confession.....a short story

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Posted: 19 years ago
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"CONFESSION"

Holding his hands I am walking along the beach at mid night. We can see blinking lights as if they are dancing …well our hearts are also dancing with joy. We are not speaking any word but this silence is conveying every thing. When we were far from each other...every thing was easy to say but now nothing is so easy ….i want to say a lot but my tongue is and my brain is not supporting me I want to hug him but arms seem so heavy ….I want to keep straight face but this blood stream is not ready to stop just want to reach at my cheek at any cost …..So I am blushing! Since I meet you I am not the same …as I thought you are not like that ….my eyes want to see only your handsome face ….the way you smile …when you forcing your head back …the way you wink ..the way you cooked up your brows the way you put your hands in your pocket this all make me smile …and now I can easily figure out why I fall for you ..It is not like just becoz you are handsome it is because when person's heart is beautiful he automatically looks charming …..

Suddenly I felt he is no more holding my hands I stopped and look back …he is now standing smiling and slowly open his arms …OH GOD I am so happy today it is just me and him no one else so I run in to his arms and he took me with all the love he have for me all I can feel the warmth of his hug and billion trillions of emotions behind. he was happy , sorry , angry and most of all in love with me first I was bit scare then all comfort levels crossed when he tucked me in his arms and took me back home !

Wait let me confess, "Yes shiv(Iqbal here OK) I love you ".



i tried to put emotions and tried alot that when u read it u also feel it

amna

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Nazrin thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayeeeeee........... 😳 wah kya scene hai...... 😳

awwwwwwww that was soooooooo romantic amna......im having goosebumps 😳 toooooooooo gud sweeeety 👏 👏 👏 itz such a wonderfull feeling to imagin IQ slowly opening his arms.... 😳 by the way u didnt mention whoz confession was tht...so i imagined myself in his arms 😳 n confessing my luv 😳 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 it was wonderful !!!!!superb
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nazrin i dont want dinks to kill me OK or eat me as mid nite snack😆 it is gauri only ....... 😉 i dont have prob if u imagine ur self jani 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum scene..... 😳 so cute............... 😆 CONFESSION.....te emotions were ufffffffff....wat to say.....i have no words...u left me speechless yet again!🤗


Junior DON 😳🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

nazrin i dont want dinks to kill me OK or eat me as mid nite snack😆 it is gauri only ....... 😉 i dont have prob if u imagine ur self jani 😳

😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was awesome....

👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

sweeeeeeeeetttttttttttt.......

thnks😳

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