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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I can't believe its ur first piece of writing

its wonderful

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

you are an awesome writer girl..

and i really mean it

the way you have portrayed khushi,s thoughts,her feelings,her depression and her helplessness..commendable..i felt like hugging you lol..

Loved it..

you should really write more...:)

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sindhu

@sarun21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

amazing and awesome os...

simply superb...

loved it very much...

really loved ur way of writing...

u have clearly shown her feelings depression and everything...

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

CAM LIN ...THIS WAS DIFFERENT SAD N SOUR IN THE BEGINNING

BUT CALM N CONTROLLED IN THE END

THANKS RAS SP FOR YOUR CONTRIBUTION YOUR PUSH N

YOUR ASSISTANCE TO MAKE THIS SO UTTERLY NICE

YESSS..NOTHINGS GONNA CHANGE MY LOVE FOR RAS SP N S F JI

YOU GIRLS ARE MY ''KARAN N ARJUN ''

AYENGEY MERE KARAN ARJUN AYENGEY JI 😃

THIS WAS AN EFFORT PRAISE WORTHY

KEEP WRITING N ALERT ME

I AM GAME FOR ANYTHING N EVERYTHING THAT HAS'' RAS SP ''

N'' S F JI ''IN IT 😛

KKKA

Edited by KKKA - 12 years ago

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Preety_woman

@Preety_woman

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

You said this is your first one.too good

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Loved it. It was just awesome dear. You should write more.

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

wow... like purely wow !!! 👏

u are super freaking amazing !!! 😳

gosh am gonna bookmark this OS... its so damn beautiful !!!

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zyra

@Zyra

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Amazing. You wrote angst and that too so beautifully. 👏 Really, I was so moved to read this OS and now have fallen in love with this Arnav. He is so caring, so supporting so strong. Read about a weak tarnished Khushi for the first time and loved your attempt on this.

Any chances of you giving us another shot of this ?? Just wondering 😳

And write some more, you are good👍🏼