Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 85

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

Samarpan

Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of work. This story reveals the true meaning of a bond or a relation. Be it Yash-Aarti or Aarti-Yash-Payal or Payal-Aayu or Yash-Naanimasi, each and every one of them teaches us to value and respect the relations we have.

I have learnt a lot from it. I've also come around to believe that the love Yash and Aarti share is also existent in the real world among couples. Previously, I always confined fairytale love stories, well only to fairytales. But Samarpan is so realistic.

I am very grateful to you. I love Summer Returns as well. So if you're planning to update, send a pm. It will always be a pleasure to read more of your works. You may name your characters differently, but I'll always associate them to Yash and Aarti. I mean to say GC and KS will be playing the characters in my mind.:)

Crazy I know.

🤗

Originally posted by: princess4120

sorry for not commenting on the epilogue sooner.. it was a fantastic part.. and perfect closure to the beautiful story that you created.. thoroughly enjoyed reading the entire journey..

hope you write something in the future and i am able to find it and read it.. if you ever start anything.. and dont mind sending me a pm.. that be awesome..

take care and good luck in any future creations..

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks for the heartwarming compliments Lyra...made me feel nice. If you look at it it was indeed an everyday kind of a story. There are many girls in India whose world comes together only after marriage, because of the prejudices she faces in her parental house for being a girl child.
Yet somewhere God balances by giving a wronged one some good relationships.

I shall definitely write again. I just need to be inspired enough. And of course, it's not crazy that you should look for Yash and Aarti in the characters that will shape up...I myself will have to work real hard to remember not to visualize GC and KS when I write next.😳

Take care pal...Au revoir!🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey Barbie...thanks for such a heartwarming comment. My response is in blue.😊

Hello Indu, am back, with my response in red.. 😳

Ch 30

Two lost souls finally met after meeting the fear of losing each other the beauty of this moment is inexpressible just a fell heart to heart

Later soothing each other n absorbing each other pain n ignoring own fears, anxiety n the very same moment it broken all the barriers n then one side it has guilt n other side its a symbol of security, love n contend feeling spread warmth for her

i am sure this time aarti will be saviour to her love who is sinking low n yesh she did it with the comfort, aroma she gave n then her words are magical a healer to yash

Because you are you…I am me
I am because you are."

N then another kiss to sooth n lighten the mood n he did wat made him frown let her hair open .. raat ko azad kar do ( i don't know from where this filmy thing coming) n her hunger oh thus lil angel kid woman of yash

N then the soul mate talking about their saviour angel n yash asking aarti marry me n oh this girl never stop amaze me her condition took my heart away still in coccon of her love the dark shades of her past

Well i am lost at word so copying the best

You gave me your vulnerability ….you shared your fears. That means so much to me. I wish my father had trusted me with his fears."

"Aarti, don't hold yourself responsible for his actions."

"Yup! You look so adorable…the tip of your nose goes all red." He pressed her nose affectionately. She made a face and turned toward the fire.

Their silence communicated for awhile as they sat watching the flames crackle and dance their way to cinders

I need you to love me and be patient thorough my dark days…and nights."

He pulled her on his lap and kissed her lightly, "Take all the time you need my love…we have an eternity with us. I am there with you all the way.

She understood the whys and hows of their connection. She understood her destiny.

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Aww i am feeling peace n calmness n so much into with the idea of true love.. flowing so light beautiful mesmerizing indu di fab.. bow down

Chapter 34

Another beautiful awesome write up indu di❤️

Arpita! What a shameless woman😡, she even have the guts to tell Payal she is her mother, well am not that surprised since she could give birth to a daughter for money😡.

Oh no dadima in d hospital, she is sick nd aged but she never lost her sense of humor😛, really loved the hospital scene. The nurse is a terrorist lol! Love d old woman hehehe😆

Arpita and rahul so selfish, they just want payal's inheritance,

Superb write up di, really amazing chapter👏👏👏.

Epilogue

😭😭No...no no story is ending or should i say it has ended but all in all i really enjoyed it and am glad to be part of samarpan journey😊,

Di u never failed to awe me when i read ur update fantastic, awesome, beautiful, thought provoking, warm, engaging, amazing dear lot more di, words re in short😊. Let me come to point 😉😉

Samarpan was launched that's great, aayu thinks of food this much, grinning from ear to ear lol!😛

What a di aayu had she helped him win the photography contest

True di, samarpan was a unique story which shows the richness of

Love u, take care di❤️🤗❤️

Originally posted by: InduG64

Billie...Thanks a ton my friend. Your sweet words touched me right where they were meant for...my heart. God bless you! I accept the ovation with all humility and love. All I have to say is I felt Samarapan...and you felt it with me, and that was my reward. Love you back...🤗

I'll definitely write again...if not here, then in a place I have created for us. 😳