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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

res bahut lamba hai tym lagega padhne😳
padhliya finally 😳 lovely OS shahi.
Hot legs 🤣 omg tanu abhay ki Gf 🤣 btw so sweet OS finally abhiya together
kash real life me avhay jaisa lover exist hota 😔 *day dreaming*
u showed beautifully how frndship turned into life long relationship ☺️

Edited by nidu-dsena - 12 years ago

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS. Finally Abhiya realized they r made 4 each other. Lovely ending. Do write more on Abhiya.

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

so sweet os shahi..."hot legs" was the funniest part...its really about only abhiya...no one else allowed..

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very sweet OS Shahi.. different storyline and I loved abhay and Piya's friendship. u work a bit on proofreading and your writing will be PERFECT 👏

thanks for pm...

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@--Janvie--

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

OMG Shahi di,This OS was sho Cute and Awesome at the same time.Just Amazing.I really enjoyed and loved it alot.😃🤗 ❤️

Abhay really was a gone case in the beginning.😆Behind T's hot legs.😲 🤣

Oh My Sid was right,Abhay was born brainless only🤣It was Piya fairy who gave him brains.😉 🤣

But I loved the way Abhay realized Pia's importance in his life.😊

And Then How He made it up to her with his Tharkeypana.😛 😉 🤣

Those kisses and all made me go all ☺️ ☺️ 😆

The Engagement and dinner at Pia's house was the best part.😃Really I was astonished and surprised how Abhay already planned and arranged everything.😲 😆And Sid was also there coz of whom Abhay realized his feelings...That's Great.😃

And You describe their journey from friendship to love so beautifully di...Hats Off..Just Excellent Writing by you like always...👏👏⭐️

Pls keep on Writing more on My Abhiya.😊 😳 😳

P.S.Yet to read the new update of Dark side of love.😳

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Lovely Os dear...LOve it🤗

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maria

@Maria-capri

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

lovey OS Shahi 😳❤️

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

very nice and well written
its beautiful part or piece of story

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Eternal_Stud

@Eternal_Stud

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

@shahi..🤗 🤗
m really sorry..kaan pakad ke sry 😭
y dint u tell me abt dis os..u dedicated it to me nd m commenting sabse late 😭 m sry

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Eternal_Stud

@Eternal_Stud

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

🤗 🤗 🤗 thanx a lot shahi..u dedicated it 2 me 😃
wow!..it wz awesum os 👏
luv ma abhiya 😳abhay nd piya were supercute nd naughty 😆
omg!.hot legs 😆 real wala hamara abhay kitna shareef tha 😆
their cute moments of frndship,den realization of luv nd romantic moments 😳 kiss..ish

luved evry bit of ur os😳
btw 2day i dint cry reading ur work 😆jaise tu rone dhone wali stories perfectly likhti hai waise yeh light hearted bhi amazing thi.
thanx again 🤗

Edited by Sanna14 - 12 years ago

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