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: MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-7/part-99/6/08/2013






Part:-99

Next day he was descharged fr. The hospital. Geet called him every day mor,afternoon nd evening giving all instructions to Annie and Nakul. Like wise 1 week passed . Both r very much missing eachother. Maan became dull and moody and gloomy. Even though he is talking to her daily he is missing her badly more over her safty is much bothering him, in addition to this this sameera is really getting into his nerves with her un necessary act of love to Maan. She comes to him facking love on him trying to get close to him,hugg him seduce him in that bedridden state, as she doesn't know any thing other than that.

After 1 week dr. called and said to do some tests to Maan. For that he has to go to hospital. Annie told this to Geet ,that they r going to hospital next day.

Next day Arjun, Annie, Dev took Maan to hospital. As they reached the hospital Annie looked Geet and Dishu r standing at gate. Dishu is holding a flower bouquet in her hands. As soon as they opened the door of car Dishu ran to him calling"dost" and hugged him. Maan surprised and hugged her tightly as he is also missing her badly. He kissed her ful on her face and looked for Geet. She is also standing near him with tearful eyes.

"Kaisa ho aap"?she asked looking him eagerly all over him.

Maan:- Thik hu, tum kaise ho?

Geet nodded her head to yes as her throat chocked with tears.

Dishu"- ye aap keliye, aap jaldi thik hone keliye.

Geet:-ye aapko bahut yaad karthe hai, aap ko bahut miss karthe hai.

Maans s.t.:- aur tum bhi.,...seeing her lovingly, he felt very happy seeing her. It was a great , pleasant surprise to him. He looked her lovingly and longingly. She too"khoe,khoe looks types

"

Dev, Arjun and Annie looked eachother understanding their "unkahe pyaar"

Annie:- Bhabhi;,. She hugged Geet, accha hua aap aagayi, ab bhai ko thoda sugun mila.

Arjun:- jiju;,.. ander chale?

Maan came to his sences and said, haa.

Arjun and Dev led Man to dr. cabin in a wheel chair.Dr. took him to do tests and x-rays.

They r all sat in dr. cabin.

Dr:- kya hua Mr. khrana aapko? Aapka tabiyat bilkul waisa ki waisa rehgaya jaisa mai aapko discharge kiya, meri khayaal se aap jyaada recover honi chahiyetha, jitni tej se aap recover horaha hai jab aap hospital me hai, per isa hua hi nahi, kya hua aapko? Lagtha hai aap apni khayaal nahi rakha jaisa aapne waada kiya mujhe.Kya hua mrs. Geet?kya hua apko? aap thik se Mr. Khurana ki khayaal nahi rakhi? Aap ne waada kiya na mujhe, kya aap bhul gayi?jab aap yaha hai aap bahut khayal kiya Mr. Khurana ko.ghar me isa kya hua?

Geet got panicked listening this , she looked worriedly towards dr.

"Kya hua dr. kuch galat hua? Mujhe darr lagraha hai, kya hua sahi, sahi bathana.

All felt worry for Maan.

Dr. :- Galat nahi,but itna recover nahi hua jitna hum exect kiya. Isa tho aur jyaada din lagega thik hone me,lagtha hai aur bhi araam karna chahiye aur meds bhi kuch change karna hoga lekin ye sab aap per depend karthe hai. Is baar mai nahi chodunga agar kuch laparwaahi kare tho.

Geet looked Maan complaining eyes and also lot of worry on her face.

Maan felt helpless to answer her complaining looks. He did wat she told in pho. Phir bhi inki man me hue dukh ,separation ka pain cost on Maans health

Later they came out and sat in restaurent to have some coffee, Geet sat quite, didn't talk to anybody.

Maan:- Geet,' wo,.. wo,..

Geet:- jayiye mai aapse baath nahi karungi,kya kaha aap usdin aap mujhe promise kiyathana aapki khayaal rakhneka?

Maan:-Geet;,.. I promise maine wahi kiya jo tum ne kaha,chahetho Annie se pucho.

Geet:- mai Annie se kyu puchu? Maine suna hai dr. ne kya kaha.

Maan:- Geet,.. mai agese dhyaan rakhunga mai,waa'

Geet:-Waada muth kijiye,jabki waada nibhaneka aadat nahi hai tho kyu karthe waada?

Maan:-tho mai waada nahi bhatha hu?he questioned her with his hands on his waist,typical MSK style. Annie,Arjun,Dev r silently watching their cute fight .

Geet:- Haa,.. bilkul

Maan:- Geet,'

Dishu:- Nani,.. aap mere dost ko kyu dant rahe, wo bahut acchi hai, math dato ise, eating her fav. Ice cream given by Maan.

Geet:- tum chup raho,. Apni ice cream per dhyaan do, badonki baathon ke beech math avo.

Maan:- Geet tum meri dost ko kyu dat rahi ho wo bahut choti hai, . Geet turned her face to other side.

Annie came to her , bhabhi bhai ko gussa math dilana, shaayad mai hi thik se bhai ka khayal nahi rakhpaai.

Geet:- nahi,.. Annie isme tumhari galathi kuch bhi nahi hai, ye hai isi bilkul laparwaahi.

Dev:- Bhabhi,.. aap mujh per bharosa kijiye aaj se mai bhai ki dhyan rakhunga, aap chintha math kijiye.

Arjun:- haa,.. di,.. hum aajse aur dhyaan rakhthe jiju ke baare me. Ab hum chalna chahiye jiju ko araam karna hai.

With that they dispersed. Geet went with full disaoppointed an dipressed. Maan felt guilt seeing her like that. They went .

Geet came to house all dipressed and worried.

Arpitha:- Maa,.. aap kaha chaligayi? Is wakth akeli?

Geet snapped, kyu? Kya mai kahi nahi jasakthi? Aur ye kya hogaya tum logonko? Jab dekho,.. maa,.. kahi math jaa akeli,.. math jaa,.. kyu? Itni saalonse mai akeli thina? Tho ab kya hua mujhe? Kyu aap log meri jaan ki peeche padgayi ho?

[pehli ye bahut pareshaan me hai Maan ko leke] she never snapped on any one today she snapped

Arp:- shocked hearing her in loud voice first time

Geet went inside her room closing her room she needs some lonliness.

Ar:-looked at Dishu and asked her, dishu, tum kaha chaligayi nani ke sath?

Di:- hum dost ko milne gayithi hospital me.

Ar:- hospital? Kyu kuch hua Maan sir ko phirse?Di:- nahi,.. dost abhitak puri tarahse thik hua nahi,dr. ne data unk laparwayi kelye aur wo nani ko bhi data.

Ar:- phir kya hua?

Di:- nani ne meri dost ko data,aur hum ghar agayi.

Ar:- isme maa itni pareshaan hone ki kya hai?

Ank:- di,.. kya hua?

Ar:- kuch nahi choti, tum kab aayi?

Ank:- bus abhi,abhi.

Ar:- chalo mai tumhareliye chai banadethi hu, tum fresh hoke avo.

Ank:- haa,.. maa kaha hai?

Ar:- wo apni kamreme hai, araam karrahi hai.

Ank;- Araam? Is wakth? Tabiyat thik nahi hai kya? She started to go to geets room

Ar:_ nahi ,.. choti,.. unhe araam karnedo, bad me baath karsakthe.

Di:- nani bahut moodout me hai.

An:- kyu kya hua?di,.. kya hua?

Ar:-pata nahi choti, lagtha hai kuch pareshaan me hai.

An:- kiskeliye?

Arpitha told her.

Ank:- di,.. mujhe bhi yahi lagrahahai, maa sir ko leke kuch jyaada pareshan horahi hai, usdin hospital me bhi wo bahut rorahithi sir ko ek baar dekhne keliye, mujhe kuch azeb lagrahi hai.

Ar:- isme azeeb kounsa hai, choti tum jaanthe huna maa sab ki chintha karthi aur sir tho humari family ko close hai na?

An:- per,..

Ar:- per wer kuch nahi ,.. tum jyaada math socho, ye tumhari tabiyat keliye acchi nahi hai, is haalat me tumhe jyaada tension nahi lene chahiye,.ummm,,.

An:- thik hai,..

Arpi:- thum jao, mai maa keliye chai banathi hu. Ankitha went to geet room and knocked on the door. Geet sat on her bed thinking actually worrying about him, kya karna hai? etc,'

Geet:- haa beta,.. ayiyena

Ankitha came inside and sat beside her.

'Maa aap thik ho?kya baath hai maa, aap itna pareshaan kyu horahe hai?

Geet:- kuch nahi choti,mai Maan sir ke tabiyat ke baare me soche rahi hai.

Ank:- maa,.. unkeliye aap itna pareshaan honeka kya jarurat hai?unki puri family hai unki saath, wo rakhthe hai unka khayaal.

Geet:- hum sirf isa soche ke chup nahi baitthe hai na choti, tum bhul gayi,humai family ke liye ye kitna kuch kiya, khaas kar tumhe wo kitna help kiya inki wja se hi aaj tum maa banne waali ho, bhulgayi.

Anki:- nahi maa,..mai bhul nahi u,per maa aap bhi dekhana, unki maa ko hum pasand nahi hai, wo kaise ,kaise baath karrahe hai usdin.ise me hum kya karsakthe?

Maa,.. mai jaanthi hu,.. aapko sab ki baare me chitha hothi hai.. aap hi itni acche .per maa,.. sir keliye puri family hai,.. per hume,' hume aapke alaawaa aur koi nahi hai maa agar aap ko kuch hojathe tho hum kaise jii payenge maa. Aap humare baare me bhi sochiye, she laid in geets lap.

Arpitha came inside and ,choti tum kyu maa ko pareshaan karrahi ho, maa,.. aap unki baath math suniye, aap jo achha socho wahi kariye, hum aap ko nahi rokenge. Aap wahi kariye jisse aap ko khushi milthe. Hume sirf aapki khushi chahiye maa,.. aur kuch nahi.

Aur choti,.. ye kya baath karahi ho tum , mai ne tumhe kya kaha? Ye saare baath chodo, tumhare liye tension lene acchi baath nahi ,.. kaha thana maine?

Prasant came with dishu inside, he sensed something, Kya hua? He asked.

Ar:- kuch nahi aap fresh hoke aayiye mai aap keliye chai lathi hu.

Dishu ran to geet and pushed Ankith fr. Geets lap saying"ye meri nani hai,tum hato mai baithungi nani ki ghod me"

Ankitha wants to tease dishu" ye meri maa hai,mai soyungi meri maa ki laps me" and they started to fight making all laugh.

Precap:-Geet in Mansion.

[Guys very less response, yaar nobody bother to just hit like buttons, me dipressed, guys please do hit like buttons, and commt as they encourage me ,.. please]




link for part-100: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89996702�

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww yeh sam toh cheap ladki hai..magar maan ki tabiyat aur bhi bigad gayi uske wajaise..but por geet she's worried abt maan & maan is so worried seeing geet pareshan...loved the update dear waiting for next continue soon!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
geet n dishu went to hospitam n met with maan n all...
after discharged maan didnt recover that much...
all r worried...
geet's daughters r worried for her ...
loved it...
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geet is already fall in love with maan but not accepting it because of her family and age..hope the became maaneet soon...wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry sorry sorry sorry I am busy else where so late ho gaya
Part 96 se padhna baki tha. Story is progressive well
Geet dishu ko lekar maan se milne aa jati hai aur do. ki baat sun kar dukhi ho jati hai maan se naraj ho jati hai maan manane ki koshish karta hai. Wow!!!!
Precap 😉 Awesome
Plz update sooonnn
Thanks for pm
Waitinggg for part 100

Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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hmm Sam is trying her ways to seduce Maan but aisa kaise ho sakta hai...bekaar koshish kar rahi hai...

Maan tou Geet ke pyaar mein bandha hai...

Geet is so worried for Maan because he is not recovering fast that she even snapped at her daughter...

precap---Geet will go to KM to see Maan...how will those 3 witches behave with her...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

now a days u r updating very late...is everything all right...




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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
geet worried 4 maan
n blaming his carelessness
loved dishu n ankithas cute f8
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haa guys now a days i am very irregular for two reasons
1 is the low responses fr. u guys , i dont know wat is ur pblm, thinking that u guys r not satisfied by my middle age love theme,its very depressing me causing to blok my imaginary power, i struck up some where.
2 is my system is under repaire fr,long i updated in my daughters lappy last two parts. it will not be [ossible for me to get it frequently as mt daughters project work. lastfew days not in town, thoda busy hu looking matches for my elder one, all these r taking toll on me,
.the most worrying is the low responses some r not even bothering to hit like buttons.how can a new writers like me can ger encouragement?
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-7/part-100/15/08/2013





https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3524536
Part : 100

Guys with all ur support and encouragement i crossed 100 parts. Now celebration time. Can i at least expect congrates fr. u all? And thanks for ur co-operation and bearing me with my all crap. Happy 100 updates. I congratulate myself.
And here is the 100th part:-
Maan laid on bed thinking about geet,How much worrying about his health,kitna pareshaan horahi hai ye mere liye,kitni gumsum hogayi,.. kaise muh banake chaligayi?kya ye sab pyaar nahi hai?tum kyu kuch nahi bolthi geet?Ek baar,.. sirf ek baar kahdo mujhe se ki tum kitna pyaar karthe ho mujhe, kitna chahthe ho mujhe, mai tumhe kabhi nahi chodunga ,humesha mera saath rakhunga tumhe geet. Kyu rok rahi ho apne aapko?tum mujhe chahthe ho geet, ye baath saaf saaf thumhare chahre pe dikhraha hai geet,.. sirf ek baar kahdo geet. Isa kya hai geet jiske wajese tum apne aapko rokrahi ho?please geet bathao mujhe. avona mere pass mai tumhare bina nahi jii saktha geet,tum meri zindagi bangayi ho geet,.. and he is thinking like that when his cell rings, seeing geets name on it he smiled and answered it.
Maan:- Hallow geet:,..
Geet didnt say anything. He understood she is still angry on him so,..he
Maan:- haa geet mai thik hu,.. dinner kiya, aur davayi bhi liya aur abhi mai araam karraha hu koi kaam nahi karraha hu. he waited for her reply and then continued,.. mai thik hu geet,jaldi thik hojaunga, apni khayaal rakhunga, tum itni pareshaan math ho. geet still didnt gave reply
"Abhitak naaraaz ho?
Geet didnt give reply to that but simply said goodnight to him and disconnected the call.
Maan:- lagtha hai bahut pareshaan ho rahi hai, kya karu?
Annie and Arjun r in their room
Arjun:- Annie;,.. kya sochrahi ho?
Annie:- Arjun;,.. kya mai bhai ki khayaal acchi tarahse nahi rakhrahi hu? kaha kami rahgayi meri khayaal me? bhai ko kyu nahi jaldi ilaaz nahi horha hai?
Arjun:-Annie:,.. ye tumhari galathi nahi hai,tum kuch kami nahi kiya,. bus ye jiju ki manki haalath hai,.. wo "di" ko bahut miss karraha hai, uperse unki safty ke baare me bhi wo bahut pareshaan me hai, tum nahi dekha? wo kitna khush hai aaj di ko dekhkar. Unhe unki jarurat hai, wo unke bina nahi rahsakthe. Hume jaldi kuch karna hoga.
Annie:- per Arjun,.. hum kya karsakthe? kaise hum ye baath ko aage badhayenge? mujhe bahut darr lagraha hai kya hoga ?
Arjun:- meri khayaal se hume pehle Prasant se baath karna chahiye, pata lagayenge wo kya karna chahthe hai, Di" ke baare me wo kya chahtha hai, aur Arpitha, Ankitha kya chahthi hai, ye sab jaanna bahut jaruri hai,.. kuch bhi karne se pehle, baad me sochenge hum. mai kal Dev se baath karunga, aur hum dono milkar prasant se baath karenge.
Annie:- thik hai, shaayad ye thik rahega,.. just i hope every thing will be perfect.
Next morning 7.a.m.
Annie:- came to Maan with his soup and meds. Chaliye bhia ab aap aapki soup pilijiye aur davayi lelijiye
Maan is in very bad mood since yesterdays night after talking to Geet he felt more helpless feeling her worry through out night he didnt slept And moreover he was fed up this soup and diet. He is so used to Geets hand cooking. He want it now...Annie;,.. chodo aaj mujhe bilkul bhi man nahi hai ye peeneka.
Annie:- isa kaisa bhai,..? aap jaanthe hona aapko khana pina time pe karna hai davayi ka bhi time horaha hai.
Maan:- snappingly bhhad me jao teri davayi me thag gaya hu sun sun kar mujhe nahi chahiye ye sab.
Annie:- bhai ,. agar aap isi zid kare tho mai bhabhi ko ph. karke aapki shikayat karungI.
" Koi jarurat nahi hai"
Both Maan and Annie turned their faces towards the voice. Geet stand there in the door.
Annie:- Bhabhi;,..
Maan:- Geet;,...
Annie:- Bhabhi ,.. accha hua aap agayi,dekhona bhai mujhe kitna pareshaan karrahe?
Geet:- Mai jaanthi hu Annie ye isa hi karega isliye mai aayi hu, kyu aap isa zid karrahe ho? aap ne suna nahi dr. ne kya kaha?
Maan:- Geet tum yahaa kyu aayi ho?, maine mana kiya na? he feared seeing her here, agar Pammi dekho tho wo again kuch karthe Geet ke saath,..
Geet:-kyu nahi avu?Agar aap isa hi kare tho mujhe anahi padega. kya kaha aapne aapki khayaal rakhthe, dekh rahi hu mai kitne acchhe se aapki khayaal rakrahe ho?
Maan:- Geet,.. please tum yaha se chali javo isse pehle kuch hojay.
Geet:- mai kahi nahi jaaungi. aur aap phikar math kijiye ,maaji ko mai samalungi. Mai unhe samjhaungi. unse baath karlungi. Aap chintha math kijiye. pehle aap ye soup pilijiye.
Dev entered the room and said,
'Bhahi bilkul thik kahrahi hai, accha hua bhabhi aap agayi ab bhai ki tabiyat jaldi se jaldi thik hojayega.
Maan:- Dev;,.. ye tum kya kahrahi ho?he was hell worried for geet.
Dev:- bhai,.. aap phikar math kijiye mai huna mai rahthi hu ghar per aur bhabhi ko kuch nahi hone dunga. mujhe per yakeen kijiye.
Maan didnt say anything one side he was happy that she came to him another side worrying for her.
Geet:-- chaliye soup pilijiye, she tried to feed him he rejected saying no geet ye acchi nahi hai.
Geet:- thik hai mai abhi jake kuch aur banake laathi hu, she started to go to kitchen
Maan nahi,.. nahi,.. tum baahar math jaa, mai yahi piyunga,.. maan said hurriedly to avoid her to go out and he gulped all of it in one go.
Geet:- Arree,. aree dheerese itni jaldi kya hai?
Maan:- look mai pura piliya ab tum khush ? tumhe baahar jane ki koi jarurat nahi .
Geet:- thik hai,.,.. davayi lelijiye, she gave him meds.
Arjun came inside room seeing geet"di" aap kab ayi? surprised and looked at Maan worryingly maan also looked at him same.
Geet:- bus thodi der pehle,
Arjun:- lekin, di,.. aapko yaha ana nahi chahiye tha.
Dev:- Arjun rehnedo, bhabhi thik kiya bhai ko unki jarurat hai, hum haina hum samalenge.
Geet:- Annie,.. tum jao aur b.f. karo mai rahthi hu inke pass
Arjun:- Nahi di,.. unhe kuch tests karwaane hospital jaana hai khaali ped me ,he looked at Maan like how can go leaving Geet in mansion.
Geet:- tho jaona, mai huna mai rakhthi hu inki khayaal, tum log befikar chaliye Annei ki health bhi important hai.
Annie:- per,...
Maan:- kyu tumhe school nahi jaana?
Geet:- mai ne half day leave liyi, mai lunch ke baad jaungi school.
Dev:- tho thik hai Arjun mai huna mai aur bhabhi rahthe bhai ke pass tum log jao.
Arjun looked at Maan like is that o.k.?
Maan noded to o.k.
so they went promising him to come soon.
Geet and Dev sat near Maan have normal chat about his health etc,... then dev went to get b.f. for them geet fed Maan Dev went to take baath.
Geet looked at him saying, ab aap thodi der sojayiye,aap kal thik se soyinahi aapki aankhe bilkul lal lal dikhraha hai.
Maan:- nahi geet mujhe neend nahi araha hai
Geet came near him sat very near him on a stool and kept her hand on his forehead, saying , aap bahut thaki hue dekhrahe ho,.. aap ko sona hai, ankhe band kijiye she told him slowly threading his hairs. He felt he was in heaven, her closeness and her care her pure love that was oozing out fr. her every single act made him feel content. Slowly without knowing himself he drifted to deep sleep.
A peaceful sleep which only can experience by any one when they feel contented and satisfied. Having her so close is his longest desire which was fulfilled now.
After he fell in deep sleep Geet took her hand fr. his hairs and go to the draw where all meds kept . She checked once is every thing. o.k. all the meds r there ,she find some r over ,she noted their names Dev came to the room. Till then no one came to maans room to enquire about his health among the trio,.. nahi,.. pammi,.. na sameera,.. no naintara. Geet felt wondered subhase koi nahi aya to look after him perticularly when Annie is not in home ,Agar inhe kuch chahetho?kaisa pariwaar hai?she remembered Ankithas words, "unki saath unki pura pariwaar hai" she chuckled in herself.
Geet:- Dev these r meds we have to bring . Dev took the note and said o.k. bhabhi i will go and bring them in 10 mts. Geet sat there looking at Maan Nakul came to her asking wat to prepare for lunch to Maan Geet thought to prepare herself as Maan is still sleeping, by that time he wake up she will finish cooking. So she said that she will prepare lunch
Nakul:- per mam aap muje batayiye kya banana hai,.. Annie beti mujhe kaha ki aapse puch ke bananekeliye aap kyu takleef utharahi ho, mai banaunga.
Geet:- its o.k. nakulji,.. mai khud banaungi and she went to kitchen to prepare lunch.
Here Dev took meds .and abotu to return ,when he got a call fr. Aadi saying some foriegn investors came to meet the owner of k.c. as they want to invest in their company. its a very big deal which this k.c. is opting to take over, they just want to meet the owner once.
Dev:-- per Aadi,.. thum jaantha ho na bhai is wakth nahi aapayege,. unki tabiyat thik nahi haina?
Aadi:- I know sir isliye mai aapko call kiya u can attend the meeting sir u r also one of the owner. just for 2hrs sir after that u may leave.
Dev dont know wat to do? he never attend any meetings as he never interested in business secondly he ill not leave geet alone at home.
He called to k.m. land line . Nakul lifted it.
Dev:- Nakul bhabhi kaha hai? Nakul:- wo kitchen me hai,.. Maan babu keliye khana bana rahi hai.
Dev:- ghar me baaki sab kaha hai?
Nakul:- sab baahar gaye hai koi nahi hai.
Dev:- thik hai bhabhi ko bulao.
Nakul told geet and she came to the pho.
Geet:- hallow dev.
Dev:- bhabhi a small pblm hai and he told everything wat adhi said, and asked her wat to do now?
Geet:- tho javona mai huna aapki bhai ko dekhne keliye waise bhi wo ab soraha hai tabtak aap ajayenge meeting finish karke.
Dev:- r u sure bhabhi?
Geet:- haa,.. i am dam sure i am o,k, dev kaam tho important hotha hai dev aur itna bada deal hume chodna nahi chahye. aap mereliye chintha math kijiye mai sab samalungi.
Dev:- ji,.. bhabhi mai jaldi ajaunga.
Geet:- thik hai she kept the ph.





Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Congrats for the 100th part. Love the story and have misses reading it the last few days and was glad to see the update this morning.

Loved the part especially their concern for each other. Really wish dev and Arjun do something soon.

Very scared of what's going to happen to get now that all have ,eft her alone at home. Maan is sleeping too. Am sure the trio are going to harass geet big time and do something to her

Waiting eagerly for next update

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Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

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Posted by: NilzStorywriter

8 months ago

Something About Us- MG || (Part 50|Page 50)

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

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Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part 24 on PG 46 / 29-6-2025

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

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Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

The Lost Prince MG FF Updated P 36 on Pg 60 / 2-7-2025

Introduction As I already told you that I am going to write period fiction... So here is it... Let's see how is the response. That will decide...

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Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

Th#3 Sauda- part 44/pg70- 28 may

Prologue sauda means deal... . kissi ke Armaano ka sauda... kissi ke khawabo ka sauda... . . . humne toh kiya tha sauda pyaar smjhkar... par nhi...

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