Downpour#11 UPDATED Epilogue Pg 106 @ 19 Oct - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ending mona
but i felt tht the part was in rush
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 100
last part
excellent dear...
awesome...
so beautiful...
lovely story...
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Posted: 11 years ago



Hi Mona ... Epi kab milega..??
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Posted: 11 years ago
One of my favorite stories this is..
This is probably the first time I'm commenting although..have been a silent reader until now..I don't really know what to put in a comment, but truly, this was a really nice story and I had a great time reading it :) :)
Won't mind reading this 100-chapter-ed fiction all over again ;)
I really hope you give an epilogue though, since this story seems kinda incomplete without it. You might want to tie up some loose ends afterall..!

Just a small stupid tip- instead of the word 'fear', you can sometimes use the word 'afraid' too, when required in your writing.. I hope you understand what I wanna say..

Good luck! :) :)
Edited by AfflicteD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
last part..
nice ending..
lovely story..
waiting for epilogue..
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Posted: 11 years ago


the journey of downpour is one to cherish... not only as a brilliant story of maaneet but also the story through which made our friendship became more stronger... happy to have u and babie,priya,lily as freinds... love u guys...



last update ke baare main tho kehna bhool hi gayi... loved it dear...



Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey yaar... read DOWNPOUR in one go...
its a very awesome n beautiful journey... u have written it so very well dear... loved the way u portrayed the story... MAAN's pranks, GEET's innocence, their journey of love... all are too good 👏

but that asha 😡 im gald she got the punishment she deserve!!! 😃
n finally after facing so many obstacles in life... MAANEET became one!!!
loved MAAN's love n care for GEET specially 😳 he is so good 😉 in teasing also 😛
n GEET... aweee... she is a cutie pie 😊
waiting for epilogue... pls update epilogue also,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ff...👏loved the ending...😃loved it...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey Mona hiii 😃 🤗

you would probably want to n rather u would run after me with some chappal or tomatoes 😆
and i really am sorry i apologize for my long absence. its really that i was too unwell n im still not feeling well. n also disturbed n mentally occupied over a few things . couldnt get time to properly log in to IF n comment the way i regularly did. so sorry again

so the journey of The Downpour has come to an 'almost' end. yes i said 'almost' because im expecting an epilogue and here i give u a big hug for successfully completing it :) congratulations 🥳

and yes, i would add, personally, this year's summer was so beautiful.😊 so full of memories. so much. my last year at university, the tension excitement worry n everything about my thesis, my campus all of that. the beautiful awesome monsoon, the amazing days. the sad days, those days when i was busy as hell , each n everything! honestly Mona, reading this FF was SPECIALLY a part of all that . those little things i had as my leverage . the way to relax. the innocent stuff i always kept at hand to make myself relax when the tension got too much, or even the happy mood booster when i'd be in high spirits already 😊 because i would happily look forward to it every single day and feel good when i would read n comment 😊 thank u for being such a sweet part of one of the most beautifully memorable phases of my life. thank u 🤗 ❤️

so the end,,, asha got what she deserved n what she sow she reaped it. but i felt bad for her. but still, again, she did it herself. n unknowingly she was the one most jealous of maan n geet coming closer n yet again she herself unknowingly became the strongest cause of bringing maan n geet together n making them feel the love for each other more. 😆

and i loved all the updates with maan and geet's wedding processions . the way maan wanted to steal a glance at his bride on the mehndi day 😳 the wedding was superb n i loved how they happily united ☺️

i will request u to put an epilogue and why only epilogue i can say why not season 2 😃 but anyway its ok if u want to end it. we have ur other works

i have read SS almost half of it n will follow it soon n will soon comment there regularly 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HNosheen

hey Mona hiii 😃 🤗

you would probably want to n rather u would run after me with some chappal or tomatoes 😆
and i really am sorry i apologize for my long absence. its really that i was too unwell n im still not feeling well. n also disturbed n mentally occupied over a few things . couldnt get time to properly log in to IF n comment the way i regularly did. so sorry again

so the journey of The Downpour has come to an 'almost' end. yes i said 'almost' because im expecting an epilogue and here i give u a big hug for successfully completing it :) congratulations 🥳

and yes, i would add, personally, this year's summer was so beautiful.😊 so full of memories. so much. my last year at university, the tension excitement worry n everything about my thesis, my campus all of that. the beautiful awesome monsoon, the amazing days. the sad days, those days when i was busy as hell , each n everything! honestly Mona, reading this FF was SPECIALLY a part of all that . those little things i had as my leverage . the way to relax. the innocent stuff i always kept at hand to make myself relax when the tension got too much, or even the happy mood booster when i'd be in high spirits already 😊 because i would happily look forward to it every single day and feel good when i would read n comment 😊 thank u for being such a sweet part of one of the most beautifully memorable phases of my life. thank u 🤗 ❤️

so the end,,, asha got what she deserved n what she sow she reaped it. but i felt bad for her. but still, again, she did it herself. n unknowingly she was the one most jealous of maan n geet coming closer n yet again she herself unknowingly became the strongest cause of bringing maan n geet together n making them feel the love for each other more. 😆

and i loved all the updates with maan and geet's wedding processions . the way maan wanted to steal a glance at his bride on the mehndi day 😳 the wedding was superb n i loved how they happily united ☺️

i will request u to put an epilogue and why only epilogue i can say why not season 2 😃 but anyway its ok if u want to end it. we have ur other works

i have read SS almost half of it n will follow it soon n will soon comment there regularly 😃




Aww thats so nice yaara that you cherish this story at this level .. it was beyond my imagination that someone could make it a chotu sa part of daily routine and somewhere of life as well .. thats so nice of you..

Really this comment of your made me so happy and blessed too, thank you so much sheen dear :) love you

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