Downpour#11 UPDATED Epilogue Pg 106 @ 19 Oct - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow mona ...lagta hei dosa apna kamal dikha reha hei,,,,😆waiting,,,😛abhii dogiii ya eve, mein,,,,,,,???
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hi,,,😊kanha gayab thiii??
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

wow mona ...lagta hei dosa apna kamal dikha reha hei,,,,😆waiting,,,😛abhii dogiii ya eve, mein,,,,,,,???



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Posted: 11 years ago
awww,,,,waiting ,,,,😃SS ka updtt typ karna mat bhulna,,,,😆 aaj 1st dy kaisa reha,,,,?? sab kush nu dala hei kya...??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

awww,,,,waiting ,,,,😃SS ka updtt typ karna mat bhulna,,,,😆 aaj 1st dy kaisa reha,,,,?? sab kush nu dala hei kya...??




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The Downpour... Epilogue


It was a beautiful valley in mountains with cloud kissing tall trees at both sides of roads and small leaves of sprinkled grasses on ground was creating a wonderful scene for sight viewing. Walking on snow covered paths, sound of crushing chilled wood lops below her shoes when Geet heard she could not stop herself but to grin like a thrilled child. "It's so beautiful Maan', she chirped almost jumping holding his arm in excitement seeing at the scene before her eyes. She never had imagined it would look this much wonderful to feel in real. This was beyond her dream that was made true by her loving husband who was looking at her glowing face and shinning eyes, smiling.

Geet took some more steps looking up to blue sky filled with snow white clouds and then a bird tweet attracted her attention she turned face right to find the source of this cheep but couldn't get any in swinging Devdaar leaves. She made face, "Maan where is bird?'

Maan laughed at her unseen behavior which he loved to the core. He looked at her little wife who was completely engrossed in this sight and watching every little detail of nature with stretched eyes. She was engrossed fully that tripped several times while walking and Maan had to shout out but still she didn't changed. He watched her walking before him and was following with slow pace, thinking about the night of their wedding. How much scared she was throughout to open up with him and now after a week still he could see same nervousness before surrendering herself to him but now her excitement was an added dcor in their beautiful and passion filled relation.

"Ahh!!'

Suddenly chain of his thought broke when heard her cry, his eyes turned to her falling on road holding ankle and groaning in pain. "Geett!!' he runs. "What happened? ''. He lifted her in arms and brought to side by ground area and put her down on lumber. "Kaha than a dekh ke chalo, now show me!!', he commanded her and she like a small puppy did what he said still moaning in pain. Maan removed her shoes and caressed her hurt ankle. Warmth of his palm made her feel pleasure in this icy cold weather and his care made her stare him with rooted eyes. Maan sensed the silence from her and glimpsed up, found her lost in him and smiled. He then kissed her feet and Geet suddenly stirred from her semi- sleep. She felt fire inside her shivering body.

"Is it still hurting?'

She shook head aimlessly; her eyes on him and Maan very much loved her pure attention over his every little act. He made her shoes on again and stood up and lifted his hand toward her to hold it. Her eyes followed his moves and then roamed over his advanced hand. But instead of holding his hand she spread her both arms like a small baby and smiled with naughty eyes. Maan chuckled, he corrected her shawl first for not to let her feel any cold and then lifted in arms. He started walking toward car which was parked not so far from there. Geet wrapped arms around his neck. She was not removing gaze from his face and suddenly Maan felt her soft lips on his cheek. He shivered. Still her one touch could do wonder with his senses he couldn't believe this fact. Her little touch could stimulate his longing for her as same as he had felt at their wedding night. Geet giggled knowing what effect her touch was supposed to do with him. She started giving trail of kisses on his face along with feather strokes with her soft fingers around neck forced him to groan in pleasure. He showed his big eyes to her that made Geet laugh.

They had reached to car. Maan put her down on ground and after unlocking the key they settled inside. As Geet closed the door of her side Maan pulled her at once and before she could understand what happened, her face and neck had been filled with his deep kisses. She first giggled with the tickling sensation then started shivering when felt removal of shawl from her body followed by Dupatta.

"Maan' she moaned his name gripping his sweater tightly and her body started reacting in same way he had aimed for. She started losing her sense, sitting in his lap. Her semi-conscious mind slowly started feeling bare on her back when his hand started lowering the zip of her suit. Her hold tightened fearing she may die if would leave the hold. Her body felt complete lack of material on back and half of her front. Her unclothed shoulder and arms now was being savor by his lips. His hands were roaming purposefully on her body everywhere to tease her dead senses if there was any at the time and then he stopped.

Geet warm and heavy breathes was yet falling at side of his face. He could hear those loud heartbeats of her chest against his, piercing through his thick sweater. Both were similarly panting but the only difference was, Maan had naughty smirk and Geet had closed eyes with skipping gasps. His hands were still traveling over her exposed back and rest dangling clothes wanted to get rid of from her sooner.

"Are you okay?'

Finally Maan asked caressing her cheek and hairs lovingly when found her calmly sitting in his lap and hugging with lose hold. She nodded and smiled. "I want to go home', she whispered. She raised her head and looked him, her eyes were still dizzy. Maan couldn't resist the revelation of her body and grabbed her plump lips inside his mouth and kissed her passionately, enjoyable till her last breath and when felt her weary, he released from his sweet torture and peaked her forehead.

"Love you Geet', he breathed catching air in lungs.

"I love you too Maan so much!!'' she hugged him so tight, hiding a drop of tear in eyes of happiness which Babaji had blessed her.

She stirred to go back to her seat when Maan disallowed her to leave. Geet then corrected her position, sat in his lap, touching back to him and keeping face toward road. Maan took her half body inside his sweater that she would feel warm. He started car hugging her from back, kissing and teasing, toward the small journey for their small cottage. This beautiful journey led them to millions of beautiful moments of life till their last breathes and for the decor of their moments, small clouds started showering down snow from sky. It was a proof from Babaji that with Downpour their relation had started now had been transformed into solid show, that could not have broken easily.


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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😛 me ist,,,,on epilog... hi ,,priya maine tera chura lia,,,,😛😆kaisa reha function,,,??
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main second aagayi hoon😃

maaneet on honeymoon and geet enjoying nature but mona tune place nahi batayi 😉 humbhi tho mazaa lethe😉place ke baaremein sochkar😆😆
arey waah mona ab iss epi ke baad tho hum chaaron tumhe chodenge nahi😉😆😆😆sarvagun sampanna😆

yehle tere liye




Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

😛 me ist,,,,on epilog... hi ,,priya maine tera chura lia,,,,😛😆kaisa reha function,,,??



badiya tha but choti bohut strain hogayi hai
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badiya tha but choti bohut strain hogayi hai

nite function tha kya,,,??

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