Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21 - Page 74

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Will update this once I update my other FF :)

Just a few days.

Originally posted by: shree10

You write one more FF? Ca u pls PM me? Or you are talking about the new story you started?

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Guys, I'm back to Liquorice Burning since I'm done with that other long pending FF of mine.

Started writing the next part so give me a few days. Will post as soon as possible :)

Ciao,

Aria

Originally posted by: sarthshru

beautifull..

the termoil...the anxiety..

i feel a constraint in my thrat everytime i read ths !

hpe u will update soon !

Originally posted by: manikka

superb part dear...

sorry for late replies...

this is certainly a new khushi...and there is nothing like tht khushi in this girl who's thoughts has tormented the ASR's day & night for years...her changed attitude without the old helplessness tht is digging hole in arnav's heart and mind tht is already sore with guilt...arnav has never known this khushi and realisation dawning tht its fully his doing tht has changed khushi in this girl has shaken his mind...and he can't even utter a single words in front of her...

and the same goes with khushi...she has never thought tht she will see arnav taking time to speak...seeing him..she was mentally ready to be dragged, pulled etc...but nothing like tht sort happened...

i really feel bad for both of them...both facing pain in love...

thnks for the PM dear...

it was awesome part...

well written...

Originally posted by: -Harjas-

Wow, this is one beautiful story i came across! Although its confusing at times, but that adds to the suspense of the plot! I love this independent khuhsi! Looking forward to read more! Do accept my buddy request, would love to receive a notifying PM.