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KamliKudi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just realized I had read some bits of this before and then I forgot to keep up lol

I love this story Indu. I'm on part 12 now :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Hey Indu ji... 🤗 As usual, back to do the thing I'm extremely excited to do.. 😉, continuing my reading on Samarpan.. 😃


Great update! 👏👏 Part 19... I'm relieved and happy after Yash succeeded in calming down Aarti and the way he tried to revert her mind to other topic ! And also he succeeded in asking her to wait till the very next day before making any further decision for the marriage...! 😊

Another point which made me smile is Yash talking to Gayathri while he revealed everything about Aarti and so she as well sharing some story about Aarti ! 😊 Yay! He wanna marry Aarti.. 😃 😉


Lastly, haizz... Very much relieved once the house matter is being resolved! 😃 As planned, good Job done by Pratik and also Mr. Balsara for convincing and bringing smile on Aarti's and naanimaasi's face! 👍🏼 Plan is successful... 😉

Payal, Aarti and Yash together are very adorable! 😳 Smell someone bad at the end! 😡




Part 20 was a very lovely part ! 👏👏 Ahaan.. Aarti burning in jealous when Mansi tried to be good to Yash especially after she puts her hand on Yash's! 😆

Hailaa.. their moments together were very precious! 😳 😃 Yash was admiring both Aarti and Payal.. 😳 I could imagined all the scenes well.. Beautiful ! 😃 But feeling bad for Aarti once she began to questioned herself about her dad when he saw Yash and Payal together!


Scene changed! 😛 Aarti admit she liked to be closed to Yash.. !! Wow.. the story followed on with a beautiful story from Aarti.. ❤️ Loved every bit of their moments..! 😊 LOL.. Yash had to be more careful ! The sorry and Throughout our life.. 😛 😉

It seemed everyone in the house got well with Payal..! 😃

Prashant.. The evil is back and now he is to revealed about Yash's identity! 😡😡 Yes, the truth revealed and it seemed it is still okay for naanimaasi as Yash had further explained to her.. but something is definitely gonna be wrong for Aarti-Yash! Oh no, how she will react about Yash's truth? 😲 😕


Stopping here although I'm very eager to know next.. 😛 Will continue reading soon! 😉 Thanks for wonderful updates of Part 19 and 20... 👏👏 🤗




Hey Isya...I am so glad you came back to the story. I am so loving reading your and Ria's reviews of a phase that we have already crossed.

Thank you so much. Waiting for more...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Ch 20

That what makes me falli in love with your yash who cracked the inner walls instanctly which was made inside aarti in such a long period of time

Jealousy n a pride of owing him as his own (which was not said but visible in her words) n yash thinks too make it more louder but alas our aarti dint give him a chance

An ideal picnic mumma , papa n angel n how chweet to see birds coming n taking seeds oh its actually a visual delight which is becoming more interesting as the story progress from samarpan cover aarti did( or i shud day you did) to this one really breathtaking visuals you create

'.a pure soul instinctively recognizing the purity of the other.

Chweetest one as i smile thru out n even forgot to write comment as it is such a blissful aarya moments tht nothing comes in your mid except the smile yash linked journal, story n then saviour angel n payal statement n they slept feeling warmth, peace n contended n yash slip of tounge or is shud say dhadkan ko juban mil gayi throughout our life

Ajay wow amazing they meet n catch eac other yet miss each other n never got caught as they will soon but this time forever hai naa

N then much needed celebration n yes that indeed is beautiful

Well itna happy happy moments keh baat yeh to banta hai n as P intentionw wee not hidden b loved the eay still NM kept her faith inatct n ask yash not to ignore but aarti is this reason which in initail chapter yash n NM talk n he felt he made her feel worse is it?????????????




Thanks Ria...

About your query in bold: Yes. When Yash comes to know the complete story of Aarti's past, he feels extremely guilty of making her go through moments of distress and that he did not trust her. Trust was always an issue for Aarti...Over and above that Yash imposed his insecurities on her, even though it was not for long. He could never really forgive himself for judging Aarti on the same lines as those other females.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KamliKudi

I just realized I had read some bits of this before and then I forgot to keep up lol


I love this story Indu. I'm on part 12 now :)




Thanks for continuing the journey...Glad to retrace with you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
been eagerly waiting for the next part.. when will we get the pleasure of reading the next chapter???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

been eagerly waiting for the next part.. when will we get the pleasure of reading the next chapter???



Hi Princess...Part 26 onward is in Thread 3. Here's the link: Thread 3

I have been trying to pm you, but some error shows up.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ch21

Its really scary to see aarti shocked n again on silent mode n yash on guilt ride but glad they both have NM as their anchor

Well she is mature woman tht truly reflect is last chapter when she ask P to leave n make yash speaks n alas.. Destiny has already intertwine their strings to each other which amaze us or NM

N really NM wants yash to speak tht AARTI is the one for him or she really dint understand hmm

Yash must be restless thta how a poor pure soul can bear so much pain n wnworthy people in her life n then hopw is something which keeps us going.. n her nightmares.. only tell him how true he was yash there is hope as aarti speaks of him

This aarti is actually shocking to each one of us.. how many shades if life she has hidden under her

She address yash as mr schindhiya, ignore him n disappointment but not fro him but then payal n her girls outing which i know will not as yash will be joining soon n yes he di aakhir yeh dil hai naa

N sameer admire the lady who stood out n gave him new direction.. hats off aarti

N ganesji really bless their child the duo who has been motherless but in a way aarti got radha maa n later NM n payal as aarti

N then again tadaa the met in the most cutest filmy way n she cluthes the dirt .. d ii just love how you makes us link few intial chapter aarya habits or covo to the updates coming to ch20

N finally she spoke her mind n heart our but yes he is the one n only one to whom she speaks n yes she is Aware of yash but sho is exactly mr schindhiya will come back may br by this weekend to abt him with aarti perspective

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ch 22

The quote you used is actually so true that we always say we are fine but r we

Aarti is actually an agel , innocent n simplicity r her virtues n we all thit in generate tht we forgt to focus on big issues rather than simple logic of living

N they two ppl peaks their heart out as nothing can b e more eternal n bliss n sort out the difference m peace surrounds around n within wit warmth love care n concern spreading across

Aarti yash child woman

n then yash bein yash sayin my lady,, our princess n later hmm girlfriend oh di this is so magica so aarya n NM n payal muaaahhh angels aarya angels

so after food treat n then aarti t needs her mother but direction r not yet right but no worried yash is there to take care of it hai naa

Dubey shradh ,, yash being her strength n let her dive down in pool of emotion n taking her out in the world of smile. Peace n joy

Aarti again spoke being selfless soul about welfare of her true friend yash but yash will tell her soon the real depth of a relation which she will not lay out herself as you mention she is innocent like payal nt have guts for herself..

Indu di as the story heading towards i don't know but a smile n peace suddenly come across to me.. you chapters i re read n comments r still doesn't satisfactory for me

N confusions which i had initially has gone by itself

A warm hug to you to say those unsaid words n undescribed feelings we share

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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm back to read although I'm little tired.. 😳 I'm very eager to know what's next...



Part 22 was beautiful ! 👏👏 I understood Aarti's dilemma once she knew the truth about Yash but Yash justified and explained to her in an honest manner that made Aarti to trust him once again... 😃 I could feel the connection they had ! 😳

And finally, Aarti think about Payal's mother and decided to ask Yash about her...

Wow.. I loved the entire kitchen scene ! ❤️ The friend VS girlfriend.. 😳 So cute ! 😉

The shanti puja.. I feel too bad when Aarti broke down but I could smile when I found out Yash is beside her all the time.. 😃 Yash decided to bring her for breakfast and yet, another surprise awaiting them ! But my heart went for Yash once Aarti asked him about Payal's mother.. And as expected, Aarti requested Yash for remarry again.. 😛






Part 23... awesome ! 👏👏 Giving five stars for Aarti for not giving up and non-stop asking Yash about the remarry issue! 😛 Our boy is too angry until he gave her a sweet torture! 😳 Loved the romance ! 😳

Oh wow.. They had headed for their vacation and Aarti-Payal are observed by Yash ! 😳 Finally, the book issue came out ! 😛 Just loved the minute when Yash get to know the book was Aarti's ! 😃 Nice poem, Indu ji.. 👏👏

Loved the scene of Prateek- Aarti and Payal ! I was eager to know about the place too.. 😛
The moment Yash sneaked in, they started to exchange some teaseful words.. 😛 But Yash agree with Aarti under one condition... 😲





Part 24...Oh ji... What had Yash done? 😛 He asked Aarti to find a girl , a mother for Payal.. 😛 But the condition had rather been good to Aarti... 😃 Yash is right, Aarti would have to realize what she meant for other people..

The way Yash took her to show her the mountain.. The story is inspiring ! ⭐️ And love Yash every single words to her.. ⭐️ Confused Aarti asked a question to Yash about the girl he might liked.. It seems Aarti would have to wait to know some truths..

Naina made an awesome entry.. 😛 Her closeness with Yash is slowly being disapproved by Aarti.. 😛 😉 Pity Aarti.. She really felt alone when Naina came and took Payal and Yash away from her ! 😭😭

The poem is nice.. 👏👏 And Yash of course.. Would always want Aarti ! 😳 Hailaa.. morning romance.. The glance.. All was dreamy ! And naah.. Naina came in again !

Uncle Chris trying to be charming to Aunt Anna and finds for her some flowers ! 😳 That's so much love! 😳

Yash tried to tell Aarti about her misunderstanding.. but he failed! Oh re..Too bad!

The fire on Payal's book caused Aarti to burst her anger on Naina when Naina told Payal the book only had normal drawings! 😲 But I so love Aarti's words! 👏👏 I had tears in my eyes for the very last scene of this part... Aarti couldn't let Payal owned a pain like she had gone through... Beautiful Indu ji.. 👏👏👏




I'm speechless as I am going through all the parts till this.. Brilliant and Stupendous Indu ji ! 👏👏👏 Loved it.. ❤️

Stopping here.. Will continue in some other days! 😉
Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64



Hi Princess...Part 26 onward is in Thread 3. Here's the link: Thread 3

I have been trying to pm you, but some error shows up.

OH NO!! i have been eagerly waiting.. adn there was a new thread..
wow.. thanks for sharing the link.. i have 4 parts to catch up on now.. glad i asked on this thread.. would have never known otherwise..
will respond there after i read the 4 parts.. take care

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