MG SS || Love In The Air #1|| COMPLETED || - Page 54

Created

Last reply

Replies

796

Views

120.3k

Users

85

Likes

2.1k

Frequent Posters

..AnushaGeet.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: x-affy-x


He got one anu surprisingly 😆



Weird, I thought it couldnt get any weirder.!! 😆
..AnushaGeet.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE

Guys, I am a bit disappointed with the likes now. I thought may be I being a new writer shouldn't crib about the likes right away, yet I cant stop my self from asking this, Why.? I know the story is kinda slow, but I cannot promise Maaneet in every scene as I need to build a bit of base for the story too.! Looking at the decrease in likes, I feel that the story is not going down well with you guys.! It initially got a wonderful response, but with each passing update, its becoming disheartening. The fault might have been mine too, the late updates but It always doesnt plan out the way I want it to, so somehow they get delayed.!
I am not forcing anyone, neither am I angry too, just asking you guys to tell me honestly if its not good enough.?? Its anyhow an SS, I will wrap it up earlier than I thought I would, with quick back to back updates.! 😊
And for those who have constantly supporting me..Thanks a ton guys..🤗

Thanks Everyone. 😊
Edited by -AnushaGurtian- - 12 years ago
..AnushaGeet.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
LOVE IN THE AIR




PART -8


Dejected, Maan left the hall leaving the happiness to fill the room. Quietly, entering his room, he picked up his file and was about to leave, when he saw Daadi coming towards him. Masking, his sorrow he gave her a slight smile, unable to control his feelings after all.

" Maan.dont try to fool me. I am you Daadi. I know you in and out, are you upset bte.? Asked Daadi, caressing his face.

" No Daadi, why will I be upset.? " he said, looking away.

" Anyway, I am late for office n I have some work. So I will see you later. Bye Daadi. " he said, and hurriedly left the room not wanting anymore questions.

He hurried through, the corridor and strode down the stairs unwillingly only to get shocked as Geet was resting her head on the Yash's shoulder, looking happy. His heart pricked at the thoughts, sabotaging his feelings. Shrugging them away and controlling his emotions, he walked as fast as he could towards the door, only to be stopped by her musical and charming voice.

" Maan.? " she called out. He unwillingly stopped and turned around to see her standing behind him with a dazzling smile. Lost in her beauty, he stared at her with unconditional love, yet he couldn't get rid of the thoughts running in this mind about Geet and Yash. Getting a cold response, Geet cleared her throat to gain his attention, that's when he snapped out realizing that he was ogling at her. Composing himself, he smiled at her.

" Yes Geet.? U need anything.? " he asked pretending to be smiling.!

" No, actually I wanted to Introduce you to Yash " she said, pointing in his direction, signalling Yash to come forward. Yash, who looked like a simple outdoor guy, came towards them hurriedly and stood their with his hands around Geet's shoulder, adding to Maans miseries.

" Maan, this is Yash and Yash this is The Maan Singh Khurana aka THE MSK " Geet said giggling in her usual avatar. Maan faintly smiled seeing her laughing whole heartedly. Despite the introduction, Maan was restless as to Geet not mentioning who Yash is. His thoughts were broken when Yash held out his hands for a handshake, shrugging off all his thoughts he shook hands with him into a firm handshake.

" Maan Singh Khurana " Maan said in his usual, MSK attitude.

" Yash Malhorta " he said, smiling to which Maan gave his fake smile. Before Yaah and Geet could say anything, Maan interrupted them excusing himself out on the pretext of some important meeting, avoiding the torture once and for all. Totally depressed with the proceedings of things, Maan decided to visit his other office in London, trying to get away from his nightmares. One thing that had him worried was Daadis reaction. Later in the evening, as Maan broke out the news to Daadi, she was furious initially but being the ever sweet Daadi, she stood by him understanding his turmoil owing to the fact that Yash was in the same city, which would result in Geet spending more time with him.

It wasn't long after a quiet dinner at the mansion, that Maan left towards his room to finish up his pending work before he leaves for London, for a month. Although leaving, but his thoughts were not ready to give up on the questions his mind was shooting at him. Who was Yash ? How was he related to Geet, were the questions bothering him the most, yet he wast brave enough to question her. His thoughts were yet again, broken by a knock on his door.

" Maan.? " Geet called out, surprising him. He smiled, granting her the permission, while she glided into the room.

" Hi Geet.! How Come you are here.? ' asked Maan, trying to mask his emotions well.

" Actually, I came to you to apologize about all the mess last night, it was way too much I know.! " Geet apologized.

" Geet.! Please, don't apologize. It wasn't your fault completely. We both acted a bit immature. " said Maan, finally smiling.

" no but, it was me who started it right.? Actually... "

" Geet.! Forget it, lets just forget that we even behaved that way. "

" if you say so. " she said looking away, noticing his half packed bags.

" Are you going somewhere.?? " she said, looking back at him surprised. Well, there he was; what was he supposed to say.? He is going away cause he can't see her with someone else.?

" Yes Geet.! I am going to London, for some work. Some important work.! " he said, gloomily owing to the reason for his sudden departure.

" ohh ? All the best, I hope you have a nice trip, and come back soon " she said with a smile

" Thanks Geet.! " Maan smiled, shocked with her last line, asking him to come back soon.

" How long are you going for.? You remember, we met for the first time on our flight to London. " she said, giving an enthusiastic smile .

" I am going for over a month or so. Of course I remember our first meeting. How can I forget that.? You were praying and all cribbing.! Adorable like always. " he said smiling, remembering the old days, while she was standing with her mouth hanging open.

" You are going for a month.?? Why.? " she asked., to which he obviously had no answer.

"Some important work has cropped up Geet. I have to go,the staff cant take care of it Geet. " he said, hiding his pain n looking away.

" Should I tell him, what I had come to tell him.? " she thought, while Maan got busy in his file.

" when are you going Maan.? " she asked expectantly.

" Tomorrow morning " he said, not looking at her, to which her face fell even more. How will she tell him now.?

" Oh.! " Was all she could say.

Precap : What was Geet going to tell Maan.? Will she now.?


********************************

Yes Guys, I know it was shortest one ever, dont worry..next one coming up tomorrow itself as I am keen on back to back updates for this one...

Will be waiting for your response eagerly.! Hopefully you all liked it 😳

Thanks 😊

Please do hit the like button and I would love to read your comments too 😳


Anu ❤️

*********************************************

PS : Please add " anuluvsmaaneet " for PMs regarding the updates.!

Link

Thanks 😊

*********************************************

PREVIOUS PART

PART 7


NEXT PART

PART 9

Edited by ..AnushaGeet.. - 11 years ago
Kkiran thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Very nicely written but omg this Maan is always coming to conclusion without hearing everything...hope geet is going to let her emotions out before he leaves!

Hanishadevi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
yaar,...first of all..this story is an amazing one..as per my personnel opinion the story is on right track..i love this story..pls dnt ever feel sad..this is your baby. we as a reader understand the writers other commitment out of this forum..i really have high respect for all the writers who sacrifice their precious updated for we type of readers..who ever dnt read it is their loss. thank you.as for this update,hope geet clarify yash status to maan b4 her depart to london..poor maan😉pls cont soon..
Pumpkinseed thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
maan leaving for london saddy saddy
hope geet wants to tell about her feelings
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
honeygrape thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...eager to kno what geet has got to say to maan...
Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
sgdgdggdgdsgaga

Aawwwee ... Maan darling ka heartbreak

But who is this Yash ?

and whats wrong with Maan ...bina jaane who that yash is he is going to london and that too for 1 month
How could you Maan ??


Ohho ... Geet apologise karring ...i thought they'll again start fighting ...lol

Ab ise kya bolna hai ...jaldi bolo Geet



Nice update anu
Edited by Craziest_MG - 12 years ago
sporthy_smile28 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Pata nahi geet k man me kya chal raha hain! !!😕
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
who is yash and how is he related to geet is also bothering me

and now wat she wanted to tell maan.. is it something about yash

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

5 months ago

MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25. MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25.

Maan Geet: Bhorer Alo – A Love That Stood the Test of Time Prologue Murshidabad, Bengal – 1904 The first time Maan Singh Chaudhury saw her, the...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed

Chapter 1: The book that started it all Maan leaned forward in his seat as the driver slowed down in front of his home. His heart swelled with...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed

Had this scene flash in my mind a couple of days ago, and I just couldn’t shake it off… It’s nothing big, just a random moment of inspiration...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".