story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25 - Page 2

nice start dear.. Loved it.. Thanks for pms..

Wow nice story
Waiting to read more!!!
Cont soon dr!!!

Unres ! Pg 2
ab 2nd update do jaldi🤣
now now

Originally posted by: bgargate

Unres 😊

This is comment is for u Pari 🤗

For the story:

Beautifully developed the concept 😊 ...

A dhamakedar start to a superb story 😉...

Bhai-Behen ka confrontation was perfect... jaisa akdu bhai ... utni hi ziddi behen 👍🏼

Pranav Rai - iske rang abhi dikhne baki hain... so will wait for the next parts ...😉

Papa Rawte gusse mein...

Bhai ki marzi ke khilaf shadi to ho gayi... ab khel shuru hua hai...

Continue soon 🤗

Thanks a ton for shaping this concept in a beautiful way... 🤗

And Thanks for mentioning my name and liking my choices of actors... I hope Payal didn't force u to use them 😉

(maine apna credit le liya 😉😉😉... i'm so evil 😈 )

Now something just for you dear 😊

Finally tumhari Didu ne tumko fasa liya 😆😆😆

I'll share a piece of crap with u... jo Payal ne mujhse gunpoint par likhwaya tha ... isi concept par...aur maine gusse mein aakar... Payal ko torture karne liye... is concept ko barbad kar diya tha...😉😉😉

And thank god ki maine usey aagey nahi badhaya... 😳

Warna Payal ki band baj jati 😆 (wo to mai waise bhi Baja sakti hoon 😉)

Because coming from you, this is more beautiful... I simply loved it... looking forward for next part 😊

Love u 🤗

P.S.: Don't say thanks for the link... Happy to help 🤗

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Welcome back my golden angel and didu 🤗 with another master piece 😉
don't talk abt DUA ! Missing that very badly

coming to this one! Again a very different concept didu and words portrayed by you is fantastic! 👏
so arjun just cane there for her and she didn't even listened him
this story is gona tough also!
Both for payal and arjun as well
and he, i mean KVB! 🤔
really involved with sik 😡
hmm this is gona a suspence and action thriller story ⭐️
loved it! And others too will love it!
Thanks for the double PM 🤗🤣
best of luck 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Unres ! Pg 2
ab 2nd update do jaldi🤣
now now

unresed my both comments on Pg 1

HEY DEAR
THNX 4 THE PM AND WOUNDERFUL PART
LOVED IT
FELT BAD 4 BOTH ARJUN-PAYAL
DIS TYM I HOPE ARJUN PROVES TO BE WRONG OTHERWISE PAYAL'S WHOLE LYF WOULD BE DESTROYED
FANTASTIC MYSTRY KEPT
THNX 4 SUCH A GREAT PART
LOOKING 4WARD TO GET THE MYSTRY SOLVED
CONTINUE SOON
AND SEND U THE BUDDY REQUEST
THNX ONCE AGAIN
WAITING 4 NEXT UPDATE.

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

HEY DEAR
THNX 4 THE PM AND WOUNDERFUL PART
LOVED IT
FELT BAD 4 BOTH ARJUN-PAYAL
DIS TYM I HOPE ARJUN PROVES TO BE WRONG OTHERWISE PAYAL'S WHOLE LYF WOULD BE DESTROYED
FANTASTIC MYSTRY KEPT
THNX 4 SUCH A GREAT PART
LOOKING 4WARD TO GET THE MYSTRY SOLVED
CONTINUE SOON
AND SEND U THE BUDDY REQUEST
THNX ONCE AGAIN
WAITING 4 NEXT UPDATE.

Amazing guys,just loove it,nice CS and update...do continue👍🏼🤗