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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Part 14:

OMG!!! tension badh hi raha hai...already nupur was tensed about her dad and now this Rhea...kaun hai yeh Rhea...I hope problems aur na badhe...Rhea uski sis type koi ho...please


Na Rhea is not his sis
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Part 15:

Yaar kitna drama hai...
yeh mayu ki ex kaha se aa gayi...this was shocking...ek dum se twist pe twist aa raha hai...I thought mayu ne kabhi kissi se pyaar nahi kiya hoga...
and mayu is very much at fault...he shouldn't have hugged that girl again...
I hope mayu usse manna le...
and I don't have good feelings about this boss...why is he calling her in his room...
I hope sab theek ho jaaye...

Ab bichare Mayu ko thode hi pata tha..Nupur is going to come in his life..
else vo kisi se pyar hi nahi kerta
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Part 16:

yay...i love the rough and tough mayank...jo nupur par apna right dikha raha hai...wow...
I am sure now he will show Rhea her true place...
I am so glad you didn't show a crying mayank pleading infront of nupur but a strong mayank with a strong decision...
i hope main soch rahi hu wahi ho and you don't add any negative twist now!!!


Tum jo soch rahi hoo..
Shayad vohi sach hain
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Part 18:

feel so bad for nupur...
can't see the pain she is going through...
make her life happy now...bahut hua...
loved the way you wrote each word expressing her pain...

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Part 19:

so mera doubt sahi tha...her boss is cheap...hate him...
poor nupur going through so much...
bas ab jaldi usse bacha lo...I know you won't let anything happen to her


kuch nahi hoga Nupur ko don't worry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Part 21:

yay finally mayur became friends...very nice...now everything between them should settle...loved it...
and congrats for new thread dear...you deserve it!!!😊


Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am sorry I know i am quite late...
But was stuck up with some very important work..hardly got time to update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 22

"Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end."


She came with Mayank's coat outside...On seeing someone's else coat on her hand Gunjan asked her,"Nupsie what is this..Whose blazer is this...!!!"Her eyes were full of question saying Nupur that her friend demand an answer from her.Her silence wasn't liked by Gunjan , she felt a fear in her silence she hold her shoulder and asked her again,"Nupsie I am asking something from you...!!!Please answer me..!!".

But she can't tell the actual reality to Gunjan, not even to her mother they will surely get panicked and scared,she need to handle it on her own.Taking a deep breath she held already tensed Gunjan's shoulder making her to sit on the bed and continued with a little lie and little truth to her,"Gunjie Listen to me..!! You remember I went to Boss for the purpose of burrowing loan.."

Gunjan nodded her head in agreement,Nupur remember what happenes over there , she closed her eyes in qualm not to loose herelf and making her best friend more tense she continued,"So mein jab jaa rahi thi wahan..to..."...she sruple a bit ..but she knows she has to make up any story now hiding the reality...she said,"Mayank met me in the corridors and he said that will help me..".

Gunjan stared her for a second grasping the fact that she is taking help from Mayank, she said after a brief pause,"So you are taking money from Mayank..".

Nupur:Yup..

Gunjan:But a day before you said that you won't take any penny from him and now...

She felt that she has caught red-handed now...she fumbeled and said,"Vo...VO..actually...actually Gunjie...He offered me to take loan from him and in return while working in his office I could rebate the amount...".

Gunjan:But why would you work in his office...You already had a job Nupsie...

Nupur felt loss of words...what she should say..coming up with some words she said,"Gunjie, he was offering me help from his side , I accept it and rebate it I ask him the job in his company and infact I would get much better job than this previous one so I thought it won't be that bad idea..."

Guessing that she is right Gunjan simple said,"Okay..".and than continued,"Acha sun aaj mujhe ghar jana hoga..mein tujhe kal morning mein milne mein aaungi...okay.."

Nupur:Okayz..

Gunjan:Chal..Godnight..saying she hugged her friend and went from there...

On the other hand on the way back to his home he was thinking about Nupur...her tremor eyes still revolves inside his mind,her jitery hands so tightly she hold him could tell him that how much she was scared to death.But shocked him more was his own behaviour,how a sudden rage of blood inside his veins when that dirty man told such a disgusting thing to Nupur,he would have smashed his head there only,he still not able to know why he felt to protect her under his arms,why he enclosed her providing her warmth forgetting about what their relation has took place just a day before.

He was staring at the moon,which was shining brightly today making some of his lights to fall on him soothing his disturbed thoughts.

"Vo thik to hogi na..!!! She was so much scared and still shivering when I dropped her home..!!!".His thoughts were showing a lot of concern for his to-be-wife..."Should I call her..nahi bahut late ho gaya hain..but aisa acha nahi lagta ek baar bhi usse phone kerke na phuchoo that is she fine or not else I won't be...realizing what he was about to say himself his heart completed the sentence that else you won't be able to sleep.

Thinking a lot he sat on his bed taking his phone he finally dialled her number.He really need to talk to her..but before the ring could make he immediately cut the call and asked himself,"Phone kerke mein bolunga kya..?? Yeah I will ask her how is she...?? But how...Mmm will be like Hello Nupur how are you...and than will start my talks..".

Planning how to talk to her he finally dialed her number and waited for her call to pick up.Mayank was moving to and fro in his room..his tracks stops when he heard the ringng sound from the other side making him realize that the connection has been establish and in no moment she will pick up the call.

Nupur had been done with some of her work on her laptop and was keeping aside when her phone buzzed...keeping her laptop aside she picked up her phone and was about to press green button which would connect their call she stopped for a moment, a moment to realize seeing the person calling her is for real...she pause for a second and than decided to take the call and with that she pressed green button.

Nupur:Hello..!!!

Mayank:Hey..Nupur..It's me Mayank..!!

Nupur:Haan jaanti hoon..your name flashed...

Mayank gave a sheepish smile thinking sometimes he behave so stupidly...and said,"Sorry..."

Nupur:Koi..Nahi it happens...

Mayank:Vo Nupur how are you..!!!Thik hona...

Nupur:Yeah ...Mayank I am perfectly fine...

Mayank:Pakka...!!

Nupur:Haan...thodi der ke liye kamzor ho gayi thi..had went into the shock but now I am okay...

Mayank:Okay..take care ...

Nupur:Thanks for your concern...Mayank I will

Mayank:Ab Concern to dikhani padegi hone wali biwi jo ho...saying he smirked ...

Nupur too smiled and replied,"Hmm...vo to hain.."

Mayank: Nupur tumne ghar per kisi ko...

Nupur:Nahi Mayank mene kisi ko nahi bataya ...bekar mein Maa aur Gunjan panic ho jaayege...

Mayank:Hmm ek tarah se thik kiya...

Nupur:Haan aur tum bhi...

Mayank:Don't worry..Kisi ko pata nahi chalega...

Nupur:Thanks...Vese tumhe pata kese chala ki mein wahan...

Mayank:Vo kya hain na Nupur tum meri hone wali biwi ho..to mujhe ab itni news to rakhni padegi ki meri biwi kahan jaati hain aur kisse milti hain..he completed the sentence in his playfull tone making both of them giggle.

Nupur playing with him: So mean tum mujh per nazar rakhoge...shaadi ke baad bhi...

Mayank:Mmm thodi bahut khabar to rahunga tumhari...tumhe koi problem..

Without thinking she abrubtly replied enjoying talking with him,"Nahi..." but suddenly realized what she said she tries to cover up,"Nahi nahi...mera matlab..".

Mayank:Mein samjh gaya...

Nupur:Kya...

Mayank: Kuch...nahi

Nupur:Pakka kuch nahi...

Mayank:Haan baba...

Nupur:Acha seriously batao..tum wahan kese pahunch gaye..

Mayank:Actually meri unke saath evening mein meeting thi...mein to ghar hi ja raha tha..jab mujhe laga kuch points mujhe uske saath discuss kerne honge...sahi nahi lag rahe the..lekin shayad aisa lagta hain mein sahi time per pahuch gaya...

Nupur:Hmm...Thanks...

Mayank:Uski koi zarurat nahi hain Nupur..I will always be there..

Nupur:Always..? Moreover a question in playfull tone she was asking him seriously that whether he will be there or not...and replied with same emotions,"Always.."

After a moment he asked her again,"Nupur..vo tumne apni details mail ker di..

Nupur:Haan mene saari bank accounts detail mail ker di hain..

Mayank:Just do one thing send me your resume also...

Nupur:Resume..?? Why..??

Mayank:So that I will apply it to my company HR and they can recruit you...

Nupur:Okay...Vo bhi ker dungi..

Mayank:Ahh..hh..Nupur...

Nupur:Haan Bolo...

Mayank:Vo tumne apna resignation letter bhej diya...

Nupur:Vo Mayank actually bhej to diya hain but there is a problem..

Mayank:Haan bolo..

Nupur:Actually humari company ki policy hain that before resigning you need to give two months notice or else two months salary will be cut off...

Mayank:Bas itni si baat kaam ho jaayega..

Nupur:But kese...

Mayank:Don't you trust me..?

What will Nupur answer..will she say no or will she accept that she trust him...
For more wait for another part till than.


Hope you like it
I am updating as still didn't get reply from MODs

Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
yaar update toh masth thaaa, but isko thoda aur lamba nahi kar sakthe the kyaaa...at least phone convo kaaa part poora kar letheee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautiful update.
Loved mayur conversation.
Mujhe pta nahi Nupur ka jawab kya hoga next update mein.
Thnx for PM.

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