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Posted: 11 years ago
Feel really bad for Andrew, but its his mistake.
He was in relation with her knowing it, so can't blame Geet for the pain when she was clear what she want with him.
And you never fail to shoow the glimpse of soft Geet who still have feelings and respect it.
Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
As usual awsome blossom 👏but confusion hi confusion hai solution kuch payha nahi😕.who is pari,rahul,dad geets dad n who is arjun awww.muski u r such tease naughty girl lagaha hai yash or mansi ki mumma unki tharah naughty ho rahe hai😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
So they had past.
waiting eagerly for the past to unfold and how you gonna meet up them.
Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
owesomeee today i got the chance to read it muskaan . now waiting for the meeting of maneet. wowww
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...loved all tge parts...geet must have been hyrt so much to act like this... maans story just got onteredting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read both the updates...
and seriously i have got one bunch of questions...
rahul is her kid???
and then who is this arjun whom she was with for 3 years... phew.. its all confusing...
and geet seemed to share things only with sasha... she doesnt want to stick to emotions, but just have fun...
and the past... MK is maan i guess.. pari didi and the girl who is calling that - is it Geet??
so much of questions.. and Maan is back to NYC...
waiting for the next!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
She has lost hope in relations.
Is Arjun the reason or is it Maan somehow?
I like the uncertainity of the beginning of a story where we can imagine anything possible for the characters, call me weird...😆
I am glad she did not go back to Andrew; it would be using him at that point and also cruel.
Thanks for the update Muskan.
Looking forward to more soon.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it

past opening up

interesting

918644 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..so finally we will get to read the past of maaneet..eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 6

PAST CONTINUED
I am travelling won't be able to update for couple of days
PLEASE LIKE & LONG COMMENTS

Oh my my she was face to face with the MK.. she gulped. The president of the high school. He has that bad boy, arrogant attitude he uses actually works on all the girls but also that sweet boy next door charm he uses around parents. She had heard a lot about him from all the friends possible & the most from Radha aunty.
Radha aunty would spend hours cribbing about the girls who he would get home on pretax of group studies. The way she would imitate them.. & the way she would worry if he used protection at all. She spoke to her literally everything.
After joining Radha's day care center couple of years ago, Geet didn't miss her mom much. It was literally her second home. Immediately after her school gets over, she would rush to the day care center. Well it payed her too.
She had seen his photo couple of times probably seen him in the house once & once when he came to the drop off something in the day care. Never so close though & surely not when he was right seeing through her.
He seemed really tall... I would reach to his chin.. wait why am I thinking where I would reach to him.. she shrugged her thoughts. Umm.. where was I.. yah.. he is quiet tall.. & has curly.. not exactly kind of wavey black hair. The kind one would want to run the hands throw all day. His eyes dark.. with a that hint of depth that just disappears. His body is definitely good. She was sure he worked out. Actually she knew he did.. thanks to Radha aunty. She knew all about his routine may be more than him. Even the girl he slept with last night. Every girl in the school.. could say in this town.. wanted him. Well every girl... not her.. atleast thats what she wanted to believe. To her he seemed like a normal arrogant jerk. Ironically every one seem to want him & she honestly thought she hated such guys.

Radha " ussen niche uttaroo Maan
he made that cute face.. trust me that was to kill for
he tickled the little girl, who squealed & jumped into her pari didi's lap
geet caught her just at the right moment.. his hands softly nestled in hers under the little girls back & his eyes still glued at those hazels
Radha "oh .. I forgot to introduce"
she is Geet
geet looked at him uneasily "take ur glare off my body" she was so annoyed & stern
he chuckled yet again that killing one
he raised his brows & stepped back softly slipping his hands off hers "OK" & grins naughtily "what about my hands?" while licking his lips nasty yucky way
she can't believe he actually said that with his mom standing right their.
How could he? Dammit how dare he? No one ever spoke to her like that. Common she is not his type.
Gross how cheaply he licked his lips. His lips.. umm. ... she pouted ever so cutely at herself contradicting thoughts.


Just then Radha aunty warned him sternly "Maan"
Geet carried the little girl behind the stage, not missing mom " son talk something &his eyes looking at her & then at his mom. He gives a good bye kiss to his mom & walks away not before tossing a look & wink at her.
She makes that big O face.

It was some Indian Association function for Diwali. The little kids were dancing & Geet was performing as their pari. It was a small stage & pretty much known family & friends audience. It was this closed group of Indian families from the common neighborhood who got together for festivals. Like home away from home. Geet was supposed to be in the middle & the little girls & boys who twilled around her dancing, stumbling trying their best to put up a great show.
She warned herself not to look at him. nahi jhali.. bilkul mat dehkna.. she kept mumbling all the while. It was so crazy feel. U know that typical feel, u know someone is just looking at u, getting under ur skin types & u just don't want to look at him.
She tried so best not to look at him.. but then finally giving in to that hopeless urge she looks at the direction she knew he was standing. Dammit how did she even know he was there, right at that spot. He stood right at the corner next to the huge vase.
She glared at him irritated. Luckily the concentration was on the little ones not on her.. she looked down to check if something was wrong with her costume or anything was a mess. Then throws back at him a what question with her brows.. he just shakes his head & winks at her again. She just looked away irritated.
She tries her best to ignore it. Next few mins of the performance she just refuses to his .. I am looking silent irritating feel. She is not looking at him. NO ways.
The moment the performance gets over Geet runs out helping the little cuties of the stage. More for herself away from his seeing throw laser type eyes. Who seem to even talk to her.. for god sake.. she was not even looking at him.

Christy, geets best friend run into her & squeals .. "that was just so perfect. U looked so so sexy"
Oh yes that was much required diversion. But didn't last long.. How did she even forget Christy had that thing for MK. There she started her drooling session. He is so sexy in that dress of guys wear with that thing around the neck..
Geet so much had to agree. Yes he really looked hot in that Shervani he wore. His legs looked so long in those chudidar type pyjama he wore under that blue embroidered Shervani. Ok .. she did notice him more than she was supposed to.. she tried to warn herself. She twisted her cheeks.. may be u could call it hot. One min.. he didn't wear a duppata did he.. she just looked up to check. Oh lord with that duppata wrapped around his neck he looked so handsome.. she probably just wanted to imitate licking her lips.. but just stared at him instead. She shook her head.. no ways she is not looking at him.. she decides & right when she looks up at him, he looks at her. She immediately look down. She bit her tongue.. she knew he saw her watching him. Babaji!!

please leave me comments & likes it really means a lot
love
muskan
-PART 5 PREV NEXT PART 7 -
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago

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