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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all congratulations for scoring century in ur FF😉 the journey was so beautiful dear the middle aged people's love was shown by u & it was so unique.Loved every update dear.

Coming to this update..wow geet is still angry with maan & maan is quite good in manofying his geet😉 but poor maan he's accustomed to geet's cooking & he wants that only..so everyone left the KM & geet made maan to sleep..but no one is there in KM except maaneet..now what happens..waiting for next & update soon😃 Loved how geet took care of maan!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update...

aakhir Geet Khurana Mansion mein aa hi gayi...

she was so angry...she didn't talked to him...

aww Maan saari raat so nahin paya kyunki Geet ne baat nahin ki...

Geet is surprised that no body from that ladies party--his mom, sister-in-law, and claiming would be wife didn't came to even see him...how he is doing...how he is feeling...is he taken any food or not...is he taken any medicine or not...when they claim to be his near and dear ones...it shows how close Maan's family is to him...they claim to be his when they need money...

yaar itne dinno baad update mat do...please update fast...we know that u have problem in getting lappy to update but try to update...u don't know how much I wait for update and very surprised that from some days u are not updating ur FF...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear😊
geet angry on maan😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Congrats for 100th update its celebration time👏👏👏
Geet ka ruthna...maan ka manane ki koshish karna...loved it!
Maan ki care karna...,sulana...,khana banana...geet kitna karti hai...
Ab ghar main dono akele hai...😛😉
Dev aur arjun ko jaldi kuch karna chahiye
Waiting for next
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-7/part-101/17/08/2013



Link for previous parts--https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3524536


Part-101

The trio,pammi, naintara and sameera r in return to mansion fr. Beauty parlour.Naina tara got a call fr. Somewhere she moved ahead to them and talked .

Ph:-------------------------.

Naintara:-Kya Maanji us bitch ke ghar me security rakhwaaya?

Ph:----------.

Naina:- Body guards bhi rakhwaaya,unke peeche, ye Maan ko kya hogaya?

Ph:---------.

Nain:- kya Maanji ko patachalgaya ki ye murder attempt mera plan tha?

PH:-----------.

Nai:- thik hai hume aur bhi saavdhaan rakhna hoga.

PH:----------------------.

Naina:- thik hai hum kuch aur sochenge us bitch ko kya karna hai, mai baad me tumhe ph.karungi.

s.t.:- ye Maan such me uss geet ke diwaana bangaya. Uski peeche body guards rakhwaaya. Thik hai mai hi dekhthi hu, ab wo kaise use bachapayaga meri haath se.

Naina went to Pammi.

Naina:- Dekhliya mummiji, Maanji ne kya kiya?

Pammi:- kya hua?

Nai:- Maanji ko humari plan patachalgaya ki hum uss geet ko murder karneki sochelia aur wo unki peeche body guards rakhlia aur uski ghar me security rakhwaaya.

Pammi:-Ye Maan bahut jyaada importance de raha hai uss manhoos aurat ko. Use pura unki sir per bitharaha hai.

Naina:- hume ab kya karna hai mummiji?

Pammi:_ Hume ab kuch aur nahi karsakthe, hume kuch din wait karna hoga.Accha hua Maan ghar agaya, ab uss bitch yaha nahi aapayegi? Hum kuch sochenge Aur Sameera maine tumhe kya kaha aur tum kya kar rahi ho?Maan ko kise bhi tarah apni jaal me phasaneko kahatha na? tumne kya kiya?

Sameera:-Mai kya karu buaji, Maan mujhe apni pass thak nahi anederaha hai, mujhe se baath bhi nahi karna chahthe hai, isme mai kya karu?

Pammi:- Tumhe kuch bhi karke unhe phsaanahoga sameera kuch bhi karke , aur tum kya kar rahi ho? Kamse kam uski seva bhi nahi karthe ho , kaise wo tumhari wash me ayega? Tum uski khayaal bhi nahi rakhthi ho? Itni badi model ho, mard ko kaise patana tumhe nahi aathi? Uss Geet ko dekho,. Siklo kuch use, is umar me bhi wo kaise Maan ko patgayi? Use uski aage peeche kaise ghumathi hai? Sikhlo use.

Nain:- Is me sameera ka koi galathi nahi hai mammji ye sab us geet ki chaal hai Maanji khud usme phasathe hai.

Pammi:- Ab, wo ghar agaya ye aurat yaha tho nahi ayegi, tho tum uski phayida uthavo sameera. Accha mouka hai ye.

Naintara:- wo sab o.k. mummiji,.. ab aap bathayiye hum is geet ko kya karna hai?

Paami:- Maan is wakth uss geet ko jyaada importance derahe hai,tumbhi dekha na,.. wo mujh se bhi dur rah rahe mujhe bhi avoid kar rahe, agar is me hum se kuch galat hua tho maan hamesha humesha keliye mera haath se nikal jayega. Isliye hume kuch din chup rahna hoga. Maan ke saath acchese pesh karna hoga,patchup karna hoga. Baad me dekhenge. Ek baar Maan meri baath maanker sameera kesaath shaadi kare tho sab thik hojayega.

Nai:- Ye phir se sameera ke shaadi keliye soche rahi rai, mujhe nahi lagtha hai isa kuch hosaktha hai, Maanji uss sameera ko kabhi nahi shaadi karega, mujhe hi kuch karna hoga. Isa karna hoga ki ek hi step me ye dono pblms khatam karna hoga.

And the trio came to mansion and lead to d.table for lunch.

Geet came out of kitchen after preparing lunch for Maan. She is about to go Maans room.

All the trio looked at her and shocked "Tum" all exclaimed at once.

NAINA nd Sameera rushed to her asking, "tum yaha bhi agayi?tumhari himmat kaise hui, yaha aneka? How dare u?

Pammi:-kyu ayi tum yaha? Tumhari itni himmat? Seedhe seedhe ghar tak pahunchi tum? Kitni besharm aurat ho tum? Kitni baar kaha maine tumhe ki meri bete ko chode do?javo yaha se?

Naina and sameera hold geet tightly and trying to drag her out of the house. They r ready to kill her.

Geet stood straight crossing her arms on her chest looking confident,

"Chodo mujhe, mai yaha Maanji ki khayaal rakhne keliye aayi hu Meri baath suno, mujhe kuch nahi chahiye,.. Aap is tarah mujhe bhagake Maan ji ko kabhi nahi haazil karsakthe, aapko meri baath sunna padega agar aap jo chahe wahi hona chahiye tho.

Pammi:- kya,..? kya kahna chahthe ho tum? Mai jaanthi hu ki tum kya kahthi ho, yahi haina ki thum Maan ko chodnewaali nahi haina?

Geet:-Nahi,' Mai aapko help karna chahthi hu, mai aapko waada karthi hu ki mai Maanji ko sameera ji ke saath shaadi karne keliye manaungi. Mai Maanji se baath karungi aur unhe shaadi keliye manaungi agar aap mujhe yaha ane dethe tho.

Pammi:- kya,..? tum Maan ko manaoge? Kaise? Aur kyu tum isa karna chahthe ho? Kya phaayida hai isme tumhe?kya chahthe ho tum?

Geet:- Maaji,' har kaam , har log phayida keliye nahi karthe?Maanji mere s.i.l.ki boss hai, unhone meri jaan bachaya,aur wo meri family keliye bahut kuch kiya , mai unki haisaanban hu.Aur mai unki haisaan chukana chahthi hu. Mai bhi chah thi hu ki wo shaadi karke settle hojaye. Khush rahe, ye hai meri phayida. Mai unki khushi dekhna chahthi hu, isliye maikuch bhi karsakthi hu chahe wo kitna mushkil kyu na ho, mai karlungi. Aur mai apna waada jarur nibhaungi.Aap hi kah rahe hai na ki Maanji meri baath nahi talsakthe, wo meri baath ko kitna maine dethe aap acchi tarah jaanthi hona?

Pammi.s.t.:- ye thik kahrahi hai, maan unki baath jarur manega aur meri pass aur koi raastha bhi nahi hai ab. Ye khud agayi humari help karne keliye, kyu nahi iska phayida uthayenge? Aur isse isthamaal karke mai meri manmaani Maanse karwaungi. Ye apni aap meri kabje me agayi,ab mai isse nahi chodunga. Mai jo chahtha hu wahi isse karwatha hu. Shikar khud shikari ki jaal me agayi, ab mai use meri manmaani pura karudungi.

"Thik hai mai tumhe is ghar ko anedungi, Maan se milne dungi lekin "on do sharat pe"

Geet:- "do"

Paami:- Haa,.. do,. Ek tho tum Maan sameera se shaadi karneka manwaana, jo thum khud offer kiya aur dusara, mera beta Vicky ko thum jailse chudwana hoga maan ko thum manvana padega Vicky ko chudvane keliye.

Geet:- kya,..? wo kaise hosaktha hai? Vicky ek gunegaar hai use jail me hi rahna hoga saja bhugathna hoga.

Pammi:- wo mera beta hai, use ne jo kiya sse mujhe koi pharak nahi padthe hai, bus tum Maan ko Vicky ko chudwaane keliye manana hoga. Agar tumhe ye sharat manjoor nahi hotho tum kabhi nahi Maan se milnahi sakthe aur khabaddaar tum ye sab maan ko bathayetho mai tumhe sou sou ankhe se dekhrahi hu.

Geet stunned hearing this.how can I tell Maan to release Vicky? Mai ye kaise karsakthe hu? Kya sochega wo mere baareme. Meri waje se hi wo use jail bhijwaaya ab mai ye kaise kahsathi hu?

Pammi:-kya sochrahi ho tum? Bolo? Tumhe manzoor hai yaa nahi?Ye tumm dhyaan se suno. Maan tumhari waje se hi sameera ke shaadi karnese inkaar kardiya. Mai tumhe itni aasaani se nahi chodungi. Meri ghar me ye saari pblms tumhari waje se hua hai. Tum kya soche rahi ho? Kya mai tumhe chodungi? Kabhi nahi. Ab tum apne aap meri help karne ki kaha acchi hai, tho lo sharat and pura karo apni kaam aur humesha humesha keliye Maan se durr chalijao, warna mai tumhari puri family ko barbaad kardungi,.. Tum, tumhari bachhe, s.i.ls aur tumhari pothi kisiko nahi chodungi, sab ko is dunia se chutti karwaungi, samjhe tum?

Geet got panicked hearing that threatening fr. Pammi.Nahi,.. nahi,.. maaji,.. aap meri bacche ko kuch math kariye use kuch math kijiye, mai aap ki sharat maanthi hu. Mai maanji se baath karke Vicky ko jail se chuwaaungi, please aap meri family ko kuch math kijiye. Geet felt helpless and she was now hell feared about her family . don't know wat to do?

Pammi: ye sab tum per depend hotha hai. Agar tum mera ye do kaam pura karsakthe tho mai tumhari family ko kuch nahi karungi, nahi tho khabaddaar,.. sochlo tumhari pass aur koi raastha bhi nahi hai, tum yaha aasakthe ho, Maanse milsakthe ho aur mera kaam bhi karsakthe ho? Kyu?Manzoor hai?

Geet ko kuch bhi samajnahi araha hai,. Ek taraf Maan and his health dusere taraf her family,..

Ek sec. she thought about her family and want to go away fr. Maan. But her love for him which she herself dont know stopping her fr. Going away. She stood baffled by turning of events.

She thought first Maans health is important she gave importance to him than her family.

Pammi:-kya hua? Itna sochneki kya jarurat hai? Tumhari pass aur koi raastha nahi hai?

Geet:- o.k. I will do ur work ,but I want some time.

Pammi:- time?per kyu? Kitna?

Geet:- Maanji ka haalat kuch acchi nahi hai, unhe thik hone me wakth lagtha hai aur ise haalat me unper jyaada tanaav dalna accha nahi hai.Aap jaanthe hona unhe ek aur month lagega thik hone me.Jab tak wo thik hone nahi mai unse baath nahi karpaaungi. Kisi bhi tension unki sahat keliye acchi nahi hai.

Pammi:- thik hai,' tumhe ek mahine time dethi hu . Per uske baad ek aur mnt bhi nahi dunga. Agar tm apna kaam nahi pura kardiya tho pata nahi mai kya karsakthi hu. And khbaddaar tum humari sharat ke bare me Maan ko bathaya tho, sirf maan ko nahi kisi ko bhi nahi batana.

Geet stunned by the whole events.

"Ye kya hua? mai kya karna chahthi hu, aur yaha kya hua? Mai tho Maanji ki sahat ki baareme soche kar maanliya is shaadi ka sharat. Per inlogone kaise musibath me daldiya mujhe.kitna ghatiya log hai ye. Jabardasth Maanji ko haazil karna chahtha hai., aur uski manmaani Maan ji se karwaana chahtha haai, aur iskeliye mujhe isthemaal karna chahthe hai. Kaise mai Maanji ko in logonke beech chodu?wo bahut acche hai, unhe acchi ladki milna chahiye, jo susheel ho. Annie thik kahrahi hai Sammera Maanji keliye sahi nahihai.Iske saath Maanji kabhi khush nahi rahsakthe. Mujhe kya karna hai?

Ek taraf meri pariwaar,;.. kahi ye use kuch kiya thio? Mai nahi ji paungi? Agar meri bacche ko kuch hojathe tho,'kaise bachau mai mer bachjeko,is ghatiya logonse?

Geet felt feared dipressed suddenly her world became upside down. She was feeling low, she lost all colours fr. her face tears flowing out of her eyes like rain. She sat there rooted not any strength to move fr. There.

She is worrying for her family , but not at all thinking to leave Maan and go away fr. him as pammi said. Not at all one time her heart is saying that to leave him, instead it more and more warning her not to leave him.

Its her love on him stopping her fr.going away fr. him .even though she don't understand that as love she is not at all ready to go away fr. him .Perhaps she had accepted him as her family long back in her heart.[remember she said do,..do,.. khushiya anewaali hai humari family me]. That may be the reason.

PRECAP:- REALLY DON'T KNOW,.. DEPENDS UPON UR RESPONSES.

Guys till this part I thought don't know howto lead the track here on wards I sqweezed my brain took too many days to think and finally came to 3 plots in mind and confused to select the track so I want to go for voting. Here I am giving my thoughts.

1.Geets turmoil, how to save maan and her family,'.some knock jokes and cute fights between them,.. little romance,' if possible a kiss this time both in their sences,..leading to Maans confession of his love to her,,'etc,'etc,..

2. same as above up to little romance,'.Maans complete recover,' geet trying to say about marriage to sameera bur every time something came between,' maan wines best business man award,' party ,' sameera insulting geet,'maneet passionate dance,' geet got angry leading to maans confession etc,.. etc,'

3.its little bit easier,' same as above up to cute fights and Geets self talk,.. expressing her care worry on him and about her family,'thinking Maan is sleeping but Maan hears every thing and knows the truth etc,'

I fist thought to follow the second one but now changed thinking that I am dragging as some of u want to move fast, but my prefereance is still 2nd one

U guys can vote whatever u want I can follow the track which wins maximum votes . i will give 1 week time, please send ur openion as early as possible because I have to write and then update in i.f. thank u very much.


If u guys have better track please let me know if posible i can fallow that track .

Link for part-102

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=93951879&#p93951879

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear😊
how can geet do this with maan😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
I don't want Maan 2 know any thing this soon
N its high time geet realize her love 2wards Maan
Plz do not sidetrack the main plot of the ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
geet cant do dis 2 mann
go wid wht u ve planned..
ur perspective is most imp

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update..i think i go with your choice 2nd..pls cont soon..

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