Downpour#11 UPDATED Epilogue Pg 106 @ 19 Oct

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Downpour reached on 11rd thread ..

Congrats And Thank You sooo much for making me to reach here







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Thread 9

Thread 10

Part 94 (Scroll Down)

Part 95

Part 96

Part 97

Part 98

Part 99

Part 100


Epilogue

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The Downpour... Part 94




"Maan I'm hungry'

"Hm.. mai bhi'' He snuggled her in arms, and said kissing her neck.

"Maan!!'' she pushed him, "I'm really hungry'', she made face. He glared her she smiled. He smiled back.

"Give me five minutes'' he peaked her head and left inside to arrange dinner and Geet waited outside still wondering what else he would do! When saw him coming back with food trolley. There was variety of foods kept and what amazed her, that all were her favorite only. She looked him with praising eyes.

Maan came and sat on his place, he took a dish and brought spoon near her mouth, made her eat every bite. It was so delicious but the most wonderful feeling was to have food with Maan hand. She was feeling so special today, it had never happened before. She was feeling like a princess in every way. She also fed him.

"Bas Maan'

She was full now but Maan insisted her to eat one more thing that he had made himself for her.

"Ye aapne banaya?''

He nodded.

"But you don't like this one, don't you?''

"So what Geet, you also had made everything of my choice when nothing in them you liked'

"Haan per...''

"Please jaan..''

He brought spoon to her mouth, she could not refuse. Happily she ate. They enjoyed dinner teasing each other. After spending quality time in each other's arms they slept in separate rooms.

##

Morning, they drove toward mansion. On the way,

"Maan we can't go together''

"Hmm.. let's go to office first. There will think what to do''

They came office. It was early of morning when they reached, whole office was empty. As usual Maan naughtiness woken up and he lifted Geet and stepped in inside cabin.

"Maan mujhe niche uthariye na..''

"No one will see today Geet, so shut your mouth otherwise, I will... ' his teasing eyes made Geet blush.

"Chup..'' she kept forefinger on his mouth. Maan put her on chair. He took out his phone from pocket and dialed a number,

"Whom you calling''

He wanted to reply when call had been received.

"Hello Annie..''

"Bhai.. itni subah q call kiya, any urgent?'' She just woken up from her sleeps and was in lost mind. Suddenly she remembered the entire stuff.

"Oh I'm sorry, I'd forgot, are you back from your mini honeymoon Bhai!!'' she bit tongue, and smirked.

"Annie!!!!'' Maan angered, but here his face turned red thinking about last night. Geet noticed this change and heard his shout. She could not guess difference between was he angry or blushing. She came to him.

Maan looked her coming he turned, that would not feel more embarrassment, she followed his turn. She moved head, gesturing what happened', he rolled eyes and signaled her to be quite.

He told Annie to inform Dadi that she had dropped Geet directly office.

"Why Bhai, why office?'' She meant to tease him more but then controlled, "okay okay.. sorry, I'll inform Dadi''

They ended call. Geet was still wandering about the reason of his red cheeks,

"Maan bataiye na, what happened? Why your face became red, is everything alright?'' .. "Annie toh thik hai na!!!''

Maan smirked secretly, he started moving to her.

"Maan?'' She was surprised,

"Hmm..''

"Aap ye.. '

"Kya mai Geet..''

She hit the door behind. Maan trapped her in his arms cage.

"You wanted to know the reason, why my face was red, haina Geet'

She nodded still getting nervous with his nearness.

"She was asking ..'' he neared to her face, nuzzled his nose in her cheeks, smelling her scent..

"What asking?'' She asked.. still trying hard to control her untamed condition,

Maan looked her, he smirked. "She asked, how was our honeymoon..''

Hearing this Geet face turned into scarlet instantly and she could not meet eyes with him, she smiled shyly and wanted to escape but was helpless, Maan did not releasing her. He held her chin and made her look up,

"Why your face turned red Geet..''

She could not answer, just smiled.

"won't you ask what else Annie asked.. hmm''

She shook head. She tried to push him back with her fragile hands which resulted out as a feather touch only, he held her hands and kissed them. She was dying in shy; she hid face in his chest slipping arms to his shoulder. Maan tightened hold, made her feel cozy,

When suddenly he felt, he saw something through glass door.

Geet sensed change in his touch, she looked him, found him staring out.

"What are you looking?''

"Nothing jaan.. ' he smiled. But his mind was still alarming he must have seen something, someone there in office.

"I should go and check' he thought. He said Geet to wait there and he will come back in just few minutes.

"But where are you going?'' She was puzzled.

"don't take tension Geet, I'll go and come in a moment. You wait me here''

She nodded. Maan left in way where he had seen the strange moving shadow.

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"Who's there?''

He heard footsteps; he turned in direction and saw someone hiding behind blinds. He rushed there.

"who's there.. I say come out!!!''

He went behind blinds but person had escaped. He looked around, place was empty. He pushed hair back in frustration. He tried to find in every corner but seemed person had disappeared in thin air. Suddenly he remembered Geet,

"I have left her alone!!!''

Sensing the existence of a stranger he rushed back to Geet but cabin was empty.

"Geeettt!!!!''

He called out!!

He looked around, in corridor, in cabins, in washroom but she was nowhere.

He walked hurriedly toward lift,, then again came back to check if she had taken her belonging with her. Her bag was as usual kept on table. He called her, it came switched off. His worry now took over his mind. He called guard and asked if he had seen Geet going out but guard said no! Even he said saw no other person coming inside building.

"Where can she go?''

He was rushing to lift when felt heard something from upper floor, he immediately rushed upstairs.

As he reached his eyes widen to see blood on floor!!

"Geeettt where are you''

He yelled out .. Like a mad!

He could not understand what to do. He called police..He was running everywhere to find her when a loud bomb like sound hit his ears and Geet scream. It came from inside storeroom he speeded there and stooped rooted on entrance.. his eyes widen in shock...





Precap : "Maan I did not want to do this.. Maan it happened.. what I do.. please tell me Maan!!!!!'' She cried clutching his collar..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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https://www.emoticones-avenue.com/emoticones/love_heart_14.gif lovely part...

loved maans khichaayi by annie...

but jo lovey dovey moments tha sab tumne ek jhatke main tod phod diya...


scared reading the teaser...

have geet shot some one? may be asha???

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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amazing n wonderful part as usual... but the precap seems like geet killed someone but it may turn out something else!!

eagerly waiting to read what happens now...
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread
Nice part
Loved maaneet moments
Somebody came to office & maan couldn't find that person
I think geet must have shot the person to escape
.Eagerly waiting for the next update
Edited by -Mithuna- - 11 years ago
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Hi Mona ...


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congrats 4 da new thread...aur ye kahan rok diya...??waiting 4 next update eagerly...
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nice update
is asha back?
in precap is she asha?
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