CHENNAI EXPRESS...(KR &SS FF)chap 5 updatd - Page 9

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Nuce one love it krisha to kisise kam nahi he

thank u..yup wo dono kisise kam nahi hey...

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

veryy nic nic update...

i loved it...

plzzz continue...plzzz

thank u ...

happi dat u liked it

yup will contnue...😊

Originally posted by: anjali22

awesome update

thank u...

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Superb update . . .
Loved it. . . . . . . . . . . .
Wow. . .krisha and dat matki wala part was superb. . .yes. .girls ko kabi kam nahi samjhna chahiye. .
At last reyum reachd chennai. . .
M excitedly waiting 4 d KR meet. .
Update d nxt part son. .

And thanks 4 d pm. .:-D

thank u ...

yes grils kabi bhi kisi se bi kam nahi hey...aur kam samj bhi nahi chahiye...

will update it soon...

and no thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

superb update..
Loved it..

Bt i expect some tamil dialogues..

thank u..

i also wanted to add some tamil dialogues but due to few resn didn't add them...but in next update i will added some for sure...😃

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

superb and fabulous chapter 1 was amazing... do continue soon and pm me...

thank u ...

will cntnue and will defo pm u ...

Originally posted by: -spongy-

superb update yaar

simply amazing

loved it renu

loving krisha a lot ❤️

it was jhakkas and fabulous

waiting for the next chappy

update soon

thanks for the PM

thank u ishu...

will update it soon...

and not thanks abt the pm...

Originally posted by: trisha19

Awesome update!!!

waiting for the next part...

pls update soon...

thank u..

will update it today if posble...😊

Originally posted by: sumimita

!st chappy was really awsome..

loved it..

thnks for the pm

pls update it soon...

thank u ...

glad that u people liked it...

will update it today if posble...and no thanks abt the pm...

Ch2:THE PHELA PARACHEYA

hie guys am back tho last part mera intro tho hogaya and the part endng when we reachd chennai..tho i think u people are waitng to knw what happnd next so tho chalo i will tell u ..hum swayam ke ghar poch gaye..it was an huge house of olden times... with olden art on the pillar and it was really an beautiful house there was an beautiful gardn too ..i jst love the place..it was fully filled with village atmsphere..befre we entr in their house swayam's chachi came with an aarthi taal like thing and strt rotatng it in frnt of us in cnfusn i askd swayam abt this and hesaid it is to remove bad eyes on us.soon she was done with that and we entrd in to the house there was big hall and two stair cases wch lead to a side way ..there comes a man dwn the stair case..looks like an person of his later 40's ..seeing him swayam rush and hug him .."APPA(father/dad)"he shutd while hugng him ..and later he intrudc me to him and i touchd his feet and he blessd me and went out of the house and i ask swayam"hey swayu ye kyon hey?"."ye meri appa hey" he repld,"appa matalab?"i askd as i don't knw there lang "oh god ..he is my dad yaar "he said in little bit irrtd tone."swayu saappadu sapittiya?(did u have ur breakfast/meal?)"his chachu askd us."illa(no)"repld swayam .i was not even able to undrstnd anythng..i askd swayam wat was he saying and he made me undrstnd wat he said.then his chachu ordrd us to go and frsh up and we did as he said.later me and swayam sat in hall and i was read a magzne thank god in there house atleast englsh magzne were alvble..and swayam was busy in convo with his chachu and chachi . aftr that he came sat beside me and askd his chachi "ah chachi where is chinna(kriya)?","avankellam kovilluku ponnaanga(they went to temple)"she said and went into kitchn and brught breakfast for us and i have to say she was really an grt cook the food was really vry delius..soon the we had our lunch and came out of the house but jst then two gals were comng in one of the came rung to swayam and hugd him as tght as she culd and shoutd"anna..Eppadi i rukkinka? "(bro ,how are u) ,"naan nalla irukkinren ..nee?"(am fine how abt u ?)

soon his sight shift to the other girl and both saw each other and strt smile like mad people and lost in each others eyes..it was brokn by the gril who shutd frst "i am also here" she said followd by fake cough swayam gve an light hit on her head and both of them (swayam and sharon)were blushng ."vanakkam sharon(hello) " swayam finally spoke to her

"vanakkam..Eppadi irukkinka? ?(hello how are u ?)"sharon repld him

"nalla irukkinren...(fine)."swayam said

lo muje yeha akela chodi kara wo vaha apani majnu giri me busy hogayahey..gosh muje hi isi log mujehi kyu milthehey yaar...i was feel hell akwrd as i was new to the place ..and the cherry on the cake was that here no one undrstnds my languge...oh tab muje lag me yeha kaha pisgaya yaar...i was lukng here and dere to remove the akwrd ness in me...so i strtd to listn the convo of MR majnu ji and his laila...but sad thng is dat i was not evn able undrstnd what they were talk but trd to get it...but jst then i felt a hand tapng on my shldr and i trund to look the most beautiful gal i have evr seen..she was looking so awsum in her halfsaree and the wind was playng with hair wch wer set loss in the air .. i don't knw who she is...as i didn't undrstnd anythng from there convo.i thnk wo meri manju ki family membr hihey i thnk so...i gve her a smle..."yar nee?(who are u? )"she askd me with a smile on her face...but well i didn't get wat she wanted to ask me..so i said"well .. i didn't get what u askd we as am a non tamilan..would u mind tell it in englsh or hindi?" i said all in one go." oh kk sorry i didn't knw that u r a non tamilan..i jst was askng that who are u and what are u doing here?" she said ."well am.." before i culd cmplt swayam come in b/w us ."hey chinnu avan naa nanban rey thana (hey chotey ye mera frnd rey hey )" he said to her."oh apadiya( oh i see)"she siad to him."and rey ye meri choti sis kriya hey "he said to me intrdunce her sistr to me . "oh hello miss kriya' i said extent my hand for a hand shake but she joind her hands and said "namastey" i think villge grls don't even give a hand shake to stngrs and then he intrudce me to sharon and i said"hi sharon"i said gvng my hand for a hand shake but his time swayam pulled my hand back as i don't want me to touch her ..oh god this is called heghts of possveness.. in mean while his sistr to left the spot ."ne poa"said swaym to me ,"what?" i ask him with a cnfusd look😕,"arey tu ja "he said."kaha?"i ask, "kamreyme , i wil come there soon.."he ordr me and i left the place with disgushng look on my face.and i was romng in the corrde and i was in my thught that how am i gng to live in such place where people don't even undrstnd my lang ..but suddnly i dash with an female body and she was abt to fall and all the books in her hand fall down and she clsd her eyes in fear of fall and was holdng my shrt tghtly

she was the same grl whom i meat out side the house its swayam's sistr ..i must say she was looking dam cute..and i was wondrng how perfctly she was fittng into my arms as it was spclly made for her only ...i was jst lost in her beauty... she opnd her eyes and we share and LLHH for few mins but son she made her slef strght movng away from my arms.." thank u and sry "she said and took her books and left but i was still her effct ... her eyes her lips her cute was still flashing in my eyes.. i was jst lost in her...

well agara aapko nxt kya huva ye janahey tho apako next update thak wait karanaho and like karakey cmmnt karana mat bulana..because agar tum log like aur cmmnt nahi karogey tho renu cntnue nahi karegi .. ...

tho precap me tum log mehamarey manju aur uska laila ki childhood rmnce key baremey bolunga aur uskey sat sat bohat kuch hobatvunga so stay tuned...

tho me chalatha hu ..cu people in next update

so guys i knw i have said it will be in hindi and all ..but i also said that i will use it wen ever tamil is need and aslo sanjana(sanju_arsha)said that it wuld be bettr if i add few tamil dialgs am addng them hope u guys like it... i knw its not upto the mark .. pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...and for pm's add me... i have pmd only those people who are in my buddy list..

luv,

renu