Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Will update this once I update my other FF :)
Just a few days.

You write one more FF? Ca u pls PM me? Or you are talking about the new story you started?

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

loved that u showed Khushi and Payal with self respect and true sisterly love...
also loved Aakash's true love for Payal and her sister...the way he protected Khushi's interest inspite of himself leading 2 a life full of pain and loneliness just 2 do things in right way...
Arnav has 2 work really hard 2 heal her pain...
loved this strong Khushi 2 d core which was missing in the show...
awesome storyline...update soon...

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Enjoyed this chapter and their sheer helplessness...well done...do update me.

Thanks

Anupama

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Give us the next part A. 😕

Get back soon. 😛

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: shree10

You write one more FF? Ca u pls PM me? Or you are talking about the new story you started?

Yes, I do write more than one FF. But the one that I was referring to is called Pablo's Muse, which is based on a different show.

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Guys, I'm back to Liquorice Burning since I'm done with that other long pending FF of mine.

Started writing the next part so give me a few days. Will post as soon as possible :)

Ciao,

Aria

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: -Aria-
Guys, I'm back to Liquorice Burning since I'm done with that other long pending FF of mine.

Started writing the next part so give me a few days. Will post as soon as possible :)

Ciao,
Aria

I am just practicing my stalking skills 😆😆...

I am glad to hear we'll get an update soon, because there are three songs that I have been listening to that keep reminding me of LB 😃, will share them with next update.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: sarthshru
beautifull..
the termoil...the anxiety..
i feel a constraint in my thrat everytime i read ths !
hpe u will update soon !

Thank you S.

I will update soon ;)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: manikka
superb part dear...
sorry for late replies...

this is certainly a new khushi...and there is nothing like tht khushi in this girl who's thoughts has tormented the ASR's day & night for years...her changed attitude without the old helplessness tht is digging hole in arnav's heart and mind tht is already sore with guilt...arnav has never known this khushi and realisation dawning tht its fully his doing tht has changed khushi in this girl has shaken his mind...and he can't even utter a single words in front of her...

and the same goes with khushi...she has never thought tht she will see arnav taking time to speak...seeing him..she was mentally ready to be dragged, pulled etc...but nothing like tht sort happened...
i really feel bad for both of them...both facing pain in love...
thnks for the PM dear...
it was awesome part...
well written...

Aww...no worries. Arnav is definitely going to have to realise what he has done and he's seen bits of that already with this Khushi. He can handle a crazy Khushi, a mighty pissed one will take some re-working but he will come around eventually ;) Let's see how both of them try to heal the other. Thank you for sharing your thoughts M.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: -Harjas-
Wow, this is one beautiful story i came across! Although its confusing at times, but that adds to the suspense of the plot! I love this independent khuhsi! Looking forward to read more! Do accept my buddy request, would love to receive a notifying PM.

Welcome to the thread! And Thanks for commenting :) Will send you a PM when I update next.