Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 110

Thanks di really feel glad you like my comments n well gong thru small tiny thing sit has so muake me ch much significance n depth tht i learn n grow with it as said ear;lier.. n seriously never want to feel what aarti n yash has yet wish to meet ppl alike them .. thats the magic of your words you make me feel n relate to the fiction as much as it is real tht sometimes my vulnerable emotions took over n i start writing wat ever comes first n sometime when i re read its very silly later honestly .. but you make it so worth after your revert tht just make me smile

Thanks again n always be it sparsh n samarpan for showing different world different ppl still sitting in corner of my home

Tc.. n god bless you n your loved ones too

Originally posted by: maha9

awesome simply superb part dear 🤗

so cute of arthi and payal... they r so perfect as mother-daughter...

yash along with them for a cute family... finally their hug was so so sweet ❤️

everything is perfect but this naina is bugging me dear. she loves yash but wants to get away payal...

thank god arthi saved payal from the hurt... seriously the connection between yash and arthi is so cute dear... and I am so happy that arthi came to know of naina so that's he will not assume wrong things...

Originally posted by: RA17

Thanks di really feel glad you like my comments n well gong thru small tiny thing sit has so muake me ch much significance n depth tht i learn n grow with it as said ear;lier.. n seriously never want to feel what aarti n yash has yet wish to meet ppl alike them .. thats the magic of your words you make me feel n relate to the fiction as much as it is real tht sometimes my vulnerable emotions took over n i start writing wat ever comes first n sometime when i re read its very silly later honestly .. but you make it so worth after your revert tht just make me smile

Thanks again n always be it sparsh n samarpan for showing different world different ppl still sitting in corner of my home

Tc.. n god bless you n your loved ones too

Ch 19

You know di wat i stil feel good even after hearing aarti talking abt bitter past is coz she is opening with human emotions which are devoid by her n all know arouse in front of yash who can see her anger, cry, , insecure, vulnerable completely as mostly she use to keep it everythinh with herself

sab apne aap mein sab kuch samet lena be it anything happens but now she shouted i meam its really the very same aarti who use to speak silence

N yash omg he is such a sweetheart i love the way he distract her n making her all blush hayee

Your scolding hasn't changed me into an ugly alien."

Nice as in here (pointing at his face in a circular motion) or as in here (poking his chest on the left)?"

Wow but i just wonder as aarti told abt 3 years back interview call did yash can relate tht too or not????

N then yash saying all destiny n spl one

A beautiful jagjit singh song comes in mind😳😳

Meri aankhon ne chuna hai tujhko duniya dekhkar
Meri aankhon ne chuna hai tujhko duniya dekhkar
Kiska chehra
Kiska chehra ab main dekhoon
Tera chehra dekhkar
Meri aankhon ne chuna hai tujhko duniya dekhkar

Really i never thit this wil be coming soon but with current conditions yash has to rush as you said earlier warna aarti madam sameerji ki wifey ban jaati n yash again reh jaate mr kuwara baap soory i want to write bechara but come up with this😉😉

N really then the depth which yash felt in aarti words r n much more clear by gayatri n how she just linked the day aarti born n held yash hand as the soul mate connection n yes they r meant to be n wat makes me adnire mire abt gayatri she did not forget to check abt payal comfrt with aarti👏⭐️

N😲 prateek i still feel bechara how he has to ensure everything goes fine n smoothly being youngest in family i know scuh big thing sscare us n we feel more coz of our love ones happinees is their responsibility👍🏼

N finally NM is happy n aarti back to work n payal kissi reminds me of aarya intial days in show befor ansh kept pin to hit yash on right target n here payal n angel asking aarti a kiss for her papa .. chjo chweet cute😳😳

So AARYA is one her happy way to go for picnic n P is cooking up .. sounds interesting as i am now not thet scare for NM n aarti as yash is around😊 bus i hope nothing goes wroing in between yash n aarti coz of this evil P😡

Originally posted by: RA17

Di can you answer this i am jus t wonderig

one thing is ist mr balsara need to go out n that is one of the reason he had yash meeting on Sunday😳

Originally posted by: InduG64

Exactly Ria...Mr Balasara scheduled his meetings for Sunday because he was going to be out of town.

Thanks a ton for another lovely feedback. *Sigh* You had to mention Jagjit Singh. He is one of my most favorite singers of all times. I just love his songs and ghazals. The lines you mentioned fit so well here. Love you for feeling the emotions as I do...🤗

Ch 20

That what makes me falli in love with your yash who cracked the inner walls instanctly which was made inside aarti in such a long period of time

Jealousy n a pride of owing him as his own (which was not said but visible in her words) n yash thinks too make it more louder but alas our aarti dint give him a chance

An ideal picnic mumma , papa n angel n how chweet to see birds coming n taking seeds oh its actually a visual delight which is becoming more interesting as the story progress from samarpan cover aarti did( or i shud day you did) to this one really breathtaking visuals you create

….a pure soul instinctively recognizing the purity of the other.

Chweetest one as i smile thru out n even forgot to write comment as it is such a blissful aarya moments tht nothing comes in your mid except the smile yash linked journal, story n then saviour angel n payal statement n they slept feeling warmth, peace n contended n yash slip of tounge or is shud say dhadkan ko juban mil gayi throughout our life

Ajay wow amazing they meet n catch eac other yet miss each other n never got caught as they will soon but this time forever hai naa

N then much needed celebration n yes that indeed is beautiful

Well itna happy happy moments keh baat yeh to banta hai n as P intentionw wee not hidden b loved the eay still NM kept her faith inatct n ask yash not to ignore but aarti is this reason which in initail chapter yash n NM talk n he felt he made her feel worse is it?????????????