FF - An Unshakeable Faith Pt 3 Pg 3

Hey Guys...

As you all know, I have one FF in this forum, 'An Unlikely Pair' and ... I am just starting another one which has been in my mind for quite some time.

Fanfiction has the basic premise as the same... that being Gauri and Shiv married without their wishes, for the sake of their families. But Shiv does not love Ipsita... and this story has another couple as the lead... Do let me know your views on this one.

The silence was broken abruptly by the ringing peals of a phone somewhere... ji... ji... kya? the exclamation seemed to ring out loud in the silence of the studio... The director was surprised at this display of emotion from the emotionally reclusive actress... the very very beautiful Sonia Ray (Visualize Sonia Kapoor Please). The director contemplated asking her if there was an issue? if he could help? and then thought the better of it.

Sonia Ray was not somebody who accepted help... from anybody... in fact, if he didn't know better, he would believe the media rumours that she was a flirty, light-headed bimbo, who couldn't emote for the life of her in her personal life... and that she was a brilliant actress on screen.

'Hmm... teek hain... Kuch pata chale to please mujhe bata dena... hmm... main unko bata doongi...' she finishes the conversation.

The shot is ready... and she is called for the next shot... the mobile is unobstrusively passed to her faithful woman friday... Kookie...

The next scene that is being shot is that of a woman who is informed that her husband has just gone missing... Sonia Ray, dressed ethreally in a light pink saree, enacts the scene with her usual brilliance, lending an almost real feel to the scene... Everybody's eyes are moist and the director calls out a very very late "cut!" The shot is okayed at the first take.

Even after the call of cut, Sonia's tears refuses to stop... her eyes reflect an unknown pain... a suffering so huge... Kookie approaches her saying "Sonia... tumhe kya lagta hain..." Sonia gives a stern look to kookie as if to say don't think such thoughts and says "Kuch nahin hua hain..." "Par Sonia..." she reiterates... "Maine kaha na... kuch nahin hua hain Kookie!"

"Sonia ji.. ek picture please..." Sonia turns away pushing her worries and thoughts as her professional smile takes over her face, briefly masking her worried frown.

But once her fans leave, the frown is back on her face... She knows that howmuchever she might assure kookie that things are fine, she has this nagging feeling within her that something is amiss... everything is not as it needs to be.

She picks up her phone and calls somebody ... saying "Daksh..." you could almost visualise the lilt in her smile when she utters this one word... Daksh...


Do let me know your views on this one.

Part 1 : Page 1

Part 2 : Page 2
Part 3 : Page 3

Please let me know your views on this ff...

Thanks a lot!
-Abhi

great intro 👏 👏
looks very interesting continue soon

it's very good and different, continue 👏

hey its fab!!!!
continue very very sooonnnn..

gr8 start, pls cont

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wow.... cool FF
another one ha??? 😊
i think this is going to another gr8 FF
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continue soooooon 😊 😊 😊

sounds good and different.....
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Recap:
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Sonia Ray, the beautiful actress, gets a phone call from somebody which upsets her and she calls somebody and says Daksh.



Episode 2 :
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"Daksh... Main hoon..." On the other side, we have Daksh who is in the living room of the Kapoor
house... his house... flanked by his wife and son... and receiving this call... he knows that if
his wife gets to know about this call, he will have hell to pay for... but he cannot resist taking
the call... and the pleasure on his face is unmistakeable. "Ji... main hi hoon... kaisi hain aap?
itne dinon ke baad yaad aayi meri aapko? " the petulant question forces a laugh out of sonia...
while it brings on a incredulous questioning look on his wife, Shyla's face... Was it another of
his so called good friends? She was sure it was a woman on the phone with her husband... HER
husband... and she gives a look of annoyance to Daksh... who refuses to cut the call as he
normally
does... making her wonder, just who is he talking to? Is she more important to him than me, his
son? Maya walks in at that moment touching Shyla's shoulder lightly... questioningly... and Shyla
looks towards Daksh... Daksh at that moment is assuring the other woman that everything is fine...
everybody is fine... notices Maya and says... "hmm... kya aap baat karna chahengi? hmm... " and
gives the phone to Maya, who takes it questioningly... and answers the call quite hesitantly...
"Hello..." Silent tears fall out of Maya's eyes... Shiv looks at this and is surprised and says
"Maya Bua aap??" That is when the rest of the family notice Maya crying... silently and nodding
her head on the phone... "Tum sar hilaogi to unhe kaise pata chalega?" questions Daksh, while
coming beside her to give her a tight hug... Maya again nods her head and bursts out laughing...
"hmm... ji... teek hain..." She is about to cut the call when Krishna wants to talk... "Maya...
main bhi baat karna chahti hoon..." Maya listens intently to the voice on the other side... and
says hmm... and then as an afterthought adds, I love you... !!!
Daksh also screams it out, so that the person on the otherside of the phone can hear it too...

Maya and Daksh exchange silent looks... and Krishna looks upset enough to burst out in tears...
"Kaun tha Dadi Phone par?" questions Shiv Kya "aap jaanti hain unhe? woh jo bhi hain???"

Krishna runs up to her room, unable to answer the question... unable to take the fact that Sonia
didn't want to talk to her... unable to face the accusing look on her children's face...
Her children... her Daksh... and her Maya... Two of her children, who were unable to take what
they
perceived to be their mothers wrong doing... what they perceived to be her injustice, and who had
rebelled and gone against their nature... Daksh... a soft-spoken family oreiented young man had
morphed into a person who didn't like spending time with his family now... a rebel... and Maya...
she was rebelling in her own way too... The sweet Maya, who didn't have a mean bone in her body,
didn't have anything except meanness in her now...

The repercussions that her actions have caused make Krishna feel the earth would split and swallow
her.. Sorry doesn't even begin to cover it...

In the drawing room, Daksh and Maya share a moment of shared pain and shared loss... a hug ...
"Maya... tum teek to ho?" questions Ayush... Maya's husband... They break away as if suddenly
realising where they are ... and says ... "Haan... of course main teek hoon... mujhe kya hua
hain..." Daksh gives Maya an impercertible nod of his head, pointing towards Mahen's study.. the
Room that is barred for all members of the family except Mahen...

Shiv Stops Daksh and Maya from entering the room "Aap log jaante hain ki iss kamre main papa ke
alava koi nahin jaa sakta...
an unvocal communication between Daksh and Maya, and they turn to go into Maya's room...

Only to be stopped by Shyla... Nahin Daksh... Aaj main aapko nahin chod rahi hoon... aap ko mere
sawalon ka jawab to dena hi padega... Vivan makes way to stop Shyla only to be told rudely...
"Nahin vivan... Bahut ho gaya... aaj inhe jo bhi baat karni hain yahan karenge... sab ke
saamne..."

Maya... doesn't seem to care for anything... that is happening around her... Daksh bhaiyya...
aaj... itne saalon baad... achanak...???
Daksh looks at Maya... all happy and with tears in his eyes and says... aaj bhi woh waisi hi hain
na???

Maya nods her head all happy... making Ayush remark that after so many years he is seeing the maya
that he fell in love with.

Amongst all this discussion, we see that a Car makes its way into the Kapoor House...

End of episode 2.

who is this new person??????
clue plz 😃
ru sure maya can actually cry??? 😆
wht abt your other FF???? i want the update for that also....soon
i think im getting bit too greedy these days 😳

Hey Guys...
Didn't anybody like this FF???


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