FF - An Unshakeable Faith Pt 3 Pg 3 - Page 3

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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it's good............

Originally posted by: nslove

yeh it is great, but little confusion, overall i think it's gonna be beautiful fanfic as u r old onee.
Thx please contine soooon with gauri and shiv in it............

Originally posted by: nslove

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Originally posted by: desi chic

Abhi,
Hey Baccha...

I know, I should have been one of the first, and rather I am here so late. Haan... main tumpe bahut gussa hoon... grrrrrrrrr 😡... But what can I do? I've read it over and over a few times and I'm just too confused, stunned to react I guess? Confused?? Is that good or bad??? and why stunned???

Interesting how you brought in the character of Sonia Ray (especially as Sonia Kapoor who is gorgeous and a brilliant actress!!), an actress who seems to be having a constant craving. With your descriptions, theres an obvious lacking.
Ok.. lacking where??? if you could give me more pointers, maybe I can remedy that!
I've been sitting at the edge of my seat the entire way and scratching my head. You should have been a suspense novelist. Seriously, kahan se aata hai ye sab? *amazing*
😳😳 *Blush blush* Thank you... mujhe khudh pata nahin... 😆

Just like your other one, but for some reason, I'm missing something... Someone... Gauri? I'm wondering right now, what is her role in all of this, or has she yet to step into Shiv's life?
Actually, in this one, Gauri and Shiv are married... but on the sidelines... as I told you earlier on, isme lead pair alag hain..

And Krishna Dadi's extreme guilt, iske peeche kya raaz ho sakta hai. She cannot bear the accusations in Daksh and Maya's eyes. Is Sonia their sister? Illegitimate? But they seemed so happy talking to her. 😕
Baap re baap... aur tum mere imagination aur ideas ki baat kar rahi thi! LOL

And Shiv saying that only Mahen is allowed entry into his study, no one else can go? That's kinda strange too.
Wow... I am impressed... what sense of observation neetu beta... keep it up...
Wow, I feel like I'm stuck in a maze and there are too many possibilities. Meri madat karo, set up some clues... Warna mera kya hoga, woh mein bhi nahin jaanti
Hota hain hota hain... mujhe khudh kuch pata nahin chall raha... I only see these hazy scenes and so write my stories around these scenes... :-D...

Waise, your style of writing is just superb. You can get into the head of one character and then in the next min just give a scanning of the picture without a hint as to what is going on. Amazing, simply amazing!!!
Errrr... Thank you I think!!!...
Please do continue soon. 👏 👏

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: apapap

enigma....tht seems to the underlying factor in all your ffs...i loved it.... im really eager to know how sonia is related to daksh...whom i percieve as vinay jain..not the pig who plays him now..do continue soon..