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Posted: 12 years ago
How could u do that vidhya...,

Go shoot ur devil... Y did it have to spring out just then... U want hot beach wala or behind the rocks wala romance... Such a romantic song, setting, outfit ..., and ur devil had to come out... Not fair...

Please update soon with hot romance... Thanx for the pm x
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woha...behna, this had to be my most favorite part.

So Arjun is finding peace in Sakshi's presence, it was wonderful to see that he does have something to hang on to her.

I felt bad for Sakshi, but glad she understands that what she wishes for may never happen yet she is still willing to stand by him, I applaud her for this.

Loved the beach scene and the way he opened up to her finally, he really needed that.

So they are taking shelter from the rain and it seems things are turning romantic.😉

Waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...☺️...di aap toh romance ke queen ho...😉...
aise hi likhte raho aur hume apne pyaare pyaare updates dete raho...😊...
update soon...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bechain hain dil mera to read the next update😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it
it was gr8
awsm
eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Arakshians, kya haal hai? i know i left at a crucial point...so the quick update

as always, kids keep away...others can grab a bottle of cold water...

errors honge to maafi...pls read and do comment...

no silent reading business...samjhe ya samjhaavum?

so here it is...

Part 4:

She walked a bit into the rocks and stood facing the opposite direction….Rain drops were still drizzling on them mercilessly but both didn't seem to mind it….or they were too preoccupied to get affected by that!

When she moved away, he felt a sense of loss…….he wanted to touch her again….feel her body on his again…..he walked to her and snaked his arms around her waist from behind pulling her to himself shaking her to the core!

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum...

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As his hands laced around her wet form, she jerked forward in a startle only to be pulled back to him…..Crashing into his wet body didn't do any good to her weak senses…..she trembled at the intimate rubbing of their forms…

What was he doing? He was confusing her……she tried to step away and turned around to see what his eyes conveyed….was it just a raw need for her body?

No, it was much more than that...she saw more but he never uttered a word to her…..a confession of love was something that every girl dreams of and she wasn't any different but she would never force him….

He looked at her with a longing to hold her back to himself…. "Sakshi.."

Her name merely left his lips and she couldn't take the intensity of his gaze and his deep husky voice made her shudder even without his touch……

She stepped back quickly but he kept advancing towards her……she stepped back till she hit against the rock at the back……

She clutched the side walls of the slippery rock for support as she felt her knees giving up on her due to his closeness and the gaze he bestowed upon her!

As he closed in on her, she tried to slip to the sides but he placed his arms on either sides locking her in between……..

He knew that she loved him……she hadn't said it but he had seen it in her looks and attitude towards him…her eyes…..her expressions, her way of dealing with him said it all….That realization also lingered and played a foil in his heart...He could feel his heart and mind slipping away from being his normal controlled self!

And now, he couldn't let her go away from him…..His desire for her seemed to be taking over his logical mind!

She tried to step back as if she would go into the rock if it was ever possible when he brought his face closer to hers….

Her luscious wet lips quivered……..her wet face looked innocent….her eyes closed as his warm breath fanned her face……

He wanted to feel what it would be to touch her lips with his…..the water drops lingering on to her face and lips only to his urge……he was to drink in her beautiful lips……he wanted to sink into her beautiful form…He wanted to feel her...

His eyes already lusted and craved for her…….

His brain, his ego, his stubbornness of never to move on, his arrogance, his distances….everything died out and burned to ashes in the passionate fire that ignited him to go on…..

She shivered……trembled in that fire…..He could feel that even before he touched her but he couldn't back out now……

He stopped moving ahead just leaving an inch between their lips……instead, he let his finger tip caress her soft creamy cheeks which looked like red apples now……the crimson red ones which became redder as she blushed under his touch…….she turned her face away from him but he gently turned her face back to him and now his fingers glided her lips…..and his lips muttered something….as if wanting something….

Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum...

She opened her eyes and looked into his when he did that……….She was unsure of what to do till that point…….but one look into his eyes, she decided to let go……

She realized that the pain, the sorrow, the agony, the despair, the feeling of loss…..all of it which were evident till now in his eyes had drained away gradually from those intense deep eyes….

Now she could see a desire, a wish, something positive, some vibrations, something which could be termed love or something even beyond all that reflecting in his eyes and she realized that it was for her…

No words or confessions were required for her to know it…….she felt happy……she could do anything to retain that happiness in him forever……she could do anything even if it meant suicidal to make him forget his pains and sorrows….she could give him whatever he wanted to make him smiles…..she could become his sunshine even if it meant that she would be plunged in darkness forever……She could sacrifice herself for him even if it left her with just the dark shadows ….

She didn't require a commitment from him…not a word of assurance from him…

She wouldn't regret this any day….

Determined she was…..she had been so always…..

Her hands which were clutching the rocks for support slowly travelled around him and clasped him in its hold…….taking that as a Yes from her side, he closed in the distance between them and his lips took up the duty of caressing her now…..

He experienced bliss when he finally kissed her……it started as a gentle peck but it didn't take more than a second for him to deepen it……..she parted her lips for giving him all that he wanted to do……….

He plunged into her parted mouth with more vigor and passion setting whatever remained inactive in both of them into fire…..

His hands clutched her shoulders and pulled her into him……she was new to such intimacies and it showed in her body language as she remained a bit stiff and aloof as he closed the gaps between them…….he slowed down the kiss to give her that time to cope up to him…….

When he sensed that she was ok, his hands travelled up and down her back feeling her through the wet clothes…..while her hands made patterns on his back making him feel ecstatic and explode in desire….he wanted to more of her…..

His lips moved from her lips and kissed away the water drops which were lingering onto her pretty face…..

He kissed her eye lids to close for a moment……her black kaajal spread around her wet eyes making her look even more beautiful at that moment……the imperfections and the rawness were adding a spicy flavour to her entire form…..and then he knew that he couldn't stop at just that..…

The desires of a man were back alive in him…….He just couldn't control and stop now…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum...

She opened her eyes as if enquiring what more he wanted from her…..his eyes replied silently, "everything…everything Sakshi"

Those words did stir her and shake her completely but she was ready for everything he asked for…….she was in a trance...

Her eyes were far from denying him what he wished for…..so he gathered her in his arms and took her to a far corner which was hidden………the blue skies and the ocean were the only witnesses……

The darkness engulfed the entire space…just the moon light and a tiny ray of light which came from a distant light house were the source of lighting…..

He laid her on the wet sand and slipped beside her…..they lay side by side for a long moment, perhaps giving each other time to rethink and stop this from happening……but none of them wanted to escape this reality now…….and also hoped the same from the other…..but it seemed as if both wanted each other with equal passion and desire!

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum...

He turned to her side and rested on his elbow to bend onto her but keeping a distance between them and just let his fingers fumble at her shirt…..but that moment did something to her….suddenly, something pricked her deep even though she had decided to let go of everything…..her conscience, her morals stopped her…"no this is not right" her lips muttered and she got up with a startle…….Her determination had slipped away!

Arjun didn't know what happened suddenly...but she didn't wait for hearing from him or neither did she say something...she just got up and sprinted away from him...

He got up and stood glancing her retreating form...but the slippery rock betrayed and she slipped down...she groaned, "aaah"

He rushed to her side, "Sakshi...kya hua?"

She felt a bit awkward facing him after those passionate moments...She shrugged his hands off and tried to get up from there but only to slip again and fall into his arms...her right leg had a sprain and had a long cut as she had scratched against a sharp rocky edge! It was bleeding...

He ignored her protests and pulled out the scarf from her neck...tying it around her cut to stop the bleeding, he took her in his arms and walked out of the rocky area...

Soon he was driving her back home...

She voiced realizing that he was driving to his place, "mujhe ghar jaana hai Arjun"

Arjun didn't speak but just continued driving...

[To be continued]

so how was it? pls do reply...

devil abi bhi zinda hai! 😉

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

lo...coming soon


but sometime later tonight! 🤣

Yuppie ,im waiting...mujhe lagta hain aap meri spamming seh darne hain...im not going to sleep without reading the update aur kal is holiday for me😳🤣

But di saach mein...thanking you soo much for everything and especially me pestering you for updates😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
woaho...this ws hot dii...

u knw wat...u r like THALAIVA...

u right everything sooo perfectly dat...it seems hard to believe dat ur not a professional...

bt seriously...nthng never seems rushed or forced...u hv nd give apt justification for each nd every scenes nd moments of th update...

thnk god sakshi stopped both of thm on right time...

continue soon...

love
Aisha
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haaye di,this was soo romantic☺️...it has both written and both action wala romance,i just looove it❤️

Somewhere i was expecting sakshi to react like this here...but wait we got to see arjun feeling too,i mean he did voice it out...the way he ask sakshi what happened,and took her to the car...kudos to you di for writing this soo beautifully...

ps-Di you know you're update is just like honey for pooh...every time i want moore and moore😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
guttery update tha...aur honey jaisa...lol

anyways i managed to stop myself from posting more...forum bacch gayi! 🤣 thanks to my devil!😉

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