Arjuhi OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye (Completed) - Page 9

Di you changed my mood 😃

Lovely work Ana:)

ana di...

Ana, Just completed reading and will give detailed review tomorrow...it is EXCELLENT...👏

thank u so much jaan for dis lovely romantic os

love da theme..its so pure and romantic

u realy.captured da pardesis love tale very well

in.pt.2 ..love hw aru was all.shy in gng infrnt of hm

3 saal buht hote hen!!!!

love each deir little guestre

aur ye joint family kbhi.nhi sudheregi

hmare asia ka to yehi haal hai


pr aru is lucky to hv ds lovely dewar dewrani

DJ bhi itni biri nnhi thi pr thikhi thi

aru.se zyada to.mjhe sharam aa rhi tbi

u rely very well.capyuted deir emotioms

unki choti se mulakat room.mn..was so.sensational


khana khilane wala scenee is tooo cite


da best part was gauri rani..ginally naukrani..

Haha..i lobe u ana fr dis amazing gft

gauri.ne arjun ko bhai bola...god kitni baar padha mene

and dn...i was lost in jeaven

kya romance likha

m still blushing

and deir morning talk.was so cute

over all beautiful os

one of my fav...

Keep uo da gud word

jeep writing


and i too agree..zyafa din reh nhi paugi ;)

Loveee u

Ana, The update is worth reading again...am telling again...have all your work saved on my laptop to read them again...👍🏼

Wow that was really good. Their separation </3 heart breaking but I loved how you described how much it hurt for them. Arjun's consoling was so cute I was imagining how he would console her. Hehe. This is seriously beautiful. Please don't top because I lie your os's I'm not lying I have every single one of your os saved on my favorites. Please never stop!! Writing cause you write amazing