Arjuhi OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye (Completed)

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Arjuhi_kk

@Arjuhi_kk

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I cant wait for a week:( mai to abhi twtr pe is os k lyrics gaa rhi hu:p ph se lamba wala comnt is not possible fr me...kal pakka long comnt (wid full emotions) karungi plz updt soon...ab aur doori bardasht nhi;(

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

sheikhu...
tumhara comment on liner hi hai baby... :(

n anjali...will surly wait baby for tomorrow...

and vigi...tudsi v one liner... :(

hunh...
(dekho main 2nd bar gusa ho rahi hoon...
usually mujhe farak nahi parta kitna lamba yaan chota comment hai...par is bar bari shiddat se farak par raha hai...

jayu n mahi saying hum comment nahi karain gayn...
n jo karing, o sub on liner...

bus ye os one line main define hai tau main v end pe aik one line laga deti hoo
THe END ki...

agay khudi soch lo kia kia hoga is arjuhi nay...:(

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

kal 100 word ka comment likhungi...u hv to update

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Super Duper Adorable update 👏👏 👏 👏

Every time i think this was cutest but your next immediate write up made me change my view and claim it. i always end up feeling bliss whenever i read your writing 👏 👏 👏 you are Awesomeee ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Thanks a ton Aani for this. sometimes i really feel i cant thank you enough to share this beauty with us. life wouldn't have been fun without it 😃 THANKS A TON 😊

Finally lambi judaai end ho gayi 😃 Arohi's restlessness of meeting love of her life. infect her life was about to over in few hours 😊 her waiting for him constant gaze on door making everything ready for Arjun 😊 everything written so beautifully 👏 👏 it directly touched me i could feel every emotion portrayed here by you. 😊 Daadi i dont like her but Arjun's Mom is so sweet loved her the warmth, the care in her words were so real as if its for her own daughter and not for her daughter in law 😊 Rajji is cutesie too the way she teased aru and planned everything she made her go change 😊 Arohi's dress was amazing i loved that Pure panjaban look 😊 Finally Arjun come but yeh kya puri city aa chuki hain us se milne 😛 😛 yeh rishtedaar itne impatient kyun hote hain bechaara taras raha hain biwi ko dekhane ke liye lekin itne logon ke saamne kaise aayegi woh baahar LOve Abhi and Rajji haayeee hamare tadapte lovers ko milwa hi diya finally. that moment that hug and kisss ...it was pure Blisss 👏 👏 👏 i dont have words to write about the moment bus itna keh sakti hu my heart was smiling with that it was sheer Bliss. 👏 👏

Lastly the best was Guari 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Kaamwalibai 😆

cant wait to read next 😃 please jaldi post karna 😊

love

Pranjal.

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Halaki muje next part chahiyee par comment kiye bina nahi reh payi !
The way arohi sitting on the stairs n waiting its so painful , n rajji I live this girl
Every time she gave news to her ,
Aate hi dono ke dil dhadsk rahe the , bechen the , tadap rahe the n finally their wish come true , I can understand in middle class family still difficult to meet couple forwardly
The way he hug her n tears fall from her eyes it's so romantic but insidely so painful
" Lagta he ab sans aayi " omg humara Arjun to English babu ban Gaya
Wese next update me takiyaaa jarur rakhna ( wink wink )
And haye Arjun ki tadap
Ye os ab tak ka the best os he mene para usme se , I have no guts to critics it n judge it cuz it's out of my mind n hand
How could someone write so beautiful , simple yet pure but with passion ?
Thnks partner for beautiful os m waiting for next update pleases ke it long
4 bar par chuki hu aor ab bhi naya aa lag raha he ! Puri rat sapno me thi ki ab kya hoga
Jaldiii update dooo

Last but not least the amazing part of this os is gauri rofl muahhh for this

Edited by cooljaya11 - 12 years ago

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Aha humari dhamku rang layi
Chalo ab sidhe se next update do warna m gonna kill u

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MyshaAlvi007

@MyshaAlvi007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

hili8 of dis part is GAURI :p
i luv u ana 4 dis lol barso k armaan poore ho gae gauri wo b maid lmao ;)
abhi-rajji aese inlaws to sbko mile dey r lyk angel
nd arohi omg d way she waited him on stairs nd after every sec his eyes were glued on entrence was so touchy
"ab ja k laga k mai zinda hu" ye to mujhe i luv u se b zada romantic laga
luv dis update