Arjuhi OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye (Completed) - Page 8

woahhh u made it soo so gud
i was mesmerised by thier convo jbki mai kabi is typ k update me convo pr dhyaan hi ni deti lol lil besharm i'm ;)
jb gauri ko arjun ne oye kr k bulaya i laughed lyk hell maza aagaya...jese kbka badla poora ho gya hehehe
ur update made my day sachhi muchhi
btw i wont force u to write in ramzan bt shadi me se tym nikal k kuch na kuch likh hi dalna cuz its nt ur wedding hehehe
will defo miss ya
luv ya <3

read it in the morning n straight away went to arjuhi dreamland

oh ana, that was a fantastic one

Kya batau partner
Tumne Jo likha he uske liye alfaz kam pad rahe he !!!
Wow dadi did everything to convert her mind
You know I feel pain when Arjun open his wardrobe n look his things n Thot about arohi :( it means arohi everyday clean up his things like he is present there
Aweee only 4 months to gather ;( you are so cruel
She feel newly wed again
Aah muje bhi arohi ke khule bal Pasand he
I can imagine his fantasy , Arjun hold her behind n memorize her touch n curves ,
They wanted to talk lots of but their bodies need overpower them !!!!
But when she asked " ab to nahi jaogeee " the fear n innocence visible on face
But after she quickly agree to go with him whenever he take her , so selfless love
Distance always increase love n importance of partner
Hats off ,
This os is most beautiful os I have ever read till date n I will store it in my heart forever
I read it already 5 times dear muahhh

wow its grt os plzzz plzzz plzzz try to update soon...its fab yar i lov it...i lov it from my core hrt...lovly...plzzz pm me whnever u update...

This was really touching... how did Arohi survive these three years??? Because I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have!!! This is why I say never fall in love!!!
Loved all those sweet moments between Arjuhi... they indirectly feeding each other n those stolen looks they sent each other's way... Arjun's desperation to be with Arohi n Arohi's hesitation or say all those pent up emotions are so beautifully portrayed by you... it was so intense!!!
Amidst all this intense, deep, emotional n teary story you made me laugh with Gauri's foolishness!!! Really she thought Arjun would call Rajji to take out his things??? K... she defines dumbness!!! Arjun would have killed her if she had continued her stupid questions!!!
A brilliant os di...
P.S. Di I'm sorry if I hurt you through my comments... I try to give long comments but sometimes I'm unable to n other times I'm plain lazy!!! But I promise from now on I'll always give long comments!!! 😊

last part was WOW👏

It was so beautiful...so pure..so innocent. totally in love with the whole family members specially the MIL of aru is best..so caring n loveble..she is dream sasu maa of every girl. Dadi is lil kharoos but still cool..but m seriously love u di for making gauri naukrani... Arjuhi's pain of separation is so beautifully written..their romance or reunion was so pure..it touched heart.. lovely os di..love it. n sorry for earlier one liners..

read all ur os till now u write each one absolutely with out any resemblance except arjuhi loved all th ones n coming to th present os it is different from any other story i read loved arjuhi n their efforts to b together its just awesome