OS:- Shadow of Memories (FINAL UPDATE Pg- 03) - Page 4

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
It was amazing no it was more then amazing
But sad also 😭 😭
(("i ...l..o,.ve u uuud..aay..mo..re th..an l.l..lif..e" she smiled, a
single tear rolled down her eye
Everything went silent time came to a standstill
His eyes bored into her eyes))
In this part a single tear also rolled from my eye
But over all it was great
Thank u sooo much

OMG!!! This was sooo heart wrenching & emotional. You made me cry! Such a sad OS!!!!


Superbly written! I could actually visualise everything! Loved it

(Sorry for delayed comment. I hope no 'talaaq' now) ;-)

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Just Beautiful😳!!!!!!!!!!

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Really emotional ... but then I expected it , because in my last comment I did ask : "how did Manyata die?"


Anyways , that was really well written.
Loved it😳!


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Thanks for the PM😊.</font>

thank u :)
ishh, how well u knw me :p
yupp u were right with the gues i was playing wid ya ...i see it was actually revealing the whole secret :p

thnks agains fora lovely comment: ')

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="4"><font color="#FF0000">awww that was...
uhhh i have no words to express..
m really touched at the moment!!
sorry for that!!
i don't know what to say!!
u left me crying!!!!
that was just so awesome!
sorry again couldnt express how i felt about this OS!!
cuz m myself in a big turmoil right now!!!
it was really awesome
a lovely end!!
wicked game that life played!!!
lovely shab!!
thanks for making me cry!!
after a long time i felt so good after readin something!!!!

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awww sorry to make u emotional with my writing .
M touched wid the response sweetheart,sumtyms wrds arent necessary :)
haila u thnking me for making u cry ...ermm i m taking dat as compliment dis tym

thnksss *hugs*

Originally posted by: ...anju...

BEAUTIFUL SHAB DEAR.

AAHH D PAIN TOUCHED MY HEART.

SO EMMOTIONAL.POOR UDAY.

LUVED BABYS NAME AHYANA.

LOVED D OS SO MUCH.

KEEP ON WRITING.

THANKS FOR PM.

thnks anju :)
pain dat couldnt be expressed in wrds, i still think i didnt do justice with this delicate subject,
glad u still liked it :)
will try and come up with new OS after m done wid next update of taqdeerein :)

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Really emotional 😭 it really touched my heart
Awesome update ⭐️
Loved it 👏
Thanks for the pm 👍🏼 😊

awww thnksss:)

Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff"></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">well thats me after reading this.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">a lone tear escaped my eye and rolled down my cheek falling down on the desk.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">i looked at it and smiled to myself so that i wud stop crying, but it aggrevated. and i let myself cry for a minute or so</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">this was such a powerful and touching OS</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">emotional and perfectly written</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">u inspire me to write an OS with tragic ending and i am really working on a story now.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">wonderful and really i am speechless.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3366ff">loved it shabs</font>

ishhh sry for making u cry,
my only thought while writing OS was to strike the most avoided emotion of acceptance the very reality of every persons life,
now i think i did gud wid thid OS wid the respinse frm u all

thnksss
yeah m waiting to read urs :)

Originally posted by: huma12.

aawssnnn shab but u didnt pm me i m angryyy

thnks..nd plz dnt be ..i mught've missed u ..srry for dat :)

Originally posted by: pinkywinky

wow awesum i liked it but sis i dunt understand one thing manyata was died then hw she waz talking to uday

thnksss
it wasnt real manyata talking but it was UV's thought where she was talking and moving around,it was his conscience which kept her alive in his thoughts

Originally posted by: Shahista01

<font color="#9900cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">That was superb shab. 😭Very touching and truly beautiful.</font>

<font color="#9900cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Its true the greatest love stories dont all have a happily ever after, its the essence and passion </font><font color="#9900cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">that still surpasses within them while they are alive...</font>

<font color="#9900cc" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">LOVED IT👏</font>

thnksss :)
its not the happily ever after which survives forever ,but its love which is the main factor which immortal,not every story has to be happily ever afart to become one of the eternal love stories going by the history it always the painful stories which are immortal

thnks again