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snehal.sharma

@snehal.sharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Amazing os

I can't believe that this is ur first os

Beautifully written

Loved it

Great work 😊

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

That was so beautiful. True and deep love. That only Arnav can have for Kushi. tfs

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Nice Os love the happy ending. Arnav is really angel for her who heal her all pain and love her unconditionally. Beautifully written
Feel sad in the start but later on i feel good by seeing arnav in her life as her friend and then became her husband
Payal death realize her that she is so wrong but ten arnav came and remove all her pain
Nicely written i like your OS.
This is your first writing but u write it very well. Keep it up.👏👏

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Just W.O.W ...U left me speechless with this..I dont know what to say...Seriously great job...wonderfully written...

The pain,hurt & seeing Khushi,it ripped my heart but at the end True love can heal anything...Im happy that she found her love & accepted it...

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

awesome OS...

loved the way u described her nightmare...

keep writing:)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

wow her past sure was scary
but am glad she had him to get through it all
or god knows how she would have ended up
probably dead for sure

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-BarunKiMeera-

@-BarunKiMeera-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

wowww.. it's tooo beautifully written..
u left me speechless.. loved it like hell
thanx for pm..

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

amazing OS

loved it ! 😊

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

u have no clue how much i love this os of urs!

its amazing to see this kind of khushi who uses s*x as means of profit!

i was really surprised to read such a story!

i loved the broken khushi and the healer Arnav!

it was such an honour to read such a story!

uve really got some amazing idea in that head of urs!:D

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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

beautiful...he helped her heal her,,,,,, i always like the stroies where Arnav is the sweetheart like dream come true prince ----- every girl dream price

loved it

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