Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 86

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Edited my comment on Page 111 ! 😃

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Thank you Isya. It was an absolute pleasure to go through your response. I echo your sentiments my friend. I have you as my friend because of Sparsh and Samarpan...Just for that reason I am glad I penned those stories. By penning them I gained a treasure trove of friends.

I hope to continue this interaction with Whispers of Spring.

Love you back Isya. Take care.🤗

Milenge, zaroor milenge...yahaan nahin to kahin aur sahi!😊

Dear Friends,

You all have supported me immensely whenever I have written a story or just a PV-related post in the Forum. I have thrived on your response and support. I have begun another story (with different characters) in a blog I created awhile back. I have uploaded Sparsh and Samarpan there. The new venture, Whispers of Spring, is not about Yash/Aarti, so I shall be posting the updates only in the blog. Please check it out. Your support is as always much required.

The Link: https://indughosh.blogspot.in/

Thanks.
Love
Indu

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thank you Isya. It was an absolute pleasure to go through your response. I echo your sentiments my friend. I have you as my friend because of Sparsh and Samarpan...Just for that reason I am glad I penned those stories. By penning them I gained a treasure trove of friends.

I hope to continue this interaction with Whispers of Spring.

Love you back Isya. Take care.🤗

Milene, zaroor milenge...yahaan nahin to kahin aur sahi!😊

Ch 31

Hey di how are you, really long time almost a month took me to come back to forum n to our samarpan

Beautiful sunshine morning after restless night of yash seeing his aarti despair n nightmares

Aarti habit of clutching to his shirt oh dear

n really love how you reconcile "life had come full circle for Aarti and Payal, two souls abandoned at birth."

Yeah being practical approach they headed to police n then hospital again making all aware aarti scars of past

There is a feeling of worship in this samarpan

N picture perfect right anna aunty

N the joy n simple innocent words of payal has lot of depth

"You will never leave me?"

"I love you so much my savior angel. Say that againsay mumma again."

"Mumma.my mumma. I have been waiting for you mumma."

, "Papapari is my mumma. I too have a mumma now."

I literally have lump in my throat while reading yash thoughts

And there under the bright sun, three lost souls came together in an eternal bond.

that wat we call a true celebration remembering all those who were there as her strength in the mean time n sharing the moment n taking the blessings n not only aarti side was happy that she found yash so is yash side his parents n brother

n then aarya first official date wow wat a visual treat i must say indu di you are very passionate n romantic

Hey Ria...I am sorry for being late in acknowledging your post. I hadn't checked this thread in the past few days, so didn't know you had visited.

Thanks for making me relive those memories...I had some of my best moments interacting with all the readers in this thread. It was always so invigorating. I am just so touched that you still haven't let go and have come back to finish your read. I always love what you have to say about the chapters.

Oh yes, I am a romantic...a huge one. Marriage and two kids haven't dampened that. I see romance everywhere. Love is the only universal emotion...and I mean love encompassing all kinds.😊

Ch32

When we honestly ask ourselves which person in our lives means the most to us, we often find that it is those who, instead of giving advice, solutions, or cures, have chosen rather to share our pain and touch our wounds with a warm and tender hand.

Well Maggie is again a pure soul who identified n loved another pure soul

Yash asking aarti to keep phone as his angels breath is a kinda lullaby n also being protective towards his love who will not hopefully get nightmares while feeling yash so close

i amaze how yahs n you brought even long time lost aarti uncle although they dint connected a its life still its good to know he tried for them too

ana advice gains almost peeled the scar of aarti past man that poem i can still recall you put in aarti journal n instantly yash knows his aarti too well

yash re union to all the worthy people who made aarti stand despite thundering storms its overwhelming experience on both sides

aarya wedding at last sp played a true babul role in aarti life bringing her t the mandap

n then the whole aroma of its beyond words beautiful vision

aarti expressions made me recall aankhein jhuka de to hayya aankehin utha de to dua

"I love you Mrs Aarti ScindiaI love you as you are. Look at yourself through my eyes Aarti. You are the most beautiful woman in the whole world."

"Promise me that come hell or high water, you will never hide anything from mehowsoever serious or unimportant the matter is. You will share everything with me. What happened with the scar should not happen again. You have nothing to fear from me darling, or for me. You are my strengthas I am yours."

She sat up on her elbow, "I promise Yash.

Aarya reunion n aayu birth with payal words echoi in heart its memerizing n beautiful no words as feelings are mutual well as always loved it to the core

PS your post made me love you n admire you, i must say sparsh bring out the best of how you played with words but with samarpan i found 2 more things to adore you that you are die hard romantic n also a great visionary you made be visualize everything in true sense be aarti painting as book cover, meadow n nainital natural scenery n now aarya wedding

@Ria: Thanks sweetie. What lovely thoughts in the first para of your response. Once again I cannot thank you enough for keeping me connected to Samarpan...a story that I penned with lot of emotions and heart. Like you say, I am a die-hard romantic. I keep telling my kids that I won't go the Indian customary way to look for spouses for them...They should find their own partners when they find love. Love forms the basis for trust...and trust is the main pillar on which a happy marriage is built.😊

well what to say thtas so cool you will let the free spirit fly but then love is only meant have their own way i am all ready for the one but i guess destiny hasnt made me met then so may be almighty need to now arrange it😉 as i am too workaholic that its now up to him that he shud look out for me instead of me looking for the one

Ch 33

Yahs n aarti at present where she find him hauted by her bitter dark past n then the rising sun bring warmth n love n coziness which he needs to embrace n she did it successfully n yash idea of dessert is yummylicious i must say n then the way she want i can understand partially as recently i also discard by old diary which i found y it was so n now the effect of it is none on my present

It's time we begin today and make for ourselves a new ending. It's all about what we want today, and not about what we had. Let's surrender to today and create our own past from today's present

Aloo parnatha now toh even i am hungry despite had my dinner lol

N ansh gift is actually sweet one hmm so blank calls is seems like we are coming to payal samarpan

Scindia Aman Shereton thats in a way a great tribute to great spirit

Aww this is the highlight

Mumma, take a good look at me,
Can you not see yourself in me?
Look into my eyes
It's your image that lies.
See the person I have become.
The job that you have done
I myself don't know
Where I endedand you've begun.

Well words are not sometimes best convey yet this whole thing comes n summarize in the below beautiful present carved out of a structure with past dark shadows to shining the power of goodness, richness of love

Its all how you make your children i am proud of aarya n their upbringing wow really a big round of applause to you di as i blve the lady i admire behind those words n respect just as a mother n compassion as a woman makes me adore your more n more

Thanks a lot again

"That's the beauty of motherhood Payal. When she sees the little ones, nothing else matters to her except that they are hers and she is their mother." Aarti glanced at the rearview mirror to find Yash's glistening eyes on her. Naanimaasi reached out to pat Yash's hand on the wheel with a tremulous smile.

"Wow!!" Aayu exclaimed with wonder, "That means almost all the crows and koels are brother sisters. Right di?"

"Yes Aayuit's the love that mattersnothing else." She suddenly threw her arms around Aarti and hugged her tightly, "I love you mumma." Yash had to stop the car. He couldn't see the road through blurry eyes. Naanimaasi quietly through her arm around his shoulder and squeezed it.

"I heard that Yash."

"What? C'mon Aartithe boy was only defending his sister. We Scindia men don't take insults to our girls lightly." He gave a thumbs-up to Aayu.

Aarti rolled her eyes and walked forward to embrace Payal, "I am so proud of you angel. You handled that so well."

"You know mumma," Payal whispered, "For a moment I felt like youlike you were when you talked to me when I was small and would be confused about something."

"That's because you have my heart in you. You stole it many years backremember?" Aarti pulled back, wiped her tears, and smiled,