SwaRon/TanHa OS ~Paradise~ - Page 4

plz write one more swaron os or update ur swaron ss !! waiting to read another of ur writings :)

i love u yaaar

BaZ kuch tho update kar yaar, missing it 😭

i loved it. i hardly read any swaron works [forgive me for that, not a big of swaron ofcourse.. anyway] i simply loved it. and i guess it perfectly suited on them. :)

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Baz Im probably reading this OS for the upmteenth tym. This was the first OS that I ever read on SwaRon and with this one I was introduced to this awesome place Indiaforums. :D I love this OS lyk crazy. ...aww I am really glad u like this OS so much...The passion and intensity this OS has is just splendid. Loved the story plot. Normal fi8s to hamesha hoti rehti hai. But this one had a serious fight where both the persons were seriously hurted. Where one didn't mean to but ended up hurting the one she loves the most. Brilliant beggining.😊 I loved the morning prt where Sharon cums to Swayam and was cutely apologising. I luvd how u added Hariprasad here. ...yes, I loved him and always felt he could have been more useful in the drama...The pain that u have wirtten both wre facing is amzing. The prt wre Swayam doesnt eats the dinner cooked by Sharon nd then Sharon crying nd telling him to open the door. This part alwys gives me shivers. This ws simply outstanding! ...Thank you so much...means alot...Their reunion cudnt hav been in a btr way. It ws beautifully written.. ...thank you once again...I luvd how they cried their hr8s out in each others arms.. The beautiful dance. I luvd the portion wen Sharon was luking luvingly at Swayam wen he ws applying medicine on her hand. The story ended wit beautiful kiss and a beautiful morning where they are again together and in each others arms.. Love this OS to the core. U r gifted with brilliant style of storytelling Baz! This OS was completely magical. Wonderful work...thank you so much for those kind words...

thank you so much for such an amazing feedback Uzma...loved it <3