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Originally posted by: samwllms

so sweet os shahi..."hot legs" was the funniest part...its really about only abhiya...no one else allowed..

Thanks 🤗 😆 ya hot legs was kept some fun thing... well said it is only Abhiya.

Originally posted by: Desire6

Cute lovly OS

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fab os

lvd it

Originally posted by: ..Cute_Angel..

Cute OS😊

Thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Lovely Os dear...LOve it🤗

Thanks 🤗I am happy you loved it.😃

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Very sweet OS Shahi.. different storyline and I loved abhay and Piya's friendship. u work a bit on proofreading and your writing will be PERFECT 👏

thanks for pm...

Thanks 🤗 aww its means a lot to me 😳 yes Tanzie I had started taking care about your advice.. sweet to let me know my mistake... most welcome dear.🤗

Originally posted by: maria090

lovey OS Shahi 😳❤️

Thanks 🤗pata nahin tere comment mien like kyun nahin ho raha hai but I liked your comment dear just loved it my friend.😳❤️

Originally posted by: janvie

OMG Shahi di,This OS was sho Cute and Awesome at the same time.Just Amazing.I really enjoyed and loved it alot.😃🤗 ❤️

Abhay really was a gone case in the beginning.😆Behind T's hot legs.😲 🤣

Oh My Sid was right,Abhay was born brainless only🤣It was Piya fairy who gave him brains.😉 🤣

But I loved the way Abhay realized Pia's importance in his life.😊

And Then How He made it up to her with his Tharkeypana.😛 😉 🤣

Those kisses and all made me go all ☺️ ☺️ 😆

The Engagement and dinner at Pia's house was the best part.😃Really I was astonished and surprised how Abhay already planned and arranged everything.😲 😆And Sid was also there coz of whom Abhay realized his feelings...That's Great.😃

And You describe their journey from friendship to love so beautifully di...Hats Off..Just Excellent Writing by you like always...👏👏⭐️

Pls keep on Writing more on My Abhiya.😊 😳 😳

P.S.Yet to read the new update of Dark side of love.😳

Thanks a lot dear 🤗 your long comment means a lot to me. Ya I will write on Abhiya if I get an great ideas on them.😳 Hmm I am happy you liked surprise engagement that Abhay planned.. it was added in last minute and loved you liked their journey as well and Sid -Abhay was great re infect must say Siddharth and Vivian was so great... hope to see this two actors together once again in same line of chemistry as dushman-bhai or dost.

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

Shahi, Awesome OS!!!!😊

Originally posted by: luv_rk

Its so lovely shahi...abhay-RK affection is interesting...keep continue ur best work

Thanks a lot dear🤗

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

amazing story...

i wish u write more stories on abhiya...

Thanks a lot dear🤗 and yes I will write more stuff whenever I get good ideas on them.😳

Originally posted by: Sanna14

@shahi.. 🤗
m really sorry..kaan pakad ke sry 😭
y dint u tell me abt dis os..u dedicated it to me nd m commenting sabse late 😭 m sry

Originally posted by: Sanna14

🤗 🤗 🤗 thanx a lot shahi..u dedicated it 2 me 😃
wow!..it wz awesum os 👏
luv ma abhiya 😳abhay nd piya were supercute nd naughty 😆
omg!.hot legs 😆 real wala hamara abhay kitna shareef tha 😆
their cute moments of frndship,den realization of luv nd romantic moments 😳 kiss..ish

luved evry bit of ur os😳
btw 2day i dint cry reading ur work 😆jaise tu rone dhone wali stories perfectly likhti hai waise yeh light hearted bhi amazing thi.
thanx again 🤗

Thanks Sanna🤗 aww I already told you no need to cry for it... its means a lot that you all read and comment me to encourage. Ya real wala Abhay shareef tha😛😆 but yahan he is naughty😉 and Abhiya both were naughty and cute.. ya hot legs were kept for some lol I am happy you all find it to be lol😆 I am so happy you liked their journey from friendship to realisation and love and romantic moment... aww you went day dreaming in kiss😛😆 Thanks that you loved each bit of it.

Originally posted by: emptyworld

Thanks 🤗

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red - mujhe RK jaisa chahiye real life mienthen I will dance uff.I know I will sound crazy after my confession but you know I am crazy young girl.😉

Finally meri Nidu ne padliya.😲Itna regourously padti hai tu God karien tumhien Abhay jaisa hi mile I mean not vampire part😆I know vampire don't exist but his nature and all.😳See it proves you are sweet and so you like sweet sa Abhay.(chup kar main bhi uspe drool kar sakti hoon so no need to give danda to me for this.😡After all dono VD hi hai.😳☺️)

Aww I am happy you felt like blushing reading the journey.😳😆😳

haan haan tu tere rk ko rakh mujhe bas abhay chahiye
awww thnku hope real life me abhay jaisa mile 😳 I know I know vampires dont exists 🤣 maine kab kaha u r not young girl 🤣 abhey chup kar kamini im not sweet ok 😡 n no u cnt drool on abhay he s mine bas ☺️ vd n rk b mera hai

Wow it was so beautiful loved it

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Wow it was so beautiful loved it

Thanks a lot 🤗 and I am happy you loved it.