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I know I haven updated in ages. I lost the passion for writing and it just didnt make sense anymore because I lost direction of the writing. I will resume and I hope to make it better and more exciting.
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Originally posted by: x-affy-x

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I know I haven updated in ages. I lost the passion for writing and it just didnt make sense anymore because I lost direction of the writing. I will resume and I hope to make it better and more exciting.



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Originally posted by: x-affy-x

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I know I haven updated in ages. I lost the passion for writing and it just didnt make sense anymore because I lost direction of the writing. I will resume and I hope to make it better and more exciting.

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New Beginnings


After a few minutes, the trains set off. As it pulled it away from the station, Pierre's heart burst open like a colourful firework, attempting to escape from its true reality. The failure of saving his relationship severed his ties with all humanity as he fell into a tranquil sleep.

Synchronised to the clanking train tracks, Geet's body shuddered at the thought of her unforgivable actions. Her heart-breaking sobs echoed through the empty carriage.
Why did she have to do that to an innocent soul? After hours of unbearable guilt and self- torture, she finally looked up to see her image in the glimmering, transparent windows. Embarrassed by the piercing glares of other passengers, Geet immediately focused on the raindrops that caressed the outer window of the zooming train. The image she saw in the mirror horrified her burning soul. Black streaks of mascara had stained her pale, unrecognisable face. Inside her, she could feel her blood boiling. Before she knew it, she was vigorously wiping away the dirt from her body. Minute after minute, she brushed away the impure markings that had been etched all over her body. Repetitive brushing of her skin was leading to soreness on her skin, but she had to remove her sins somehow. All of a sudden, her whole body lurched forward. Without a warning, she suffered a sharp blow to her head. Holding onto the wound with all of the energy she could muster, her eyes finally closed. Finally she had drifted into a dark tornado.



In desperate attempt to break away from all her misery, Geet let out a loud gasp which alerted other members that she was awake. As she familiarised herself with her strange surroundings, a stranger placed a warm cup of coffee beside her. Quickly hesitating from this intrigued stranger, she hid her face in her lap. Regardless of this cold response, the woman placed her warm hand on her back. Her sweet voice sang a beautiful song to her as her concerning touch removed her sense of uncertainty and worry. Raising her head slightly over her knees Geet finally allowed herself to confront this over- friendly passenger.

"Excuse me, do I know you? I feel like you know me; I'm not in the ideal mood to make a conversation with anyone. You seem like a nice woman however I feel like your invading my privacy. Please, leave me alone!" exclaimed a exhausted Geet.

The timid woman smiled at her as she offered the coffee to relax grief stricken girl. In a calm tone, she reassured the girl that she had no sense of meddling in her personal issues but she was simply saving her from the unnecessary attention that she had garnered throughout their journey, When sitting in silence became impossible, the woman reluctantly spoke.


" I assure you that I mean no harm. From the moment I saw you scrubbing your face with great force, I understood that you had suffered from a heinous incident, which made you emotionally numb yet it burdened you with the horrifying images In life, we encounter people that we greatly love and dislike. The fear of losing our loved ones makes us commit acts that we normally don't associate with ourselves. Remember you have the power to overturn any emotion. Think about it like this, whatever sacrifice you have made will bring blessing into this individuals life. Do not allow your sacrifice to be wasted."

Even though her mind wasn't allowing her to pay heed to this advice, her heart knew that she had to let go of her love, the torture she had endured and her friends. Having decided to let go of her past, Geet accepted the coffee from the stranger with a warm, loving smile. Throughout the rest of the journey, she attempted to pay attention to her new life and the beginning she had set up for herself. In a matter of hours, she would be sharing compassionate embraces with people, whom she cared for greatly. She wasn't sure if this was the right move but she was certain that from this point she wouldn't dare look back. However one doubt kept recurring in her mind- could her past catch up with her?

Her mind was brought back to reality when the train driver announced she had finally arrived at her destination, Finally her agonising journey had come to an end; the fresh air of Milan was smelt beautiful. With a longing look of remorse and gratitude she bid farewell to the young woman as she departed off the train. All around her the city bustled with busy professionals and fashionable youngsters. Once she had placed herself in a taxi she breathed a sigh of relief. Not long after she woke up to the biggest shock of her life.

































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