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a suspense filled update.. i think arnav is sort of obsessed with khushi right from the moment he saw her photo. probably he must be waiting for this 4 years for her to grow up so that he can claim her.

Awesome update as usual...

all the parts nice

Two updates in a day!..wow!
so arnav finally realised he loves khushi..
did nk created a mu about lavanya in asr's mind? he is now trying to defeat asr by using khushi..
in every update we got some answers but more question..its really awesome..
update soon

Wow! Aren't you generous giving us two updates (really three) in one day! Thanks so much!

I don't know where and who to start with, Mari you have thrown so much at me today what with all these more than one update and too much information. You promised more answers today but you alone has the ability to give answers which give rise to many more questions. Not fair.

I think I will start with NK.. Well I must say that I did't see that coming...Arnav seemed the real villain uptill now but behind all his actions he had a motive but what motive did NK had? Why does he hate his brother? Is he also suffering from some mental illness. Will Khushi pay the ultimate price and she will be sacrificed at the alter of evil? As that's the feel I am getting unless she can be saved and only person who can do that is Arnav but she hates him with the passion and I don't blame her but I think in front of NK and what he is planning to take the revenge from Arnav using Khushi as some how he has realised that Arnav has feelings for Khushi and he can get him through Khushi and Khushi might make it easier for NK herself as she might see him as her saviour from the guided cage. I think she should take the moral behind the saying seriously 'better the devil you know'. NK says he was in love with Khushi, did he confess that to her and Khushi the way she reacted in the party to Arnav physically at that time, she would't have if she really was in love with NK. At the end of chapter 8 did she just walk in Devils Den?

Lavanya is completely deranged and now living in past where she thinks Khushi is fourteen year old and Arnav is having his way with her. She is in mental asylum. When and who brought her here. Khushi comes to see La, so Arnav allows her to come and go as she pleases and she is not a complete prisoner.. I hope she was at least she would have been safe rather than falling for NK'd trick.

ASR has completely and utterly lost it...oh no I wished for him to be in love with Khushi but is that what ASR in love behaves or acts like after seeing ASR in love I would rather have a manipulative and calculating ASR any day in between all this madness he is feeling Arnav makes his presence known as well but only fleetingly and he is as obsessed and deranged too. ASR in a mess and he has lost the plot or is it just me who is feeling like that. He has started breathing and living Khushi and he has accepted that for him Khushi is it and no other woman will do.

It just occurred to me.. Will Khushi ends up loosing the baby???

Mari what are you trying to do to me? what with this update you have completely floored me. What an accomplished writer you really are, so many twists and turns weaved in such a way that every update leaves you reeling and you feel the heat right down to the tips of your toes.

Oh My you have dedicated the chapter to me, and you picked just the right chapter to do it too, I can only thank you and you have humbled me , can i ask you that did I really deserved it?

Please continue soon. Will be waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks for the updates.

Holy crap!! This story just gets more and more tangled!! I think I may be getting a bit lost in the midst of all this now. I don't know where to begin commenting!!!