Mayur FF-Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage#2 Pt-47/143 - Page 30

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nice ff shaffy...continue soon...😃
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very sweet update
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Originally posted by: arti_17

nice ff shaffy...continue soon...😃


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Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 33

They reach the venue...all their family members welcomed them...

Samrat:Welcome newly wedded couple...you both are looking extremely beautiful..together..

Mayank and Nupur smiled to him and made their way to the stage...while going there Nupur whispered to them,"Mayank.."

Mayank:Hmm..

Nupur:I need to tell you something...

Mayank:Yeah tell me..!!

Nupur:That today you also looking quiet handsome..

Mayank smiled to her little compliment specially her way of giving ...he smiled to her and said,"Thanks Nupur..".He got up on the stage and gave his hand to her...she put her hand on his having a bright smile on her face..

This smile which was coming was genuine coming on it's own not artificial and she didn'r even noticed..it ..it's just that she was having a good type of feeling from inside..not because that her mother is happy or her all loved ones are happy just because her heart was smiling today and that smile was coming brightly on her face...

Mayank too having a unique and happiness type of smile on his face , he felt that a lot burden has been removed from his shoulder...and now a content smile laying on his face...

Well from a third person view if we see than they both were looking into each other were looking cheerfull...not because their family is blest for them but rather they are feeling joufull in each other company having the feeling that they are always be besides each other...well all thid from third eye's view internally also they felt the same but their useless mind fail to understand it and it could only be known to their heart which cannot able to tell him through any medium..and cursing their brains.

Their Hearts says to themseleves,"Uff...these brains why do have all the controls with them...sometimes they fail to understand most important feeling and realization..!!God knows when these emotions which are resided in me will come out and will make their concious to know their actual feeling...

Soon people started coming to them giving them gift,praising them as both were looking lovely couple and also congratulating them for their marriage...Almost Mayank's whole staff came to them and Mayank introduces them with their name ..and unkowningly while introducing her to his staff and all his friends circle he kept his hands on her waist and she stood a little near to him...though this was not in consideration of them and were rather enjoying this not feeling any tyoe of uncomfortablenesslike this...infact giving their a good smile to them streching their lips to their cheeks flashing their teeth and greeting everyone very nicely...One of Mayank frind came to them and Mayank introduce him to her,"Nupur he is one of my closest friend Benji...and..."

Benji intruppted in between and said,"Arey arey Mayank...tumhi de doge kya mera intorduction..poora..arey yaar meri bhabhi hain bhabhi ko to mein apna intro khud doonga..."Saying he bow down a little bit infront of her making her a little surprise and he said,"Bhabhi aapki kidmat mein aapka ye pyara sa doosra devar haazir hain...I wish mein Sam ki agah hota but koi nahi...aap mujhe apna dost samjhiye bhabhi aur agar aapko aapke pati ki koi bhi chugli kerni ho to uske liye mein 24*7 haazir hoon...".Nupur smiled at his such a cute gesture and said,"Mujhe bahut khushi hui aisa devar paaker...aur don't worry...aise mauke mein aapko khoob dungi.."

Mayank was looking at his wife stating " you too"..while she said through her eyes "yes me too".

Mayank:Tu kabhi nahi sudheraga...ayaa nahi ki meri biwi ko bhi apne side ker diya...saying his hands hold her more possessively like he felt she must be taken somewhere away from him and he didn't want it...

Benji:Yaar Mayank ab tujhse kya chupaao...Bhabhi aap kahan chuppi hui thi...aur iss sadu ko kese mil gayi..agar aap mujhe pehle mill jati to bygod mein aapse shaadi ker leta aur iss sadu ko chidhata.."

Nupur smiled the way he was teasing Mayank and Mayank too was getting irriated making funny expressions looking more cute than before she said to Benji while her eyes on her irritated expression husband,"Lekin ye itne bhi sadu nahi hain jo har koi inhe sadu sadu kehta rehta hain..."

Mayank was pleasently surprised to know that his wife ...yeas...his wife didn't think that he is sadu ...a huge grin appears on her face and he turned his face towards her..were both duo share a brief eye lock untill Benji's voice broken their eyelock session..while they were staring each other Nupur's words made his jaw drop..it couldn't able to believe his ears...he felt that whatever he heard was wrong...!!!

He said in a complete dead shock voice,"Ye mein kya sun raha hoon.."Mayank and Nupur looked at him in confusion ..he was complete blank..he was about to fall down back when Samrat cam from behin and hold him asking,"Dude sambhal ker kya hua aisa kon sa jhatka laga tujhe mere bhai jo teri aise halat ho gayi..."

Benji:Tu sunega to teri bhi yehi halat hogi

Samrat:Aisa bhi kya hain...

Benji:Sam..mere bhai...bhabhi ko lagta hain ki..ye..pointing to Mayank...ye ye jo insaan hain..gaur se dekh isse...comepletly doing drama...ye jo aadmi khada hain bhabhi ke saath...bhabhi kehti hain ki ye...ye...ye "Sadu" nahi hain...

Samrat too went in a shock mode when he heard this..how this can be happen...he asked him,"Ye tu kya keh raha hain Benji..."

Benji acting like a tv serial actress,"Haaye..!!! ye sab sunne se pehle mein behra kyu nahi ho gaya...hey bhagwan kya yehi din dekhna reh gaya tha..ki meri bhabhi kahe..ki..ye ye..ladka Mayank Sharma sadu nahi hain...haaye meri kismat..."

Mayank,"Benji bass ker bahut ho gaya..."

Benji:Ab bacha hi kya hain...

Samrat:Nupur tum thik hoon...

Nupur:Haan mein bilkul thik hoon...but Benji..ko...

Benji:Bhabhi mujhe to bahut bada sadma laga hain...aisa kya hua hain aapko..kis ..kis angle se ye aapko sadu nahi lagta...

Samrat:Haan Nupur mein bhi janna chata hoon ki...kis angle se ye tumhe sadu nahi lagta...

Nupur was so confused to give their answer..because she don't know herself..in morning also when Shilpa Ji told that Mayank is sadu she said just in a flow and now in evening...but seems Mayank guessed that she has no answer to it..he clutched her waist more tightly and scolded him fakely,"Kyu re..!!! Tum logo ko badi jalan ho rahi ki meri biwi ko mein sadu nahi lag raha...Ye to intelligent log hi samjh sakte hain...samjhe...

Benji:Haan haan smjh gaya...mein to bas itna kahoonga..ki bhabhi bhagwaan aapko shakti de iska sadupan jhelne ke liye...

Mayank:Ho gaya tera ya aur drama baaki hain...

Benji count of his finger's and than said,"Mmm haan ho gaya aaj ke liye itna hi...vese bhabhi aapse mil ker acha laga...

Nupur:Mujhe bhi...

Benji went from there with Samrat when Nupur asked him,"Benji tumhara bahut acha dost lagta hain.."

Mayank:Hmm..bahut acha...lekin bahut bada nautanki baaz hain..."

Nupur:Hmm Demo to mene dekh liya...

They both looked at each and than burst into a huge laughter to the scene which created a minute before...

Nupur:Vese kya tum sach much mein sadu ho...

Mayank neared his face making her smile to vanish a bit and whispered in her ear,"Tumhe kya lagta hain..."

Nupur gaining her breath,"Mujhe...pata nahi..."

Mayank:Than leave it on time...

Nupur thought,"Wohi better rahega..."

They shared a smile when Samrat announced,"So ladies and Gentlemen..I request the newly couple Mr.and Mrs.Mayank Sharma to join the centre and move their legs together a bit..."

Everyone cheered them...for a couple dance..Mayank move down the stage giving his hand again to her like a true gentleman.

They move towards the stage...to share few steps with each other...they stood infront of each other..

The song of a little bird
The joy in three little words

Mayank placed his one hand on her waist partly touching her duppatta and her skin...*uff again* and one hand had been enterwin with her..while Nupur's other hand was on his shoulder...
I know it's real
That's how it feels
To be loved by you

They were swaying in music...when lights went of and spotlight flashes the light on the couple diming on the other couple who were also dancing with them keeping them in centre...

The stars from a midnight sky
The melody from a lullaby

Slowly slowly the music starts touching their hearts...it seems now their heart were opening up ignoring all the warning signals given by their minds and following it what their heart says...

The words of song had started effecting them...
There's nothing real
That I wouldn't steal
To be loved by you

He brought her more near to her such that his breath falls on her tremble lips...he clutched her waist tightly..while she made a pressure of her hand on his shoulder giving him indication that his proximity effects her...a lot..

To be loved by you
If everybody knows
It's only 'cause it shows

He twirl her making her back to collapse with his torso..sending goosebumps to her body

A smile to put you on a high
A kiss that sets your soul alight

He traced her hands down clutching her fingers enterwining them with his...while his lips were partly touching her ear..she closes her eyes in anticipation..

Would it be all right if I spent tonight
Being loved by you
Being loved by you

He clutched her hands enclosing her within putting their hands on her waist while his cheeks were touching hers...

Your love is released
And you move me with ease

They were swaying with the music...enclosing their eyes...storing this feeling in them

And you rescue me time after time
Oh Oh you give your all
And you take it all in your stride
Oh with all the power of a symphony
That's how my heart beats when you're holding me
I can't conceal, this is how it feels
To be loved by you

He turned her around such that now their face were facing each other..they were very close to each other..where his both hands were resting on her's and she had clutched his shoulder tightly than before staring at each other's eyes...Mayank brought her more close...she rested her head on his shoulder..while he carresed her waist partly touching her bare skin sending goosebumps in her body

Oh yeah, to be loved by you
If everybody knows, it's only 'cause it shows
Because I take your love, Everywhere I go

He hold her face bringing it near to his...she closed her eyes may be sensed that what's coming next giving it all to him...

I know what it is I need, it's clear as a shallow stream
It's as it seems, my only dreams
To be loved by you


He moved more near to her claiming his lips on her...making her to feel that she belongs to him and he belongs to her...getting lost in her...

When when when...Dream broken...

Okay guys I am leaving here..you have to think and tell me it's whose dream which has been been broken...who was thinking all this song and dance...and for answers wait for the next part...till than enjoy...*smile*


Hope you like it
I am updating as still didn't get reply from MODs
Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
shit yaaar...it was going so welll and the last line in big red words that the dream is broken...How could u do such an atyaachar yaaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chase kisiko bhi dream ho apni to candi hai
its nice nupur took mayank's side and he is not at all sadu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dream or whatever - i loved it so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part. Benji is so cute. I think its mayank's dreamm.plz cintinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
so beautiful
i think they are falling for each other

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