OS:- Shadow of Memories (FINAL UPDATE Pg- 03) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Manveerangel

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
It was amazing no it was more then amazing
But sad also 😭 😭
(("i ...l..o,.ve u uuud..aay..mo..re th..an l.l..lif..e" she smiled, a
single tear rolled down her eye
Everything went silent time came to a standstill
His eyes bored into her eyes))
In this part a single tear also rolled from my eye
But over all it was great
Thank u sooo much

thnkss dearr

m sooo glad u liked it
nd srry for the tears ..:)*hugss*

Originally posted by: Shazzie

OMG!!! This was sooo heart wrenching & emotional. You made me cry! Such a sad OS!!!!


Superbly written! I could actually visualise everything! Loved it

(Sorry for delayed comment. I hope no 'talaaq' now) ;-)

awwiiee i knw its sadd..ki karannn i love more emotions wale stories :)
really?? Its painful to visualise sumthing lyk dat !
Thnkss diii m sooo glad u liked itt :D

ab no talaaq ab only LDR ;) ;)
love ya :*

To all the readerss
Thnks a ton for liking this OS and also for boosting my spirit which inspires me to write more
yes,read it sumwer u are best writer if u make one smile,but u are an awesome visualiser if u could make one cry, nd today after reading alll u r comments i've no wrds to express...alll i could say thnks for liking my work

love all
~shab 😊

Atlast commented🤣

Originally posted by: -Sans-

AB DURI HAI ITNI AANKHIEN MERI NAM HAI TUJH BIN RONA AAYE PAR AANSU HAI KAM AE KHUDA MOHLAT DE DE K KEHDE HUM .❤️ OMG!! i love dis song ❤️ its a beautiful song While i am reading ur OS again.i am listening to d song too and its just PERFECT.u r a gr8 writer basanti .
Uday was behaving weirdly from the starting only.vaise at dat tym i couldn't get y bt pura Os padhne k baad samajh aaya 😭

"wat the hell is wrong with every1 ...who
left her alone ..did u hav
any idea wat wud hav happnd if she
panicked..she is a little dependant
life for god sake...who leaves a little life
alone "he barked ..not
even once looking at manyata
OMG!! HE IS SUPER ANGRY WITH HER FOR LEAVING THEM ALONE 😔

and then came the flashback .its so sweet.good old memories😊
" uday ki chamchiii"manyata rolled her
eyes nd walked away frm der.lol 🤣 This ws damn cute :D


and then again bck to present
"they are my wounds unnati it will be with
me forever...i choose to
keep them fresh" spat UV piercing his nails
on his wounds
y is he punishing himself.y can't he forgive her ??
This os is so heart wrenching


and then another flashback .shabz i want to kill u fr writing just an emitional os😭
Poor uday he has to leave manyta there :( if he wouldn't have left .things would've been diff 😔


update 2 😭
isme manyata ki kya glti thi??y is he blaming her ??
"To
help you remove the
burden from your heart, a pain that would never
come near u if ,I
your soul mate hadn't left this world too early.m
really sorry,will u
forgive me?"I loved these lines❤️
udayveer shouldn't call her selfish cheater or liar🥺
Udayveer has noticed some change in her before leaving fr jaigarh 😔
"uday,i love u more than life,i really do with the
every particle of me.Awww❤️ such a cute couple
🥺 y have u wrote a sad os😡

Dat stupid girl uday ko kyu nhi btaya complications k baare mai 😡
i noe she loved him but 😭
"lamba safar humari manyata tayy kar
rahi ..zindagi aur maut k
darmiyan ..hum toh yahan sirf thaire huwe hai"this line ws d best 😔

"she isn't going to die," he cried, "She's not
leaving me... not
again... not again" he said in pain .he turned back
to manyata, his
eyes pleading, "manyata...plzz...dnt leave me
again...don't go
away...please." he cried and rested his head by her
hand as he began
to cry... Cry the tears he should have
cried when she was lost the first time. this ws d most emotional part of this OS😭


"i ...l..o,.ve u uuud..aay..mo..re th..an l.l..lif..e"
she smiled, when this part came i ws literally in tears
😭


Loved the name ahyana😊
nd thanxx fr writing such a beautiful emotional,amzing,wonderful, romantically heart wrenching OS
LOVE U THE MOST