ManVeer OS: ~*~A Heart Full Of Love~*~

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesme os ...😉👏👏 loved it...❤️❤️❤️.

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow! this was such a sweet os

i loved it so much

the supernatural part was so beautifully explained

looking forward for more os from you

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

comment edited at pg 1...srry 4 editing it late.

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Kavya

@Kavi.Kapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesommme 👏👏👏

Luv it loads😳.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

WOW Zainab , that was the best OS , that I ever read😳. It was too beautiful. Extremely interesting and very well written 👏. The first part was sad , with Uday falling in love with a spirit ... then she asked him to burn her corpse 😭 - that was heart-breaking 🥺. Uday finding Manyata was second time around was great 👍🏼 . Loved how she swore at him and how he shut her up😉. 2 parts were absolutely hillarious ... 1, when she wondered if the kiss was a new way of saying "sorry" . And the other was when she asked his name on their wedding night ☺️!!!! And the ending was just PERFECT😃. At that point , I also wanted a chocolate smoothie 😉😆!!!! I truly loved this story Zainab ... it was wonderful!!!!!!!! PS - I did not "LIKE" the update because something is wrong with my "like" button 😭 . SORRY !!!!!!

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

this i call it a love story a true love story ... 1 st jo manyta ke sath hua ... usne tho rula hi diya ... 😭 but i that manyta ... jiski abuse mai bhi pyaar hota hai !!! 😃 n kissing seen was awesome 😳 lovely jab uday ko propose karta hai ... lol ... manyta ki shadi ho gayi ... or usay uday ka naam hi nhi ptha n the last wala screen was awesome ... !! lovely story ... 👏

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome update, loved it
First part was a bit emotional
But the part where Manyata asks Uday his name is very funny
Thanks for the pm
Loved the os, beautifully written 👏 👏 👏