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Oyster

@Oyster

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Posted: 11 years ago

Guys honest reviews please. And this time I did not steal any lines from Shakespeare ji. So it is my own bakwaas!

If you decide to be nice and just say positive things, I'll never improve. And the very reason I decided to attempt more is cuz of your encouragement.

With your constructive criticism if I can review it enough, I might try asking Ragzy to include it in Sanzy's Bday thread. See I never thought I'd be capable of contributing a siggy-type gift par you never know.. Well the chances are very slim that Ragzy would agree since she said 1st september's the deadline. And she carved it on stone. Par I just completed two tasks she had given me which makes her happy so she could possibly make an exception for me based on that..!

And oh please make sure you comment before this thread gets closed. IF rules tend to be beyond me and not to forget, thanks to the stalkers who are interested in everything we do here other than their own lives.

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ipkarshi

@ipkarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

WOW!!!! thats nice!!! really amazing! I loved it. the lighting looks great

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mpat

@mpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

You come up such nice poetry and thoughts it's hard to criticize. Love your lines OK...so here goes, nice photo of Sanaya...perhaps adjust the coloring a bit so it looks more natural. 😊

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's beautiful! Love it! :D

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showviewer

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Posted: 11 years ago

I have no talent in such things so for me it's really good, but if I look at it with a critical eye the color is too dark and the matte finish may look better if it is a bit subtle with less dark lines appearing, until you are going for bit of a distressed effect.

Your poetry is interesting.

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Pyarme

@Pyarme

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh oyster you are so talented awesome pls keep it up 👏

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 11 years ago

WOW! Beautiful eyes of Sanaya. That's what stands out. The coloring looks a bit artificial. I'm trying to get past the eyes, they are so mesmerizing...

Your poetry is different. It's a play of words - opposites. But I'm not sure what it's telling. Is that the secret?

Fabulous edit!

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Oyster

@Oyster

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr
WOW! Beautiful eyes of Sanaya. That's what stands out. The coloring looks a bit artificial. I'm trying to get past the eyes, they are so mesmerizing...
Your poetry is different. It's a play of words - opposites. But I'm not sure what it's telling. Is that the secret?
Fabulous edit!

Thanks Jaani. As for the lines (if you can call them poetry!) here's what I meant:

Draped with sunlight (since the moon is takes light from the sun)

Calmer than the dead (the moon remains in that state of astonishment)

It gazes through the cloudless night (It refers to the moon)

So that some of her secrets could be read (So basically the moon is trying to find out what makes Sanaya so beautiful despite the fact that the moon itself is lighted by the sun. So it's like the moon is kind of envious).

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

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Posted: 11 years ago

Am not very good at these but based on the appearance i feel the flowery design on the side reduces the mysterious effect of the rest of the background and the poem..The poem is really good n makes our KKG seem very mysterious with a lot to hide..

😊 I'm saying this only coz u asked for criticism but otherwise really liked it..

Edited- Had another look, still feel that the design interrupts the play of colours of light.. I read ur interpretation of the poem too.. That too seems to have more to do with sun moon n the light..

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Oyster

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Msfrootie
Am not very good at these but based on the appearance i feel the flowery design on the side reduces the mysterious effect of the rest of the background and the poem..The poem is really good n makes our KKG seem very mysterious with a lot to hide..
😊I'm saying this only coz u asked for criticism but otherwise really liked it..

Edited- Had another look, still feel that the design interrupts the play of colours of light.. I read ur interpretation of the poem too.. That too seems to have more to do with sun moon n the light..

And I truly appreciate your criticism. Thank you so much. I will redo it with your pointers in mind.

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