse pehle mazzboot bnana hain taaki ye har aandhi ka saamna ker sake...Hum apne rishte ki shuruwat tab krenge jab hum dono iss ke liye ready honge..tab ke liye hum ache dost hain hi..kyu...!!!"

She nodded her head with a smile on her face, she was waiting for this only when he gave her sometime to understand them and their relation and felt very happy when actually Mayank understood her silence...

He continued furthur,"Mein change kerke ataa hoon..tab tak tum bhi ker lo.."

She nodded her head and he left her hand grabbing his pj's he went washroom to change...

She stood infront of mirror glancing herself...now she is someone's bride...now she is Nupur Mayank Sharma..now she has her husband's name with her..of which she do not carry hatred...removing her jewelries she recalled his words when he promise her to give all the time to her and their relation before stepping into the new level..unknown a sweet smile appears on her face...

Sun Rahi Hoon Sudhbudh Kho Ke
Koi Main Kahani
Puri Kahani Hai Kya Kisi Hai Pata

Taking her bangles off she recalled the moment of their saath phera making her to his forever or the life time...

Main To Kisiki Ho Ke Yeh Bhi Na Jaani
Ruth Hai Yeh Do Pal Ki Ya Rahegi Sada


He knock his bathroom door seeking the permission to enter the room before creating any sort of awkward situation..,"Nupur mein aa jaon.."

Nupur:Haan aa jaayiye.."

He came out to see that his bride still look as angelic without jewelry like she does as loaded with jewellries..Nupur too lowered her gaze at his condtant gaze...to distract himself he said

Mayank:Bahut tired ho gayi hogi..so jaate hain..

Nupur:Haan kal reception bhi hain..

Mayank Hmm...

Saying he took the pillow from the bed and was moving towards the sofa when Nupur called him

Nupur:Mayank..Kya ker rahe hain aap...

Mayank:Pehli baat to tum..and doosri baat..couch per so raha hoon..

Nupur:Per aap bed bhi to so sakte hain..

Mayank:Nupurto kya tum couch per sogi..

Nupur:Hum dono mein se koi couch per nahi soyega..dono bed per soyenge..

Mayank:But Nupur..are you sure..

Nupur smiled to him and said,"Haan Mayank I am sure...I trust you enough aur vese bhi aapka bed bahut bada hain..dono ache se adjust ho jaayenge..

Mayank:Okay..and mein akhiri baar keh raha hoon..fir yaad na dilana pade..

Nupur:Kya..

Mayank: yahi ki call me "TUM" not "Aap"..

Nupur:Okay...

Saying the both laid down on the either side of the backing facing each other...

Mayank:Goodnight Nupur..

Nupur:Good Night Mayank..

Saying they closed their eyes with small smile on their face...

Though they had said Goodnight to each other but sleep was far far away from their eyes...though they were tired but the anxiety of sharing their bed for the first time...had took their sleep off...

Mayank was in doubt...if slept what in deep sleep he went close to her..as he usually roll over his bed when he sleeps like a log..and that's why whenever his eyes tries to close he made them open in order to prevent any embarressment situation...

He turned to her..seeing her back was facing her..." she must be very tired.." he thought.And than unknown to him his heart mind talk starts.

Heart:Vese..today she was looking extremly beautifull..

Mind:Yeas..!!! But why you are saying it again and again..

Heart:Arey had hoti hain..I am just saying ab kya kisi ki taarif bhi nahi ker sakta...

Mind: Uff..!! I didn't meant that way...I mean kisi ki bhi taarif kerna alag baat hain apni newly wedded wife ki taarif kerna is completely different thing..

Heart:Kya different..!!! Bas achi lagi...to bol diya..vese bhi vo kitni achi hain..

Mind:Haan haan shuru karo Nupur puran..!!!

Heart:Tu bhi na..jab dekho mazaak banata rehta hain...

Mind:Tera to sach mein Mazaak bana hain...sach kahoon agar Nupur na hoti to lifetime tera aur teri feelings ka aise mazaak hi rehta..

Heart:Sach keh raha hain..tu..uss din mujhe ehsaas hua ki...pyar to mera kab ka kahtam ho gaya tha..bas reh gaya tha to uska dhoka..

Mind:Aur uske wajah se tune Nupur jesi ladki ka dil dukhaya...

Heart:Sahi mein..Uski aakhon mein aasun..bahut chot pahuchate hain..

Mind:Ab to vo teri Biwi bann gayi hain ab uski life happiness lana teri responsibility hain..

Heart:Aur mein usse har tarah ki khushi doonga kyunki mein jaanta hoon ki kahin na kahin uski smile ...uske eyes mein ek alag shine ko dekh ker..mere dil mein abhut sukoon ataa hain...

Mind:Kya baat hain..

Heart: Shayad mein sach mein lucky hoon ki Nupur ne mujhe ek chance diya aur ab vo meri itni badi galti maaf kerne baad zindagi mein mere saath saath chalne ko ready hain..

Mind:Haan js tarah se tu lucky feel ker raha hain usi tarah se ab Nupur ko bhi yakeen dilana hoga that she is also lucky enough that she ahs a lifepartner like you...

Heart: haan haan time ke saath saath sab ho jaayeg...

He shifted a bit towards her..and facing her..when abruptly she too turned her face towards him..her face was glowing like a fairy or an angel who just decend from the sky for him...it was shining in the moonlight giving a content to his heart...He smiled to him...and closed his eyes..seeing her in deep sleep..he felt a satisfaction in his heart that hse isn't that much uncomfortable that he was thinking...He too close his eyes...

After a while Nupur opened her eyes..to see her husband sleeping sounding looking cute like a child..his face was glowing in the moonlight and the his innocent was enough to steal anyone's heart..she felt that may be her decision isn't wrong..giving him second chance isn't wrong and plus he too understood her undition and behaved like a true gentleman with her..she could see a good friend in him presently but let's hope that whether she could able to accept him as her husband or not..Sleeping on the same bed has actually made her a little uneasy she knew ..it's her who had put the proposal but she felt a shift in her need her body shivered..she don't understand inspite that he has promised her that they won't start "that" type of relation untill and unless they both are ready for it..than why she felt so uneasy when he laid beside her on the same..bed..may be she is not used to it and that's why she is facing it difficult her mind said to her..but her heart has some different heartbeat..it was anxiety that she is sharing their bed with her husband ..this word itself carries a lot meaning...!!! Sighing she closed her eyes lastly glancing at the sleeping cute innocent man beside her...

After few minutes may be due to tiredness both of them slept like a log..but still they maintain to not to shift towards the center of the bed as it could make them near..in sleep also their mind was enough consious to create the imaginary boundary between them specially when comes sleeping on the bed.

At the beginning of the new century, it is the common aspiration of the peoples of the two countries to deepen mutual understanding, enhance trust, develop friendship and strengthen cooperation.
----Li Peng quotes

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I am updating as still didn't get reply from MODs

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Posted: 11 years ago
too good...very nicely written...would love to see how their relationship will progress
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amaxing .beauriful. mayank is true gentleman. Continye soon
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I don't like it...I LOVE it...mayank is so caring..
And understands nupur very well..hope they will love each other
Deeply in future!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt
loved mayur...both are adjusting to the new life
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
shaffuuu sweetu
what an update yaar
totally rocking
superb part...their first night, the awkwardness, then their understanding everything was sooo awesome
i loved each and every bit of it
u just wrote the whole thing beautifully
even the mind and heart convo was beautiful
Great part
loved it to the core
keep it up.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

shaffuuu sweetu
what an update yaar
totally rocking
superb part...their first night, the awkwardness, then their understanding everything was sooo awesome
i loved each and every bit of it
u just wrote the whole thing beautifully
even the mind and heart convo was beautiful
Great part
loved it to the core
keep it up.


Thanks a lot..
Faru

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