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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww that really was cute Shahi.
Liked the ending :)
do write more on abhiya :D

BTW, thoda proofread kar lena...grammer etc...you know :P
otherwise it was excellent. :D

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

this was just fab...loved it!!! 👏but change RK to abhay in one part ...in starting😆😛keep writing more on abhiya😊

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Diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

"She laughed while RK made weird face
saying- "I mean I am missing her"
@RED: abhay 😊
its b'ful jst lik a dream... D journey of abhiya 4m frndship to lovers ws l❤️vly. Do write more.

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silent.desire

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Aww that really was cute Shahi.
Liked the ending :)
do write more on abhiya :D

BTW, thoda proofread kar lena...grammer etc...you know :P
otherwise it was excellent. :D

Thanks 🤗 ya I will try to write more on Abhiys. Sure thanks for suggesting and saying me my mistake.

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silent.desire

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

"She laughed while RK made weird face
saying- "I mean I am missing her"
@RED: abhay 😊
its b'ful jst lik a dream... D journey of abhiya 4m frndship to lovers ws l❤️vly. Do write more.

Thanks 🤗 So Sorry for Abhay RK mistake.

Originally posted by: flora212
this was just fab...loved it!!! 👏but change RK to abhay in one part ...in starting😆😛keep writing more on abhiya😊

Thanks 🤗 So Sorry for Abhay RK mistake. Ya I will try to write on Abhiya more.

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Janani24

@Janani24

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow nice os😊 but i felt more of rk's influence on abhay😊 may be because i read more of ur rishbala works😊

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silent.desire

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Janani24
wow nice os😊 but i felt more of rk's influence on abhay😊 may be because i read more of ur rishbala works😊

Thanks 🤗😆😳Aww dear I will check and take care of myself and will draw line between RK and Abhay while writing.. I guess I write on him more so it got reflected here too may be.

Edited by emptyworld - 12 years ago