story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Both payal and pari dr clap 4 u both 👏

Big teddy hug to u both🤗

Now come on update

It is wonderful ,outstanding ,superb,amazing,fantastic

Payal feel bad 4 her

Poor Arjun who did no do something

Payal blame him no u hurt more Arjun

Update soon

Ps: I am less active bt nw I will not come on if 4 august and September so plsss pm me I will read and comment on it

Once again Thanx 4 pm me u both pp :)

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

😊awesome start👏

waiting 4 next update😊

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice story ... plzzz continue soon ... 👏🤗😊

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DesiiiDivaaa

@DesiiiDivaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nice start 😊
Thanks for the PM 😃
Continue soon 😊

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Another Brilliant idea once again..
Arjun and Payal..brother and sister
Payal getting married to Arjun's enemy..
Arjun couldn't stop her, even broke their relation..
Is Pranav really a murderer?
Payal married a murderer?
Curious..
Curious and curious..
Can't wait more..
So update next part soon..
Waiting for it:)

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

it was nice update loved it ..

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Haleemah

@hal96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Wow yaar

Amazing start

The brother n sister fight

Jitna ziddhi bhai utni ziddi behan

Update soon

Want to know what happens in their lives

😊

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

superb starting payal..

welcome back with a bang..

please make it an ariya one

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hi pari n payal🤗... first of all title 😃 i loved it👍🏼... and then payal tere bhaiya ke liye tera pyaar jhalak raha tha😃 sach me payal raute was so sweet😃... but pranav is a wrong guy and payal got married to him... arjun ki behen bhi usse door chali gayi😭😭😭...plz update soon 🤗

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Superb and amazing start.
The concept is very unique.
Bro-sis confrontation was awesomely portrayed.
Payal married to the murderer of Roshni...
OMG...
Please continue soon.
Loving the suspense element.
:D

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