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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
ohhh mmyyy goddd


Afff

Shocking

You tooo !

And wow
You write so well
Lol

Interesting concept dear
And a great start
Amazing

I'm still in a shock

Though first part was little confusing
Hehe
Dont kill me
But this means i want more
Lol


muaaahhh darling
fab start
Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
congratzz affy 4 ur novel🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

ohhh mmyyy goddd


Afff

Shocking

You tooo !

And wow
You write so well
Lol

Interesting concept dear
And a great start
Amazing

I'm still in a shock

Though first part was little confusing
Hehe
Dont kill me
But this means i want more
Lol


muaaahhh darling
fab start
Love you


Awe bestie happy that you read it
I don't blame you for getting confused, I was confused when writing it 😆
Thanks for saying I write well, compared to others I'm comparatively bad
Really happy you loving it
Ill surely write more for you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">congratzz affy 4 ur novel🥳</font>


Thanks sweetie 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Part 11

Geet pulled herself forward to escape from the memory of her close proximity with her lecturer, when suddenly her waist was held sternly by a tall figure, who inched closer towards her. She looked up towards to see a pair of eyes that seemed very familiar.

" Geet are you not surprised to see me, I was eagerly anticipating for our breaks, so I could show you around." Pierre embraced Geet with an unexpected affection. He pecked her cheeks with little hesitation. Pierre was not hesitant in showing his emotions in front of other individuals.

The drilling of the bell grew even louder. The lecture room suddenly became hauntingly silent. Adam paved his way through the door to give Pierre a firm shake and a silent glance towards Geet.Geets eyes searched for her room mates to save her from this tortorus foreseable conversation. Pierre was immediately distracted in a prolonged conversation with Adam until a piercing shriek echoed throughout the hall.

The excitement of seeing Adam led to Lizzie hobbling down the stairs, when unfortunately her foot missed the pace of the rhythm leading her to hurl toward the lecturers desk. Geet screamed, as Lizzies fall dramatised in her presence.

The heart ache of unreciprocated attention caused Maans blood to boil. He began to repulse his own image. His dream of becoming astute lecturer was being shredded due to his lust for this particular girl. Never had he felt more ashamed. He paced his fingers in desperation to seek redemption from this personal angst. His eyes flinched to instill a photographic memory of Geet when a piercing sound caught his attention.
Lizzie was tumbling towards Maan who thankfully gripped her At the appropriate time. Her legs were swollen with minor grazes formulating on her knees and elbows. Maan delicately placed Lizzie on his chair. Adam paced towards the centre of the hall whilst Laila attended Lizzies wounds. " Are you okay Lizzie?" Have you been hurt anywhere else? Would you require my further assistance or attention of the medical faculty" inquired Maan.

Laila looked at maan venomously and inferred his sudden removal when she exclaimed " No sir thank you, you have done more than enough! Would you please leave us alone!" Adam held Lizzie tightly as she squealed in pain.

Maan removed all items from within his sight, which caused him to unexpectedly catch a glance of Geet. Her image removed all the hatred from his face. She was flinching uncontrollably as Laila tended to Lizzies wounds. His heart paced irrationally towards, signalling his arms to extend them for a affectionate embrace.
Geet was watching Maan pace his way towards her. She clinged onto Pierre needlessly. " how could she possibly hug someone who is meant to be her teacher? What will people say about her? She also knew what kind of person maan was, she could never cross her limits." As much as her heart was paining to see him like this, it was the correct decision in her mind.

Pierre comforted Geet toward Lizzie, when maan ferociously brushed past Pierre. Pierre looked back inferring maan as crazy old fool. Geet winced upon hearing these words and slowly peered back to see a her waist embellishment dangling from his hands as he closed the door behind him with complete rage. Her heart ached to see him like this but it was for the best.


Edited by x-affy-x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Will sort out the title page soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
ohhkkk

Trying hard to control their feelings
Ahaaan

Possessive and jealous ...is he ?
Lol

Very well written aff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

ohhkkk

Trying hard to control their feelings
Ahaaan

Possessive and jealous ...is he ?
Lol

Very well written aff


Well for maan vids at this moment its purely lust
With Geet i dont blame her to be drawn towards any person that gives her attention
Yes a bit of jealousy 😆

Thanks hun😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: x-affy-x


It's more of a infatuation than love at that moment

hmm i think so
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
so its lust now
shameless professor😆
getting jeaslous
well they shouldnot try 2 control their feelings its of no use😉
wht piere feels for geet is only attraction ?

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