To love another=Part 18-PG61

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To love another....


Hey guys my name is affy and I wrote this novel for my friends but decided to publish it. I hope you guys enjoy it. Its my first time writing so it may be patchy but it usually changes. I ensure that it will keep you guessing and wanting more.


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The novel surrounds a girl Geet moving ahead from her past life. Her enrolment within a fashion institute, guides her towards a new love, friendship and good memories. On the other hand a freshly qualified art teacher trying to adjust to a professor's schedule when his life is changed by the entrance of a female student.

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Hey Kuhu i'm posting my FF wait x
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Rules and Regulations

1) The novel will be written mainly in English, I sincerely apologise for this but my Urdu and Hindi skills are atrocious. When required to do so I will ask my friends for any words that will be suitable for that matter.

2) I appreciate people's opinion and views. I will surely take them on board and adjust them to meet your demands or thoughts. At times my creativity levels will differ from yours but I will aim to keep the novel as intriguing as possible.

3) I'm the most laziest and irresponsible person. Updates may not be regular as normal writers may provide you with. I'm usually very busy as a student so will do my bes to provide you with regular updates. I won't pm anyone as I don't have time, but I will notify readers when an update is due.

Important note
I do not appreciate people writing negative comments or instigating fights. If there is some negativity I would prefer you keep the abuse to yourself. I accept criticisms but not accusations. I have seen my friends become so stressed over it and I won't stand for it.
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Character Sketches

Geet- A young girl who is in search of her long lost fiance. In hope to move on, enrolling in a Paris fashion institute, leads her to developing a new love interest, friends and a revelation from her past.

Maan- A chirpy art professor who aims to become as successful in his job as he has been in life. This soon changes as he meets a female student, who changes his life completely.

Laila and Lizzie- Geet's room mates and friends

Pierre- Geet's new love interest

Ryan- Geet's estranged fiance, and best friend.



Index

Part 1=Page 1

Part 2=Page 2

Part 3=Page 2

Part 4=Page 2

Part 5=Page 2

Part 6=Page 2

Part 7=Page 2

Part 8=Page 2

Part 9=Page 3

Part 10=Page 3

Part 11=Page 5

Part 12=Page 10

Part 13=Page 17

Part 13b=Page 23

Part 14= Page 27

Sneak Peaks= PG 34

Part 15= Page 36

Part 16= Page 37

SP Page=42 and 43

Part 17A=Page 46

Part 17B= Page 55

Part18=Page 61
Edited by x-affy-x - 8 years ago
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congratzz affy 4 ur novel🥳
gud soo see u posting it here😊
from now on i m ur loyal and permanant reader😳
i hope i dont need 2 intr)oduce myself😉
i m going 2 crib for updates wether u r responsible or irresponsible 😉
coming 2 novel
concept seems interesting
geet is engaged 2 some one😲
falling in luv with another person now😲😡
maan as art professor😲 (MSK or ART😆)
falling in luv with his student😡 (if its not geet)
then when they both will fall in luv with eachother?🤔

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Part 1

Once upon a time lived a girl called Geet
She was travelling to Paris for enrolment in the best art college. She swiftly moved her feet across the platform.Her heels clicked across the marble floor, the train was in her sight. She moved faster and faster.
As she paced, her left leg split across a water puddle. "Just what I need today, if I don't get in today, my last hope to see him will go!" Her leg tangled around her suitcase. Her fringe swept in front of her face. In a hurry she picked herself up, causing her her bag to tilt to a certain degree.
Her return pass just lay on the floor. She chapped her lips and smoothed her skirt down. With a huge heave she ran towards the train. The fog started to arise from the chimney and her time was running out.
Her skirt rubbed against her skin, while her tresses flowed from side to side across her face. The train started to run at a faster pace and with that her dreams started to fade.Her heels began to slide with each giant step she took. Suddenly a hand placed out in front of her, she lingered her fingers across his hand. The grip grew stronger to an extent she felt his strength.
With every step she took, his pull grew stronger and stronger.

A pair of arms cupped her waist into the train. Drops of sweat simultaneously fell from her neck towards her chest. His touch travelled further and further upwards until her throat was burning. She shut her eyes in the hope of embracing his live and warmth once again. The hug grew more intimate, with her hands caressing his neck.

Her toes tipped up with so much passion bursting from within her. He was finally here, he hadn't left her. Their love was pure and she knew he would return. She slid her hand across his face, she wanted to paint his face within her heart. She slowly opened her eyes to see a stranger standing opposite her.


Her heart started to sink. Her eyes started to tear up. He did not come, once again her dreams had been shattered. She quickly composed herself and pulled her self away from the stranger. His pull grew stronger as she panicked.


He pulled her closer and closer. She felt his hot breath against her cheeks. Her hair blew across her face, till her eyes were covered. He raised her neck until she was facing a pair of chocolate brown eyes. His eyes seemed dangerous. Chills started to drop down her back. Her blouse started to move up. She closed her eyes with fear until a sweet voice chimed in her ear " your not worth it!" He dropped her on the floor to wallow in her grief. His scent lingered in her hair but all she could remember was pain in his eyes.

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Part 2

The door suddenly opened to a puzzled looking ticket collector quizzingly looking across at Geet. He noticed the tears flowing from this beautiful girls face. A beauty as such should only be spoken of. The girls pearl looking eyes hid so much pain. What happened to this girl?

Excuse me miss, do you need any help? These quarters are restricted for staff only? May I help you towards your seat?
Miss I'm talking to you, miss are you listening to me.
He gently came towards me and shook me, I looked into his eyes to see genuine concern. There are only a few people in the world that actually care about me.
" I'm very well, can you please direct me towards 36A"
I gathered my stuff and moved ahead. Finally I was moving forward.

I splashed water across my face to see my true reflection within the mirror. When was the last time I slept, when did I stop caring about my health. My eyes looked bruised and lips seemed chapped more than ever before. The henna on my hand browner than the mud which was delicately engraved on my hands stood out. I was the perfect bride, what was wrong with me, was I not good enough?


The door rattled furiously, I washed my face quickly and opened the door. I hurried to get towards my seat, but some inconsiderate person brushed past me, causing my blouse to rip in the process. I walked furiously forward with sputum uttering from my mouth. I was exposed every step of the way, this day was going from bad to worse.
I sat on the seat with a sense of security. This was my safe haven, I was protected. Leaving past my behind was the best thing to do. "new start Geet, that's what you need" I reiterated. My eyelids felt very heavy and i soon dozed off to sleep. That's when the dream came...
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Part 3

The loudness of the drum. The sweet singing melodies of a brides farewell. The bright coloured sweets displayed across the palanquin. My world was beautiful filled with laughters and happiness glowing from all dear ones. I was going to be a bride and I was one of those lucky girls that had found my soul mate. He didn't propose the bills and boons way but I was happy, because after 20 years I was marrying the love of my life.

I looked into the mirror to see a girl who looked remarkably like me but with so much more elegance and beauty. Her face was flawless and shining. The red and green of her lengha matched oceanic view of her eyes. The red lips, a set of bangles and a nose ring completed her in ways she couldn't possibly imagine. Her heart fluttered in anticipation for his arrival.
" Will he be amazed to see me like this?"
My heart knew it will perfect all I had to do was wait for his arrival.

The priest had come already and still there was no sign of him. I anxiously held onto my mum. I remember gripping her hand due to my rising anxiety levels. Mums are always the best, she looked at me just placed a black spot near my ear.
" Geet, we all know Ryan and your love. It is so pure that it will forcingly bring him along. Why do you need to worry, my and pa's blessings are with you. Believe on your god and everything will run smoothly."

She placed her hand on my henna to glance at the intricate designs. You never know when mums get teary and mine cried at every tiny detail. I pulled her in closer for a hug. I just wanted to immerse within my mothers fragrance.
Our moment was interrupted by a loud drum beat, which was followed by the procession.

My mum gently kissed my forehead and cupped my face with so much love. Then she was off to welcome the groom. I glanced across to my bed, where I wouldn't sleep anymore. The pink sheets with my me to you bear. Each item collated together made my identity. On my bed side table there was picture of me and Ryan of when we were four. I can't describe when or how much I loved him. I just wanted to be with him forever. He was my best friend more than anything. I looked on my henna to see the small R present , my dream was finally coming true. I gushed with happiness, which led me to the window. The procession had died down which meant they had entered the house. Only a few more minutes and then your finally his.

My dad gently knocked on the door causing me to glance around. All I saw was this frail old man. When had my dad aged so much? He was my friend more than my dad. I turned to embrace my dad, which shattered all my security. I was leaving my parents.
He looked slowly at me and kissed my hands and cheek
" No more crying Geet, this is the best night of our lives. We will only smile"
I knew from inside he was aching. I just wanted to embrace forever. Why do girls leave their parents house?
"Puthar the priest is here now, it's time for the ceremony, each step you take now will be towards your dreams. Don't look back because of us."
I held my dads hand tightly and moved towards the stage.
I remember jokingly telling him to not let me fall down and all he replied was never with a sense of pride in his eyes.

With all the smiling faces and the reflective chandeliers, I moved towards the priest. I was moving to a stage with no groom. I quizzingly looked around to search for his face but he wasn't there. My heart started to pound and my eyes started to well up. My mum could sense the uneasiness and joined my father.
" Geet, why are you worrying he's stuck in traffic, he'll be here soon. Beta just relax"
I was gently placed near the fire and made to wait.

The wait turned from minutes to hours. Was this another of his practical jokes, my heart sank rapidly. From a far distance, the lights of a car shone, at once I got up to open the door. I knew he loved me. I opened the door and hurried towards stony path. I hurriedly knocked on the drivers window. Why was he coming out?
The window slowly unravelled Shane instead of Ryan. Sorry Geet Ryan told me to leave this for you. I'm so sorry. What did he mean by sorry?
Everything was just confusing, I made my way back towards the stairs, when I finally opened the letter.

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Part 4

Dear my loving Geet,

I'm sorry for having to do this to you. I have found someone else, I thought loving you would erase her memories. I love her not you and as your best friend I can't hurt you. You will always be my best friend and I will always love you, but not in the same way. Sorry I had to do this to you. I couldn't hurt your feelings but I did not have the courage to marry you. I'll be going far away from here, so you won't have to see me again.

Love from your Ryan xxx

" Miss would you like to some coffee? Miss?"
I woke up to a smiling waitress. It took me a while to understand what she was saying.
" A latte please with little sugar and some cinnamon"
She placed it gently on the placement near me and left. How much had I left behind. I quietly sipped on my latte when an announcement was made.
" The next station approaching will be our final destination. Please have your boarding passes ready for check in. We will be arriving shortly at Gare du Nord.
My new life was finally beginning.
The train finally came to a halt and all passengers began to disappear. I collected my belongings and headed towards the arrival gate. The sun was shining and France had a different atmosphere all together. I made my way towards the taxi's. This wasn't like New York it was so different. How do I stop a taxi. I raised my hand up and down involuntary and a spectacled man appeared from me.
" madam where would you like to go"
" Monsieur seriez-vous en mesure de me dposer Ifa paris s'il vous plat"
I sat down inside the taxi to be supported by a stranger. My back tingled with a sensation I had never felt before.
The touch travelled further upwards, till the finger tips were wriggling around my neck. I slowly turned around to face the similar chocolate brown eyes.
" excuse me miss this is my cab, can you please find another." His lips were so close to mine, they were moving in parallel.
Right Geet don't let people walk over you. Stand your ground!!!!
" Excuse me mister, this is my cab, I came here first and you will need to go. Don't you have any other work except to harass a lady.
" Miss does your dad own the cab? I can't see his name on it? It's a free world, I can do whatever I want?"
The driver arrived, sorry Monsieur was here first, in afraid you'll have to go unless you dual share the ride.
" Miss arrogant please can you share the ride with me, I genuinely have somewhere Important to go.
I silently nodded my head.
" Please to the Ifa please."
Oh no he will be there to. I can't believe what weirdos the world has begun to produce. Geet just hope you never see his face again.
That will be 250 euros please.
Here's five hundred and driver please wish this lady here gets a new personality. Frankly the new one reeks.
The infuriating man, left quickly, leaving behind a black book. Should I pick it up or not. Ill just leave it at the reception and they'll locate him.
My apartment was lovely with a fabulous view of the Eiffel Tower. I soon started to place my luggage in its correct place. The others girls hadn't come yet. I lay across the balcony, to a peaceful serenade. I don't remember when it started to rain, but looking at my ring made me remember the unexpected rain in New York on that night .

The letter clasped in my hand with little energy. The world beneath me shook. I stumbled on the ground, to be followed by my agonised mother and father. All I could remember was the shrieks that fell afterwards. My bright face started to become colourless. My henna started to disappear. The joy of my evening became the death of my existing life. I became empty, nothing to live for. I soaked in the rain for hours and hours. My body became stone less. I just remember my father packing hurriedly and placing these passes in my hands.
That night felt the world was crying for me. The wet water erased all the colour that was on my face. I became empty and defensive. This was the new Geet !!!!!!!!!!



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Part 5

The night soon came with an unexpected peace. I fell asleep to a humming voice. The piercing rays of the sun soon awake me to a beautiful Parisian day. I selected a cute t shirt and some shorts. I headed towards the kitchen, where I met Laila and Lizzie. Those girls are what you define as European beauties. Both perfect in their own particular ways. Lizzie was natural blonde whereas Laila was a soft brunette.

"Hi my name is Geet and I'm assuming your my room mates. It's very nice to meet you."
The girls gently moved towards me, resulting in an unexpected sisterly embrace. This will be the best year ever, both of them chimed in.
I placed some shimmering lipstick and blush on my face to face my new day in art class. Art class located at the furthest point, they surely knew how to make a girl sweat. The room was large, and surrounded by interesting artefacts. The windows were all open and slow breeze fell through. I placed my sketching pad on a seat closest to a window. I nervously twisted my ring that was placed on my finger. It never felt right to remove the ring.
" Geet I didn't know you were married? Who is the lucky guy, did he come with you, so many guys will be heartbroken" Laila said jokingly.
I looked down onto my finger and faced them with alarming face.
Oh Im not married guys its just a bad memory that I will always remember that's all.
"Excuse me miss Geet, it's very welcoming to know your not married. I'm sure everyone interested will be happy to know that. Will you kindly discuss more information with us, unless you've come here to learn."
All faces just zoomed onto my face. I followed the trail of this man until he faced towards us. I felt the same brown eyes piercing into my eyes, I constantly felt humiliated.
Hi all my name is maan, I'm your art lecturer, with me you'll be experiencing all the beauty of art. I will take you beyond your sketching pad, to a world unseen. If you listen to me and follow my guidance you'll experience the power of art.

Geet spent the next two hours, thinking of all the swear words she possibly could. Maan was a big ass! He continued to flex his muscles and most of the girls cooed and aawed.
" What is wrong with these girls, he is such a rude man, my left bum cheek wouldn't even want to date him. He has such a big nose and even bigger mouth. He looks like a clown, no Geet he is a clown. Waise he's not that bad."
Her thoughts were interrupted by the dismissal of the bell. She quickly moved towards the back entrance. Laila and lizzie followed behind quietly. Maan was closely following them behind, as soon as she looked behind her appeared In front of her.
" May I please have a chat with you miss Geet?"
" Yes sir"
"We will wait for you near the water fountain Lizzie exclaimed with a huge smile."
" Miss Geet I do not appreciate you making my art class as your personal gossiping class. I do not endure any sort of rubbish and it will be taken seriously. Do not take this warning lightly, because you will have to bare harsh consequences. Now you can be dismissed."
Then he soon disappeared into the overbearing crowd

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