CHENNAI EXPRESS...(KR &SS FF)chap 5 updatd - Page 8

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ch1:THE UNEXPECTED JOURNEY TO CHENNAI

The life was full of happiness and lively ness.no problms ,no issue,no cmplnts, no requst,no worries.my life going perfectly smooth.till the girl entered into my life..well being an orphan i useto live with my chachi and chachu ..i lost my parents when i was 4...snce then my chachu and chachi took my respnble ..not wid love on me..but wid love on my proprty... . my chachi and chachu had nevr been bad wid me.."well all thanks to my grand maa in dat matter!!!!!!!"as it was her cndtn if dey do anythng to me for de mony dey will nvr evr get the proptry...if dey want the prprty dey shld be all sweet and lovly wid me..so i nvr xprsnd any hurdls ..i have evrthng in my life... .but as sum people say life is nvr de same...well i thnk dats true..der will be atleast one big twsts in evryone's life...meri life me be ek twst ayatha...aur us twst ne meri life ko hilakey rakdi...but meri life me jeski vajesi twst ayehey wo chize bohat hi beautiful aur smart thi ..jesi muje pyaar huvatha.. wo twst ka naam "KRIYA SWAMI IYER" hey ..ye ladki meri best friend ka behan hey... es se mera frst metng tab huva jab me apani dosti ki sat uska home twn chennai gayatha hldys keliyegayatha ..metho chutiya mananey gayatha but muje kya pat tha ki meri vaha sach me chuti hojayegi?well us din tho muje abi yaad hey ..us din per unexpectedly meri journey to chennai ko strt huva tha..well apko me pura scene narrate karunga ki us din muje kise chennai jana pada..

That was the last day of our college every one was giong back to there home twn.they wer happy at the same time sad as they are gng miss eachother ...our total gang assembled in the canteen as it was our fav spot ..
"how sad it is?we all gng way for each other .."said neha in a sad tone.
"but guys hum facebook me ,gmail, haar possble way me ek dusrey si connetd raheygey ..it that okay?"said swayam my bestie..
"okay "shoutd the gang in unicon
every one busy packng their bagsexpct me as i don't have any place to go so i have be there it self with my chachiand chachu as i don't knw any one excpt them ..i was feelng really alone and sad that i don't have any place to go for my vacation.jst then swayam came and sat beside me..
"hey rey kya huva y are so sad?"asked swayam in a caring tone.
" kuch nahi dude" i repld him witha fake smile
"u can pertend befre any one but not befre me.now tell me the truth"he said
"well tum sab kithana lucky ho u have ur own family and lots of relative ..but i don't even have any one's house to even spend my vaction a."i said in sad tone
"oh come on rey...bas es keliye tu ethana worried ?..agara tum chaho tho u can come with me to my home twn " swayam said looking at me
"but swayu ..agar me tumarey ghara avunga tho tumari family member ko bura tho nahi lagegana?i said with an worried tone

"bilkul nahi ..meri family member bohat achey hey..uney bilikul buranahi lagagega"swayam said ensurng me
"sachi?"i asked withe xctment
"muchi"he repld witha smile..
"by the way swayu tumara home twn kya hey?i ask him with exctmnt
"chennai..ab jao aur packng shurukaro"he repld
well i was totally happi dat i was gng to a new place wch i have never vistd ..but muje kya patatha ki vaha merey liye ko bada si problm wait karahihey?well i total don't knw abt it..chalo ab me us problm ki intro karavthahu...
"mataki (Pot)thodo cmpttn was gng on and every who went to break were jst loos it ..no one was able to break it...
"arey yeha esa koi marad hi nahi hey kya jo es matki ko podi sakey?koi nahi hey kya?"said an person who was heldng the comptetn
"hum hey " there came female..making out there way towrd the matiki..they bothe were looking like angels who came frm heven ..both of them were wearng halfsaree's.the guys loking at them strt laughing ...
"dheko ladakiya ye ladaki ho ki das ki bat nahi hey ..ghar jakey rangoliya banavo jao "he said still laughng at them
"hello humey patha hey humey kya karana hey kya nahi .so u jst shut up aur hato yehasi"said one of the grls
"acha ..itha akada?me bhi dheka tha hu hum log kise matkiko thodi they ho? "he said challng her
"dhekathey hi rahana"repld the girl.
the mataki was pulled up and both the girls jump into the air at same time they broke the mataki from both side..and the paper and flower in the mataki fell on them revealing their face it was our very own krisha..both the girls strtd jumpng in the exctmnt and hugd eachother ...the person was schkd that who those girls had broken the pot

"dheka humney mataki thod diya ..."said kriya
"ah thodi diya lelo tumlogeneka prize money"said the person
"ajakey bat kab bi kisi bi ladki ko kamjor mat samjna..did u get it?"said kriya with full on attitude
"ji "said the person
"dheka shar hum jeeti gaye"said sharon
"ah kriyu hum jeeti gaye "said kriya with a wide smile on her face..

AT kriyam's house :

"hey kriyu swayam aaj hi araheyna?"said sharon coming into kriya's room

"ah kyu?"kriya askd her

"Wo ..wo ..ah bas ye janekeliye ki usey resv karaney koi gayaheyki nahi?"sharon said

"ah wo chachu ne kal rat ko kahatha ki wo jayengey bhai ko resv karaney keliye"said kriya

"par uncle tho hall me hihey ..aur shayad unki trn statn pe poch gai hogi na.."said sharon sittng besde kriya..

"acha tho chalo chachu janey keliye kahunga.."said kriya

they both rushd into the hall and went to chachuand kriya strtd questn his chachu abt not gng to thestatn...
"chachu ap nahi gaye?"said kriya in little bit angry tone
"ah bacha bas jarahahu"repld his chachu
"jaldi javo chachu varana bhai kud aa ajeney"replid..
"ah uncle jaldi javona"said sharon..
"oh k bacho jarahahu"said her chacha sitting his car..
scene shft:
"oh god ye chennai kub ayega?ethana time kyu lag rahahey?"i said in little bit irratd tone..
"aa jayega yaar ..chennai kya mumbai bajumey hey?..and BTW hum lagbag chennai poch gaye.."said swayam looking me..
aftr few mins..
"finally chennai aahe gayahey.."i said while getting down the trn "vise statn per humey resv karaney kon arahey?"
"meri chachu ayengey ..hey wo dheko chachu agayehey..."swayam said rung towrds his chachu and hugd him
he intrudce me to his chachu and then we three left for swayam's house...
well agara aapko nxt kya huva ye janahey tho apako next update thak wait karanaho and like karakey cmmnt karana mat bulana..because agar tum log like aur cmmnt nahi karogey tho renu cntnue nahi karegi .. ...

tho precap me tum log me kriya ko frist kabi mila aur kise mela ye bathavunga aur hamarey manju aur uska laila ki childhood rmnce key baremey bhi bolunga so stay tuned...

tho me chalatha hu ..cu people in next update

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so guys i have desd that the ff will be in hindi only no tamil ..i will use if needed..and i knw its not upto the mark .. pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...and for pm's add me...frm nxt update i gng pm only those people who are in my buddy list..

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Nuce one love it krisha to kisise kam nahi he

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Awesome update
Like it
1st chappy amazing one
Waiting for next part

Superb update . . .
Loved it. . . . . . . . . . . .
Wow. . .krisha and dat matki wala part was superb. . .yes. .girls ko kabi kam nahi samjhna chahiye. .
At last reyum reachd chennai. . .
M excitedly waiting 4 d KR meet. .
Update d nxt part son. .
And thanks 4 d pm. .:-D

superb update..
Loved it..
Bt i expect some tamil dialogues..

superb and fabulous chapter 1 was amazing... do continue soon and pm me...

Awesome update!!!