Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 84

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Finally, I got the strength to write (*take a deep breath)
I tend not to visit here for sometime coz every time I did, sigh, I'm becoming emotional..
So hard to accept that this will be my last comment for this beautiful story.
You won't believe it Indu, but there's something that was pulling my hands whenever i tried to type on my keyboard. Don't know why am so speechless on the past days, don't know what to say..

Am so attached with your writings. Can't imagine myself, visiting the forum without seeing your weekly updates.

It was like being separated to someone I love so much (am literally into tears)
See, this is why sometimes am hesitant to be involved with someone or something coz when things like this happens (parting time), it's so hard for me to disengaged. 😔


Barbie, it's taken me this while to gather myself and to at least respond to you. You got me tearing up my friend. Not writing for the forum is a loss for me as well. This interaction between what I write and how you take it was something that had become a way of life for so many months. I wrote the Epilogue a week back...and there was a certain vacuum in the past week with nothing to write about. I don't want you to consider this a parting...just take it as a vacation of sorts. I am sure the writing bug will bite me soon enough.😳

Nwei, before I say anything about the epilogue, just want to thank you again for bringing us this wonderful, heart touching love story in the character of Aarti and Yash. The story of two lost souls tested by their own destiny, had their different ups and downs and once again brought them together. The story that thought us what life could be! It's importance, the acceptance and realizations. The love that was created and the heart that connects each one of them.. It was all in here, Samarpan!

Yash and Aarti's saga is that of Hope and Courage above everything else...very true to the saying that "When going gets tough, the tough get going."

Thank you for inspiring us dear, and for the time that you allotted to bring us this amazing journey.

Am so glad that I got to know you better here. Am so proud of you!!! 🤗

You really have a good heart, I can see that through your writing.
What you have written and what you made us feel just shows the real you. The loved that you gave and you receive from your family just reflected on this story.
And somehow it relates me especially when the kids are involved (though i only have one). I so loved how you put the kids character into story. I too want my little one to be like either of the kids. To embrace life with courage and always be ready for what life has to offer.

Thanks for the lovely words. I too am glad to have met you and made so may friends here...each with different way of putting down their opinions. Thanks to the comments, I have a mental picture of everyone. You got that part about family right...my family indeed is very important to me and I guess that reflects in the characters of the story.


About the epilogue, I loved how you connect it on the beginning of the story.
I loved the bond that created between Payal and Aayu. They are well build up by their mom and dad. You won't even think that they have different parents. They really compliment each other, heart connections indeed!
Oh, Payal made Aayu a champ with his secret entry, what a sweet surprise!
Despite being excited and happy, they still understand what their parents need. So they just celebrate it on their own.
Am not surprised, Aayu will not spare even a single sweets, haha..

The entire story needed to be connected. That's why the beginning was the way it was...it had to wait the entire span of 28 chapters or so to reconnect. Payal and Aayu are like any other children of their ages. I remember being as protective of my little bro when we were small, even though he is only three years younger to me. I was in Class 4 when he joined the school in Class 1. My father was posted in a remote hill station that time, and the school was not very big. I vividly remember hiding my brother under my desk in the last row for about two weeks daily, because he had disliked his teacher on sight and was scared of her. After two weeks my mother visited the school for some reason and came to know about my missing-from-class brother. I remember facing the Principal and telling her point blank that I shall do it again if any other teacher threatens my brother. My mother still regales everyone with that story.😳

Aarti had her book launch party!
It was a success not only because of the story that has in it but also the love and support of her loved ones especially Yash.
He was very supportive to Aarti ever since. Through thick and thin, for better and for worst, he's always there for her. They're both lucky having each other.
Yeah, she's right. She has no more left to ask for, except eternity and beyond, with him.


Glad that the epilogue was well accepted. It just needed to show of the future to come for this little family...😊

I'm gonna miss this and you of course..
But please don't let this hard feeling take so long. Hope you'll come back soon with the new one. I'll be there for sure.

Thank you once again and GOD Bless you always.. ❤️
Take Care dear, you are special...

See you when I see you 🤗😳


Thanks for being there for me Barbie. Lots of love to you and your little one. Give him a bear hug from me. Take care...and stay smiling.🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Oh no Zet...with you around how can I suffer from low self-esteem. You are my Yash in many ways.😃...Love you back...🤗

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Chapter - 12

Yash meeting Aarti again...the following day...

Wow Indu this is really romantic...

Yash not being sure about Aarti is only fair for he had his brush with betrayal earlier on...

So sweet...Payal called up and was angry with her Dad...

I love the way he calls her princess! All girls are Dad's princesses - right?

Wow...the mountain fairy was indeed Aarti!!!!

Yash had found her...hope he accepts it soon...

So Yash was to repair her swing instead of paying up...

So who were the ones who stopped Sameer?

Am sure it must have been Yash..at least one of them...

Lovely update...

Originally posted by: RA17

Ch 29

Oh yash n his restlessness so am i di n then their aarti message found its destination like aarya had now just have to see how many more hurdles destiny has made for aarya

But then aarti last words was enough to give strength to yash n that wat made him promise NM that he will find her

N then again yash find out his clue thru garima n yes that big evil P is there

Also love the way you put concern suraj had not only for aarti for yash who have just found his long gone happiness in name of aarti

Oh but aari aroma in her room wher he find his peace n shed tears to hold his love aww n payal n her innocent concern n then yash again got boost uo his confidence in another form from aarya angel

N another call asking 5 cr but then yash in his complete sense ask his first priority his love n so aarti even after drugged say something again meant for yash like she meant for him herself her words her soul all belongs to him the day she entered this world

ISHAQZADDE or i shud dilwale dulhaniya le jaye typical yash n filmy but loved the whole action power pact P n yash confrontation

N this how i will say the whole thng coming back to square of life is a complete circle as i recalled my words in italic n now yash knowingthis place due to tracking n aman soulmate wala some connection he reach to his aarti hi true love

honesty i can visualize how you put up whole aarti kidnapping night scenario n her using her mind n feel aarti emotion of new found love n waiting fir her love to embrace her

n then jdda hoke milne ya sab kuch khoke paana then kiss is just a step towards samrpan i don't know how but again going down the c lane of sparsh once you told me that kiss has much more than making actual love so i can now get more depth n the below words or more closer to my heart this time

Surrender to your new awareness
and let love unfold the purpose of creation to you

Beautiful update although initially i thot y P now but then things are now more crystal clear with my hazy glistening eyes

Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir

so superb it was...thank u for amazing story dear

Originally posted by: Ben25

Aww indu, you've done it again! such an intense story. I really felt for arti in this story. Am so glad yash was there for her whenever it mattered in the initial half of the story when they were unaware of each other. as you said, they were just meant to be together. loveddd your story and your writing to the core. payal was so adorable in this ff and aayu a typical boy thinking of food. ha ha. loved that touch.

Thank you for sharing this story with us. hope inspiration strikes you again and we get to read something else from your pen.

Originally posted by: pvejani

wonderful epilogue...👏👏👏.

epilogue is beautifully witten⭐️.

beautiful story❤️.

i will miss reading samarpan ff😭.

fabulous work done👏👏👏.

enjoyed reading every part of this story.

thanx for all updates and all pm's.

thank you indu😃.