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Posted: 12 years ago
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I do not deserve so much praise really. I do not consider myself a good enough writer. But if I have inspired you to pen this then lemme tell you I am deeply honored 😊

Now to the story.

See, you are better than me. I cant write angst. But you did and did a great job of it too.

This is the 1st time I am reading of a philandering and wasted Khushi... who sleeps around for deals, isnt with her dying sister, who has turned into a woman her mother would hate.

But I love happy endings.

And you gave me just that. Bringing our Arnav, dear saviour... who brought healing, love and passion to her life.

Fixed it for her.

Obviously it will take time for Khushi to let go off her past but Arnav hain na. Sab sahi hoga šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah!!

I cant believe this is your first ever OS dear...!!

So beautifully written!!

And not to forget that this one is dedicated to one of the most talented writers of IF.. Rasgulla ji...
šŸ¤—


Back to the story..

It was sad in the start.. I was biting my nails all the way.. Felt sad for Payal and her last words broke my heart ji!! šŸ˜”

Khushi tried to harm herself.. Thank God Arnav reached there before worst would have happened..!

Loved the ending.. Arnav's love truly changed her...
So beautiful...

Do write more ji..

Love
J


ps : Rasgulla... I'm on the forst page šŸ˜†
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Edited by Sarunfanatic_Ji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sob... 😭
such a fantastis os
loved it
😊
thanks fr d pm
Edited by massu91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jus awesome yaar...lovedd it...jus wow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Camlin ,
this is Ajoop , I loved your work ,too intense ,but good ,Arnav brought her back ,loved the ending 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is one of the best os i have ever read...wow simply amazing hun...sooo very sad,beautiful and everything else...loved it very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so emotional...

Beautiful OS!!! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazingly written...
i.think u shud write more no.of os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW Pakhe u stole it love!

A big Salute to you and HATS OFF TO U for such an awesome writing.

Khushi's pain,her sufferings you described so well.

Arnav was so understanding in this os.So beautifully you portrait their relationships.

A bid hug and muahhh to you for writin this beautiful yet emotional Os.

You r absolutely right about SAIYU.She is an awesome and amazing writer.I have read her fairy tale and trust me her work is worth reading.The way she describe her story and characters are just mindblowing.I too m a fan of her writings.

Thanks for pming me this Os.
It was fab!!
Edited by Hina69 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey thnxx for d pm
loved d update.
Amazingly good.
Very well written.
Ohh god so emotional, it had to much depth in it. Dis cudnt hav been more better. Feel like readin it again and again. Wooow is d nly word wich comes in my mind. Excellent

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