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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Superb 👏

It was tragic at first, Khushi showed broken down as world around her was getting dark but someone brought a ray to light it, arnav. He save Khushi and heal her with love. Because arnav and Khushi will be always together and present for each other HAMESHA.

Beautiful work.

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Nice os dear

You had portrated different version of khushi

At first I was confused on how things will change

But I really liked the ending

Arnav is really good.HE is a real savior

You are an awesome writer

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Rafaheli

@Rafaheli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

OMG..this was just amazing! ❤️

The way u described every situation,every emotion giving importance to every tiny details..Just loved it it! Keep up ur good work..! 👍🏼

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

INTENSE OS BEAUTIFULLY DONE SO MUCH AGHAST IN IT KHUSHI WAS NOT A GOOD GIRL ARNAV LOVE MADE HER GIVE UP HER PAST AND MOVE PAST ALL THE HURT AND PAIN AND HATE AMAZING OS BEAUTIFULLY DONE

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Wow... Wow and Wow.
You write really well.
I loved this.

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Rekha

@Caskett

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

This is really good work for a first time writer.
Continue writing 😊

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Beautiphul os...
Very well written
cant believe that this is ur first os.
Loved it

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Res

--edited--

Firstly, a quote this reminded me of:

"You will find that it is necessary to let things go; simply for the reason that they are heavy. So let them go, let go of them. I tie no weights to my ankles." - C. Joybell C.

Now...

W.O.W

This was amazing. Brilliant, actually.

Roles were reversed. Situations were harder.

I think this how the show should have been, albeit vice versa, but I always imagined Arnav with a more painful past and Khushi to be his only saving grace.

Anywho...

There were a lot of wonderful, moving aspects to this piece!

Khushi's life - personal and professional - was so full of issues, whether they were her fault or not, her life was a complete and utter mess.

But he came. Arnav came. Picked up all the pieces, dusted them off and carefully put them back together.

At the end my only thought was - Khushi ke bina koi Arnav nahi and Arnav ke bina koi Khushi nahi.

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

love the story so intense and sad but the feeling of calmness is in it too anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Oh that OS was amazing ...glad I was recommended it
The way Arnav came to her rescue when she was at her lowest took my breath away
Poor lass had lost a lot n then to have lost her sis after their convo was heart wrenching n to top it all she had to give herself to that cheating sleeze Shyam no wonder she felt dirty
But again Arnav was there to save the day n bring her back from disrepair with his love
Truly awesome story

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